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  • Thanks now i know how to...SIKE

  • You're not actually teaching people how to write an introduction. Your'e stating the obvious fact that people want the introduction to be interesting. You should probably change the title of the video.

  • i fail my (aims) because of you thanks alot fuck off 

  • wow, that was helpful , not!

  • THIS DID'NT HELP AT ALL SMH I HATE WRITING ESSAY'S THIS VIDEO MADE ME NOT WANNA DO IT NOW AND JUST LOOK AT TV

  • Someone teach her English. She cannot even say "Introduction" correctly.

  • Okey dokey, this was an introduction on "how to write an introduction", so now,

    the question is, "how to write an introduction"?

  • Wow! She just said everything my 3rd grade teacher taught me about essays. This would have really helped me... if I wasn't a Sophomore :\

  • FUCK OFF !

  • Your new name is officially Ms. Captain Obvious

  • This video doesn't help.

  • she ugly...she fat

  • you didn't teach us shit. WTF

  • u dumb bitch thanks for the info

  • Where is the beef?

  • expert village gives out the worst videos

  • Gee, thanks lady. Now I completely understand how to write a introduction.

    -.-

  • WTF?????????????

  • we know that the introduction is important but how to write it god damit

  • wow... your comment made me laugh so hard

  • she needs to change the title of that video

    SHE DID NOT EXPLAIN HOW TO WRITE AN INTRODUCTION!!!!!

  • can comeone fucken tell me how the fuck to start a introduction with what fucken words

  • expert village is so fucking useless, I wouldn't care so much but they get in the way of good videos. She tells us that the intro is the most important part but doesn't give you any clue to how to make it good except 'CATCHY'. Yea and people DO watch plays and movies if they arent interesting in the first minute.

  • I was thinking the same thing.

  • yea I kinda got pissed after watching so many expert village vids and ranted..

  • Haha. I love how she doesn't write a 'Catchy Introduction'.0:22. She made no sense, she just told us what we had to do and gave us no advice. And love this part 0:57 it's gonna be sooo exciting. woow thanks.

  • Haha. I love how she just writes 'Catchy Introduction' and doesn't write a 'catchy introduction'. So I was like what? She just told us what to do. Nothing to do with expert knowledge/advice. She just says, "Do this, it helps".... "but how do I do it?!?1". I love the part where she goes "he's read tons of papers, it is gonna be sooo exciting"... 0:55

    do you understand me... there's no help in this... huh... i'm exhausted...

  • Sorry, it looked like i was contradicting myself. i was tired -_-. i may remove this comment...

  • just say hey am blah am writing to toalk to you about blah.

  • snoop dogg can teach better than this bitch!

  • ya! this stinks!...................;d

  • This video didn't help at all. It didn't even teach me anything, just talked about what an introduction is and what it can do for you essay.

  • ya this doesn't help at all...

  • ummmmm no offence but this was really not all that helpful

  • yea for a fact everyone saying this was 'helpful' was being sarcastic! how misleading!!!!!!!urgh waste of 1:27 of my time..n time matters!!!

  • bitch wrong title!!

  • i need a tie-in

  • Wuta misleading title -.-

  • Fukkin Skank

  • i wanna know HOW!!!!! i know its already needed.shit

  • Yeah i got so excited when i saw this video... what a let down... I'm screwed for my essay now.

  • mines due tommorow

  • mine too.

  • Easy write an into, then write a body.

    In the body provide information or debate.

    Then write a conclusion. In the conclusion you can just restate what you wrote in the intro.

    then your done. I like to be sarcastic and mean in my essays. But You can be whatever.

  • I wanted to know how to write a really good intro though. One with an attention catching hook, while introducing the topic. This video doesn't really help with that.

  • i think you were being sarcastic that wasn't helpful at all lol

  • lol

  • Thank you, that was helpful.

  • wow that was helpfull

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