Very good filmmaking here. I understand the limitations of making for a 'media project'. I especially like the last shot when he wakes up. the 'shakyness' really adds a nice element to the 'dolly'. (even though it was probably by accident that you achieved this)
very nice work my friend :) maybe try next time to improve your fight scenes. I noticed that it was kind of 'stop start' easily fixed with some small camera shake, and some trimming in editing. Great work!!!
@RyleySwanFilms You're right, it wasn't really meant to be shaky like that. I actually tried to stabilize it a little in After Effects and that's why it's a weird kind of shake...Since that film I've got a Steadicam and so should be able to produce shakeless shots, though interesting that yo uliked it
The main limitation was actually time with this one, thanks for the tips with fighting, i actually was editing with Final Cut for the first time and was very pressed for time
Really good, just looked to scripted, try adding more flow with cuts (to make it look faster), and during action scenes extend your arms a bit more. That's all you need to do to make an awesome action movie.
Nice work. - I loved your angles and I think you edited it very well. I probably would have added a little more on the girl being upset because at first she did not seem upset by the hooded guy but then you resolved that later. Keep up the great work!!
@keithtuber Hey could i have some constructive feedback :) I'm a young film maker and always looking for helpful feedback so i can improve with each film. This, btw, is a huge improvement from the last, and the last was a huge improvement from the one before that too
BEST FIGHT SCENE EVAR!
SnDShortFilms 4 months ago
Great Ideea! Really Big Like! :))
onlyruner 6 months ago
Nice job! Some of those stunts were pretty cool! ..finally an action short where nobody got shot.
Knoptop 6 months ago
Great work!
RayVizion 6 months ago
Very good filmmaking here. I understand the limitations of making for a 'media project'. I especially like the last shot when he wakes up. the 'shakyness' really adds a nice element to the 'dolly'. (even though it was probably by accident that you achieved this)
very nice work my friend :) maybe try next time to improve your fight scenes. I noticed that it was kind of 'stop start' easily fixed with some small camera shake, and some trimming in editing. Great work!!!
RyleySwanFilms 6 months ago
@RyleySwanFilms You're right, it wasn't really meant to be shaky like that. I actually tried to stabilize it a little in After Effects and that's why it's a weird kind of shake...Since that film I've got a Steadicam and so should be able to produce shakeless shots, though interesting that yo uliked it
The main limitation was actually time with this one, thanks for the tips with fighting, i actually was editing with Final Cut for the first time and was very pressed for time
MileCreations 6 months ago
Pretty good for 17 years old.
ZaCkOX900 7 months ago
looks great.....see you in hollywood one day.
BEATNIKCASS 7 months ago
Good Stuff!!!
PowerplayoneTV 7 months ago
really great video!
i enjoy watching parkour ^___^
espeacially when those good lookin guys do it thaha ;D
BUT the fighting scenes are...well...let's say "not that good" =p
camforpresident 8 months ago
Awesome Video !!!!
Tadek59 8 months ago
I really liked the stunts. Nice job! :)
OreoNicole 8 months ago
Really good, just looked to scripted, try adding more flow with cuts (to make it look faster), and during action scenes extend your arms a bit more. That's all you need to do to make an awesome action movie.
ninjaboy196 8 months ago
Great action here in your film..Bravo!!
Zuzanna
Susanna129 8 months ago
Nice work. - I loved your angles and I think you edited it very well. I probably would have added a little more on the girl being upset because at first she did not seem upset by the hooded guy but then you resolved that later. Keep up the great work!!
PencilBoxProjects 8 months ago
@PencilBoxProjects thanks
MileCreations 8 months ago
Radical man
Liamabl 8 months ago 2
its good brendan
JacoblikesCOD77 8 months ago 3
@keithtuber Hey could i have some constructive feedback :) I'm a young film maker and always looking for helpful feedback so i can improve with each film. This, btw, is a huge improvement from the last, and the last was a huge improvement from the one before that too
MileCreations 9 months ago
great directing!
Pahiirm 9 months ago 4
Great video! Awesome!
AintThisAllright 9 months ago 4
Once again another fabulous movie by Mile Creations, looks great, the guy who does parkour is really talented too!
schoolcap10 9 months ago
@schoolcap10 The guy in the black jacket is pretty good too...
Caterpillar235 9 months ago
that was amazing, great work.
Vaiano3 9 months ago 2
Nice
MrlloydCook 9 months ago