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You're not actually teaching people how to write an introduction. Your'e stating the obvious fact that people want the introduction to be interesting. You should probably change the title of the video.
expert village is so fucking useless, I wouldn't care so much but they get in the way of good videos. She tells us that the intro is the most important part but doesn't give you any clue to how to make it good except 'CATCHY'. Yea and people DO watch plays and movies if they arent interesting in the first minute.
Haha. I love how she doesn't write a 'Catchy Introduction'.0:22. She made no sense, she just told us what we had to do and gave us no advice. And love this part 0:57 it's gonna be sooo exciting. woow thanks.
Haha. I love how she just writes 'Catchy Introduction' and doesn't write a 'catchy introduction'. So I was like what? She just told us what to do. Nothing to do with expert knowledge/advice. She just says, "Do this, it helps".... "but how do I do it?!?1". I love the part where she goes "he's read tons of papers, it is gonna be sooo exciting"... 0:55
do you understand me... there's no help in this... huh... i'm exhausted...
I wanted to know how to write a really good intro though. One with an attention catching hook, while introducing the topic. This video doesn't really help with that.
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flany1960 2 weeks ago in playlist Writing
Thanks now i know how to...SIKE
TheeChilledPenguin 4 weeks ago
You're not actually teaching people how to write an introduction. Your'e stating the obvious fact that people want the introduction to be interesting. You should probably change the title of the video.
evil08 3 months ago
i fail my (aims) because of you thanks alot fuck off
mirchal17 3 months ago
wow, that was helpful , not!
ondd1 3 months ago
THIS DID'NT HELP AT ALL SMH I HATE WRITING ESSAY'S THIS VIDEO MADE ME NOT WANNA DO IT NOW AND JUST LOOK AT TV
Tonyho0124 6 months ago
Someone teach her English. She cannot even say "Introduction" correctly.
CLAPHAMCHAMPION 1 year ago 2
Okey dokey, this was an introduction on "how to write an introduction", so now,
the question is, "how to write an introduction"?
CalgaryAlpineStyle 1 year ago 3
Wow! She just said everything my 3rd grade teacher taught me about essays. This would have really helped me... if I wasn't a Sophomore :\
Jesse23364631 1 year ago 2
FUCK OFF !
akshayzz1 1 year ago
Your new name is officially Ms. Captain Obvious
CantBeDisplayed 1 year ago 15
This video doesn't help.
AnarchistGirl27 1 year ago 7
she ugly...she fat
Frankfurtxxl 1 year ago
you didn't teach us shit. WTF
h0th0t89 1 year ago 2
u dumb bitch thanks for the info
svue12 2 years ago
Where is the beef?
kalakeke15 2 years ago
expert village gives out the worst videos
h0th0t89 2 years ago
Gee, thanks lady. Now I completely understand how to write a introduction.
-.-
darkni2009 2 years ago 20
WTF?????????????
LEG1TaL 2 years ago
we know that the introduction is important but how to write it god damit
dophin74 2 years ago
wow... your comment made me laugh so hard
CHARACTERK19 2 years ago
she needs to change the title of that video
SHE DID NOT EXPLAIN HOW TO WRITE AN INTRODUCTION!!!!!
mataphysical 2 years ago
can comeone fucken tell me how the fuck to start a introduction with what fucken words
element2317 2 years ago
expert village is so fucking useless, I wouldn't care so much but they get in the way of good videos. She tells us that the intro is the most important part but doesn't give you any clue to how to make it good except 'CATCHY'. Yea and people DO watch plays and movies if they arent interesting in the first minute.
IAMpersonality 2 years ago
I was thinking the same thing.
Unsquaro 2 years ago
yea I kinda got pissed after watching so many expert village vids and ranted..
IAMpersonality 2 years ago
Haha. I love how she doesn't write a 'Catchy Introduction'.0:22. She made no sense, she just told us what we had to do and gave us no advice. And love this part 0:57 it's gonna be sooo exciting. woow thanks.
Unsquaro 2 years ago
Haha. I love how she just writes 'Catchy Introduction' and doesn't write a 'catchy introduction'. So I was like what? She just told us what to do. Nothing to do with expert knowledge/advice. She just says, "Do this, it helps".... "but how do I do it?!?1". I love the part where she goes "he's read tons of papers, it is gonna be sooo exciting"... 0:55
do you understand me... there's no help in this... huh... i'm exhausted...
Unsquaro 2 years ago
Sorry, it looked like i was contradicting myself. i was tired -_-. i may remove this comment...
Unsquaro 2 years ago
just say hey am blah am writing to toalk to you about blah.
uanimale 2 years ago
snoop dogg can teach better than this bitch!
beatsbyDrDre 2 years ago
ya! this stinks!...................;d
combool 2 years ago
This video didn't help at all. It didn't even teach me anything, just talked about what an introduction is and what it can do for you essay.
vivalaresistanc 2 years ago
ya this doesn't help at all...
spellbee3 2 years ago
ummmmm no offence but this was really not all that helpful
dd575757 2 years ago 2
yea for a fact everyone saying this was 'helpful' was being sarcastic! how misleading!!!!!!!urgh waste of 1:27 of my time..n time matters!!!
Amalcutie 2 years ago
bitch wrong title!!
xXTHELEECHXx 2 years ago
i need a tie-in
awsomeignacio690 3 years ago
Wuta misleading title -.-
khmerguy13 3 years ago 3
Fukkin Skank
Hoagamania 3 years ago
i wanna know HOW!!!!! i know its already needed.shit
dominic970 3 years ago 2
Yeah i got so excited when i saw this video... what a let down... I'm screwed for my essay now.
koolslug 3 years ago
mines due tommorow
dominic970 3 years ago
mine too.
skmman111 3 years ago
Easy write an into, then write a body.
In the body provide information or debate.
Then write a conclusion. In the conclusion you can just restate what you wrote in the intro.
then your done. I like to be sarcastic and mean in my essays. But You can be whatever.
VOLVERHURTS 3 years ago
I wanted to know how to write a really good intro though. One with an attention catching hook, while introducing the topic. This video doesn't really help with that.
koolslug 3 years ago
i think you were being sarcastic that wasn't helpful at all lol
oherider 3 years ago
lol
trisix99 3 years ago
Thank you, that was helpful.
xoSarahSanox 3 years ago
wow that was helpfull
omar408 3 years ago