PLEASE DONT READ THIS hello my name is vanessa gorgan. i was killed by a man 3 years ago, and now i am back to kill. if i show up in your room tonight with bleeding eyeballs and a slashed throat, dont be alarmed, im just coming to kill you. PASTE THIS ON 10 VIDEOS OR I WILL COME FOR YOU IN 18 DAYS. P.S. I DID NOT START THIS
dont wanna like put you down or anything put i have to say this totally sucked ass and it didnt even start until like fucking more than half-way thru the thing !!!
I liked the difference, the change of the mood betwwen the 2 parts. Not so special story, but this is common, especially in horror movies. Keep walking
@theardens Horror films aren't really horrifying -- if they were, they wouldn't have much of an audience :3 So most horror films are thrilling or 'cat jumps out' or go for the gross out. One of the closest to actual horror films I've ever seen is The Last King of Scotland.
I understand the concept of setting up your climax and characterizing your mom, but we get it already, it dragged out way to long.Also I agree with mankey boy about the blatancy of the line.The ending was kind of wierd too,but oh well,it was alright over all
yeah, the beginning was too long... and the first line was actually kinda funny. it should have been like, a whisper, and slower, and say "I have your baby" or something... spoken as if he had breathing problems? As in, not loud, and kinda out of breath. If you understand what I mean... the way I am picturing it, it would have been great.
But a cool idea anyway. it definitely had the right idea, and with a little improvement it could be awesome!
"I'm in here with your baby". Sorry, I had to laugh. To be truthful, it was a little bit boring, in the beginning, and I had to laugh at that first line. But the quick camera movement and the last line was pretty nice. I don't understand the ending, though.
I shot a couple short films myself and put one of em on BigYouUpdotcom, you may wanna check it out and do yourself a fava and upload your short there too
i dig the silence man... i totally get it... why did she check outside the apartment first then go to the babys room, i thought also that the voice would be a scary voice not some guy that sounds like a fuckin gay child molester
yipes, the voice is mine! she checks outside the apartment to see if there is anyone in the immediate vicinity who could help, she quickly knows what she has to do though.
great acting by the kid/ i totally get what the kid is saying/ NO mom dont build a brick tower/ NO mom i dont want to eat this shit food/ ARRR im climbing on mom/ YUM this milk goes well with my bed time story/ ok mom enough cuddles/ CRY CRY / kid talks in sleep as a grown up / snore snore kids asleep / he talks again/ OH MY GOD SUM 1 HAS ROBBED THE PHOTO AND RE-PLACED IT WITH ANOTHER ONE SCAREY
only reason it was scary was because i was waiting five minutes for something to appen and when i did i was "OH SNAP" and that weird picture at the end freaks me out
brother..dat was annoying. not horrifying.
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PLEASE DONT READ THIS hello my name is vanessa gorgan. i was killed by a man 3 years ago, and now i am back to kill. if i show up in your room tonight with bleeding eyeballs and a slashed throat, dont be alarmed, im just coming to kill you. PASTE THIS ON 10 VIDEOS OR I WILL COME FOR YOU IN 18 DAYS. P.S. I DID NOT START THIS
MMAFreaksTV 10 months ago
creepy. not a good idea to watch at 3 in morning .
Deadxbunnies 1 year ago
wow, very creative !
TheDarkAngel555 1 year ago
When I used to babysit, I was always afraid of hearing something like that on the damn monitor...
splattergirl72 2 years ago
Nice job--interesting
legionfilmsdotcom 2 years ago
It was good, don't know why it's getting slagged off,
MASSA6 2 years ago
dont wanna like put you down or anything put i have to say this totally sucked ass and it didnt even start until like fucking more than half-way thru the thing !!!
GAWproductions 3 years ago
that face at the very ending was scary though
albertiam 3 years ago
"I'm in here with your bay-bay." ...and the first place she runs to is the front door. I see where her priorities are. FAIL.
BaldAmbition 3 years ago 6
I liked the difference, the change of the mood betwwen the 2 parts. Not so special story, but this is common, especially in horror movies. Keep walking
stragalinos 3 years ago
Cool. Trailer
DanielHarper1983 3 years ago
This film sucks.
aren't horror films supposed to be scary?
Could you please email me back the time you stole from me?
kkthxbai.
theardens 3 years ago 5
Wow.
thedeadwalk2nite 3 years ago
lol@could you please email me back the time you stole from me? lollllllllllll I AGREE EVEN I FEEL LIKE I COULD'VE DONE BETTER THAN THIS. LOL
kompa2004 3 years ago
@theardens Horror films aren't really horrifying -- if they were, they wouldn't have much of an audience :3 So most horror films are thrilling or 'cat jumps out' or go for the gross out. One of the closest to actual horror films I've ever seen is The Last King of Scotland.
Inannawhimsey 3 months ago
WONDERFUL JOB LOVE IT
MEOSHABEAN1 4 years ago
I understand the concept of setting up your climax and characterizing your mom, but we get it already, it dragged out way to long.Also I agree with mankey boy about the blatancy of the line.The ending was kind of wierd too,but oh well,it was alright over all
fureiousgeorgefilms 4 years ago
yeah, the beginning was too long... and the first line was actually kinda funny. it should have been like, a whisper, and slower, and say "I have your baby" or something... spoken as if he had breathing problems? As in, not loud, and kinda out of breath. If you understand what I mean... the way I am picturing it, it would have been great.
But a cool idea anyway. it definitely had the right idea, and with a little improvement it could be awesome!
mankeyboy99 4 years ago
"I'm in here with your baby". Sorry, I had to laugh. To be truthful, it was a little bit boring, in the beginning, and I had to laugh at that first line. But the quick camera movement and the last line was pretty nice. I don't understand the ending, though.
SilentPenumbra 4 years ago
I dont get the ending. :\
cassiosaurus 4 years ago
i cant hear anything
fotz1717 4 years ago
lol this rocks! I am so going to the Haunted House this year!
xvintagerockerx 4 years ago
milf. lol gay child molester voice..
6sad6satan6 4 years ago
meh. it could have been better
764r 4 years ago
fucking great stuff,
I shot a couple short films myself and put one of em on BigYouUpdotcom, you may wanna check it out and do yourself a fava and upload your short there too
greetz
Kaan
kaanhaylaz 4 years ago
i dig the silence man... i totally get it... why did she check outside the apartment first then go to the babys room, i thought also that the voice would be a scary voice not some guy that sounds like a fuckin gay child molester
walstedman1 4 years ago
yipes, the voice is mine! she checks outside the apartment to see if there is anyone in the immediate vicinity who could help, she quickly knows what she has to do though.
timothyhaskell 4 years ago
lol good music..
xxxligthnfernoxxx 4 years ago
im not sure i get it.....
chrissyb1986 4 years ago
Hmm...What did that man say to mom??
Sorry,but I couldn't listen well.
carbonofblack 4 years ago
Uh, HUH?! What's Going On, Dude? At The End, The Chick Finds A Rather Creepy Picture, AND THAT'S IT? WTF?
videogamedude2345 4 years ago
bite my shiny metal ass
finalizingdisk 4 years ago
very awesome. It scared me!
edstudd22 4 years ago
it was ok could have been better but ok
madrox555 4 years ago
yep
bamushan 4 years ago
How creepy that photo was...
CRAZYgood07 4 years ago
you guys are awsome. Keep up the good work. Scared the hell outa me.
mattparkman 4 years ago
great acting by the kid/ i totally get what the kid is saying/ NO mom dont build a brick tower/ NO mom i dont want to eat this shit food/ ARRR im climbing on mom/ YUM this milk goes well with my bed time story/ ok mom enough cuddles/ CRY CRY / kid talks in sleep as a grown up / snore snore kids asleep / he talks again/ OH MY GOD SUM 1 HAS ROBBED THE PHOTO AND RE-PLACED IT WITH ANOTHER ONE SCAREY
kazb25 4 years ago
only reason it was scary was because i was waiting five minutes for something to appen and when i did i was "OH SNAP" and that weird picture at the end freaks me out
shwoah 4 years ago
shit
ganonforce 4 years ago
Wow, I did not expect to get scared by this, but it really freaked me out!!
cerealkiller71 4 years ago
fucking hell. Really scared!!!
aragog86 4 years ago
Wow, no budget all creativity,,, A+ I 5 starred ya' ~Marcus:)
marcusunlimitedmusic 4 years ago
Good, but more suspense then fright... Good acting, though! ^^
murratoph 5 years ago
was too scary i mean cooda been better but still i got chills
tylersall 5 years ago
wack video!!! not scary!
ihavebeef 5 years ago
uh ok....I guess I expected more from the creator of one of "the best haunted houses in the country"
sinemaslave 5 years ago
i didnt get what happend like how was it scarry
kskillerscream 5 years ago
why is there no dialogue?
KOKnBALLZ 5 years ago
I am looking foward to going to the one in the Bronx..*Prays*
Am1Ch4n 5 years ago
Wow...that had me going! U sold me on that one! lol
i will definitely be at the nightmare this year!!
YaaaaY!!
jacenicole74 5 years ago
uh...ok
VilEffigy 5 years ago
what the hell was that
Osiris113 5 years ago
lol i thought is was funny
bkzang3l88 5 years ago
ok I got chills....that's some scary stuff!!! Good luck Tim, Love you > mary
catmom86 5 years ago
that fucking shit me up, you asshole! lol
Brammers2007 5 years ago
nice!
Syderelli 5 years ago
cool shit *thumbz up*
Duneatmydonuts 5 years ago
Good stuff! I hope I can make it to NYC to see the haunted house!!
bigdog1701 5 years ago
Nice work, Timoteo.
musprof 5 years ago
Thanks a lot. Now I need clean underwear.
greenbriel 5 years ago