Critical- A Jonas Love Story: Chapter One Part Two!

[jobrosluver1]

wow so i just now read this, i know im a little late but i love it! i need more, so please tell me youre still going to update

[BFF1012]

Ahh this is really good!

[Mrstwilightsagalover]

when are you going to post again????

[xojbfan4lyfxo]

oooohhhhh..... i hate you right now.....i heard that song on Pandora radio and I went on itunes to get it but it was only with the ablum and the album was more then what i had and now im mad hhahahah lol........awwww poor nick....im sorry, love him more :D

[dacb36]

sounding very interesting can't wait to see what happens next

[JBgurls4ever]

sooo she knows nick likes her already?

[WHATEVER95124051]

i love this story so far.... which is weird since its only the first chapter lol

[AppreciateJB]

Amazing. I smell jealousy && some sibling rivalry in the near future... hmmmm might get even better then... Hmmm :) jk

[Jobrosarehott21]

@AppreciateJB Hahaa. We'll see :P

[RachelMarie96]

Sounds like its gonna get interesting...More soon?

[Jobrosarehott21]

@RachelMarie96 Of course (: I just need a few more views first and I'll get the second one up for ya! So spread the word to your friends and help a girl out!