You have a pretty good narrating voice! You captured the atmosphere put forth in the book and you were as dramatic as any thriller trailer should be! Hey, keep on reading Rand's novels and not only will you have a skill, you'll also know how to use it. Excellent job, disregard the nasty reviewers (they're jealous, just like all untalented collectivists :-)
@firekage13 I'm surprised to hear that it's being viewed in so many classes, but that makes me happy!
I know my voice sounds so odd in this thing. I'm kind of embarrassed about it. Overdramatic much, I guess. But also, I don't like my family hearing me when I record, so I try to keep my voice low. So many people have commented that my voice is awful. xD
Well, I'm glad that you liked it and I hope that your class did, as well. If teachers are showing it, then it's got some potential! lol
@Nesb1 Aww, thank you... :) I like making videos as a hobby, but I don't see a future in it. In fact, I haven't made a video in a long while. And, I did get an A. :D
I don't know why you guys are cracking on this video. This is genius. I have to do the same thing, and mine is shit compared to this. Good job Hyperwires!
@cheesebowls Thank you so much for that comment...I'm just rereading through some and there's so many negative ones...This was just a school assignment from sophomore year of high school and I only had one day to put it together with no actors, so I'm proud of what I made with what I had.
I just wish people wouldn't be so critical and take that into account.
If your voice didn't sound like it belonged as the host of a horrow show, this woul dhave been better. Plus, there weren't enough shots of things from the book. You made it seem like there was this whole huge great world with all of the nature scenerey- but in the society they really didn't branch out farther than the uncharted forrest and their confined town. Nice video though.
I do understand your point about there needing more clips from the book, but I was crunched for time (only had one school night to make this) and I needed resources too (actors, settings, props, costumes etc.) I decided to just show a little bit, (which is why I chose to do a trailer in the first place,) and found these overhead shots that I thought would be cool to represent all that he was missing, wanted to see, learn, and explore, and the freedoms he desired.
@flippinflamingoo Well, as I mentioned in the description, I had one weekday to put this together, so frpm about 5:00PM when I get home, till about 10:00 when I went to sleep. I also had no actors, costumes, props, etc. so I did the best I could. I tried to put the nature scenes along with the words to show how the main character was hopeful and searching for knowledge. It's everything he was missing...what he wanted. And he does eventually leave the town. It was supposed to be inspirational.
yo this video was really good props to you! and BTW i think your voice is annoying (sry!) lol i have the same thing as you coolerdude! lol wonder why!
Yeah, as I have mentioned my I hate my voice, the mic was terrible, and it just...sounds terrible in this video. Poor quality...Wish I had more time to put it together, but it was a one day homework assignment.
you should know that for our project, we had to watch youtube trailers for this book (links given by our teacher) and write an essay saying which we liked best and why. yours was the first on her list, and the one im writing my essay on XD
Because of all the attention this video is getting I now wish that I had more time than just a day to put it together...I'm almost ashamed of it's poor quality.
Every person's voice sounds unpleasant when he hears it on a recording. Realize that it's not the voice itself which is unpleasant, it's just the fact that you don't hear yourself from that perspective very often. It's not necessarily bad; just new and different.
But he's right, your voice is kind of annoying in this video. But that has nothing to do with how you speak normally. You're just being overly dramatic. Nothing to worry about. You haven't been trained in drama.
dude I am doing the same exact project right now doing the same exact thing I need help so bad lol. yours is good but I didn't know what to use for the voicing or how to get moving clips onto movie maker, I suck, this is the first time I have ever made a video and I am still fixing it. If you have any helpful tips b4 I have to turn it in tomorrow please help. Other than that good job and I am going to finish watching this, again!
Well, I just recorded these clips with my digital camera, uploaded them to my computer, and dragged them onto the timeline in Windows Movie Maker. Good luck with your project. :D
hey thanks man, I finished my project when you sent me this message lol. but I appreciate the pretty quick comment return, I had a lot of fun doing the trailer and when it came time to present my class loved it1 I made it seem like a comedy actually, because I am a pretty funny person, thanks again
Wow...I can't believe how well you did this in one night! You should consider going into the movie business! where did you get the shot of the woman and the guys in togas? I guess I can ask you Monday.I LOVE THIS!
@chemicallove911 You need to stop posting on youtube if you only have negative hurtful things to say. This is a fantastic video!
ninaandrew22 1 month ago
tool why would you put this on youtube all that crap about believing
chulo1996 4 months ago
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chulo1996 4 months ago
That was great considering the lack of resources and time. Don't be ashamed at all of what you produced.
ftsmallwood 8 months ago
that was way better than most movies trailers today, honestly
44eelz 8 months ago
I LOVE THIS!!! I think this is the best fanmade trailer of Anthem! You did great with what you had!
asianhomebucket 8 months ago
WOW! Fantastic. You have great skill. Don't listen to the naysayers here. You will go very far.
howser12 9 months ago
You have a pretty good narrating voice! You captured the atmosphere put forth in the book and you were as dramatic as any thriller trailer should be! Hey, keep on reading Rand's novels and not only will you have a skill, you'll also know how to use it. Excellent job, disregard the nasty reviewers (they're jealous, just like all untalented collectivists :-)
OneMondBand 1 year ago
@firekage13 I'm surprised to hear that it's being viewed in so many classes, but that makes me happy!
I know my voice sounds so odd in this thing. I'm kind of embarrassed about it. Overdramatic much, I guess. But also, I don't like my family hearing me when I record, so I try to keep my voice low. So many people have commented that my voice is awful. xD
Well, I'm glad that you liked it and I hope that your class did, as well. If teachers are showing it, then it's got some potential! lol
hyperwires 1 year ago
wow this is truly amazing I'm a senior in high school and we are reading this book lol.
rocktrns17 1 year ago
@rocktrns17 Thank you! I was a sophomore in high school when I read this book and put this video together. :)
hyperwires 1 year ago
Horrible prepubescent voice.
mspookie 1 year ago
@mspookie I'm a girl, though... O.o
hyperwires 1 year ago
@hyperwires Are you Pat from the old SNL skits?
mspookie 1 year ago
@mspookie Nope.
hyperwires 1 year ago
lost all civilization? i think part of the problem was the excess of civilized and orderly nature. they were kept in institutions mate...
animalchin4 1 year ago
@animalchin4 Half of what I said was directly off of the back of the book, and, I also, did not fully agree with it all.
hyperwires 1 year ago
This is surprisingly good, I bet you got an A. If you enjoyed doing this, I could see you become someone in the film industry, perhaps the someone.
Nesb1 1 year ago
@Nesb1 Aww, thank you... :) I like making videos as a hobby, but I don't see a future in it. In fact, I haven't made a video in a long while. And, I did get an A. :D
hyperwires 1 year ago
The Anthem kinda reminded me of The Giver
Sinter7777 1 year ago
@Sinter7777 ikr
CharlySah 1 year ago
That's what I thought when I read it.
BlooMassacre 1 year ago
Wow! you guys sound really young. This is a great video! keep up the good work.
debbiejwilson 2 years ago
@debbiejwilson I was 15 when I made this video, and it's just me...It wasn't a group project.
hyperwires 1 year ago
This is great. Good luck to you in the future. Cannot wait to see what you could do with a budget.
peteypeege 2 years ago
you should had said In A World
jck7111 2 years ago
awsum summary! totally amazing!
yumiandami 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
you fucking suck man
E29Able 2 years ago
win
Sinter7777 1 year ago 2
Wow! Good work. I hope you continue on and put out a longer movie version.
Thank you for sharing.
Talamanca3 2 years ago
I don't know why you guys are cracking on this video. This is genius. I have to do the same thing, and mine is shit compared to this. Good job Hyperwires!
cheesebowls 2 years ago 4
@cheesebowls Thank you so much for that comment...I'm just rereading through some and there's so many negative ones...This was just a school assignment from sophomore year of high school and I only had one day to put it together with no actors, so I'm proud of what I made with what I had.
I just wish people wouldn't be so critical and take that into account.
hyperwires 1 year ago
@hyperwires Ahaha, wow. One year ago, that's crazy. I'm a sophomore in High School now :D Still, good job!
cheesebowls 1 year ago
EPIC FAILER!!!!!
Filmaker92 2 years ago
ever more epic that you failed spelling failure ...idiot
pamante7 2 years ago 3
FAIL!!!
deadeternityguitar 2 years ago
Dare to wonder!
tugatrader 2 years ago 4
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bredsox93 2 years ago
lol i made a soundtrack for this
fatcat363 3 years ago 2
EPIC FAIL
DarylIp 3 years ago
man i wish i had access to a helicopter to make videos as awesome as this one
butthead1206 3 years ago 3
lawl at having to watch this
darkshark517 3 years ago
jkjk
whoopthattrick14 3 years ago
damn,
that is a funny voice
whoopthattrick14 3 years ago
are u trained actors
jayroc99 3 years ago
i have to make a album cover with this story
fatcat363 3 years ago 2
Good job!
grantsinmypants2 3 years ago 11
If your voice didn't sound like it belonged as the host of a horrow show, this woul dhave been better. Plus, there weren't enough shots of things from the book. You made it seem like there was this whole huge great world with all of the nature scenerey- but in the society they really didn't branch out farther than the uncharted forrest and their confined town. Nice video though.
flippinflamingoo 3 years ago 7
Eh...my voice is terrible...
I do understand your point about there needing more clips from the book, but I was crunched for time (only had one school night to make this) and I needed resources too (actors, settings, props, costumes etc.) I decided to just show a little bit, (which is why I chose to do a trailer in the first place,) and found these overhead shots that I thought would be cool to represent all that he was missing, wanted to see, learn, and explore, and the freedoms he desired.
hyperwires 3 years ago
@flippinflamingoo Well, as I mentioned in the description, I had one weekday to put this together, so frpm about 5:00PM when I get home, till about 10:00 when I went to sleep. I also had no actors, costumes, props, etc. so I did the best I could. I tried to put the nature scenes along with the words to show how the main character was hopeful and searching for knowledge. It's everything he was missing...what he wanted. And he does eventually leave the town. It was supposed to be inspirational.
hyperwires 1 year ago
yo this video was really good props to you! and BTW i think your voice is annoying (sry!) lol i have the same thing as you coolerdude! lol wonder why!
lexmark1207 3 years ago 3
Yeah, as I have mentioned my I hate my voice, the mic was terrible, and it just...sounds terrible in this video. Poor quality...Wish I had more time to put it together, but it was a one day homework assignment.
hyperwires 3 years ago
you should know that for our project, we had to watch youtube trailers for this book (links given by our teacher) and write an essay saying which we liked best and why. yours was the first on her list, and the one im writing my essay on XD
coolerdude44 3 years ago 2
Wow, that's really awesome! :) I am very honored.
Because of all the attention this video is getting I now wish that I had more time than just a day to put it together...I'm almost ashamed of it's poor quality.
hyperwires 3 years ago
you have no friends
escapefate33657 3 years ago
lmfao
coolerdude44 3 years ago
I'm now 30 but I remember reading this book in 9th grade and still love it...you nailed it kid! Way to go!
bruiserteta 3 years ago 3
Great video. I'm in Britain, just started reading Atlas Shrugged, I'm going to read Anthem next! I wish they would make a real film of Anthem. Peace.
trashbat123 3 years ago 2
After you read Anthem, read Catcher in the Rye.
They go quite nicely togeather, I think.
cespilot 3 years ago 2
For one night you did really well! I just did the same project, it's uploaded too.
suppppkate 3 years ago 2
god your voice is annoing
PRFrancis 3 years ago
I don't like my voice very much either and hate hearing it in this video. I just like the music parts.
hyperwires 3 years ago
Your voice is fine...It just needs more power for narration :)
cespilot 3 years ago 2
Every person's voice sounds unpleasant when he hears it on a recording. Realize that it's not the voice itself which is unpleasant, it's just the fact that you don't hear yourself from that perspective very often. It's not necessarily bad; just new and different.
But he's right, your voice is kind of annoying in this video. But that has nothing to do with how you speak normally. You're just being overly dramatic. Nothing to worry about. You haven't been trained in drama.
grantsinmypants2 3 years ago 4
dude I am doing the same exact project right now doing the same exact thing I need help so bad lol. yours is good but I didn't know what to use for the voicing or how to get moving clips onto movie maker, I suck, this is the first time I have ever made a video and I am still fixing it. If you have any helpful tips b4 I have to turn it in tomorrow please help. Other than that good job and I am going to finish watching this, again!
natiboy2 4 years ago 3
Well, I just recorded these clips with my digital camera, uploaded them to my computer, and dragged them onto the timeline in Windows Movie Maker. Good luck with your project. :D
hyperwires 4 years ago
hey thanks man, I finished my project when you sent me this message lol. but I appreciate the pretty quick comment return, I had a lot of fun doing the trailer and when it came time to present my class loved it1 I made it seem like a comedy actually, because I am a pretty funny person, thanks again
Nathan/ natiboy2
natiboy2 3 years ago 3
well done, man. well done. like the choice of music.
gallows888 4 years ago 3
howd u get those flying scenes?
urgay1392 4 years ago 3
Yes, I was wondering the same thing. (Good job, btw)
BillyBocksfuss 3 years ago 2
Is this music from Lost?
lostrox17 4 years ago
Yes, as it says in the description, "The music is Locke'd Out Again from the TV series Lost, composed by Michael Giacchino.
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hyperwires 4 years ago
that was very good young man! now... create the whole movie :-)
thorsmitersaw 4 years ago 4
Except for the crappy mic you're using this is pretty good. How old are you? You sound pretty young.
Rorshak1313 4 years ago 3
Yeah, crappy mic...Let's just say that I am in my first half of high school.
hyperwires 4 years ago
Wow...I can't believe how well you did this in one night! You should consider going into the movie business! where did you get the shot of the woman and the guys in togas? I guess I can ask you Monday.I LOVE THIS!
piratetook1 4 years ago 2
nice!!! haha next year to a theater near you lol i like that lol
ryanthekidnoonelikes 4 years ago