I liked the acting and editing was done well , but however I would have done close up of her eyes and her thinking while camera zooms out and then he shows up and says hi. Sometimes eyes will show more emotion then dialog. But all in all good job.
Meh... The lighting is not to my liking and her acting abilities... did she drink actual Sake? Maybe she's just buzzed. Who knows. I loved his acting. Its good.
Pretty decent. Camera shots were well done. I like the concept of the story. But, similar to what others have commented, the acting on the part of the young lady was not not very emotionally portrayed of someone struggling with moving on. The male lead was better...but both appeared to be appearing to have emotion for one another. But no true chemistry was evident. Camera work and the music was good. Thank you for inviting me to watch your budding artistry. Deb (ctom_1985
I liked it!:) cool idea, well developed. But I think it would be better if the girl put more emotion into her lines. Overall it was pretty good though! good job!
That was a WELL good idea! And that boy is such a good actor, you could really seen the sincerity and love in his eyes! Great work and the lighting is much better in this film!
Man, i don't mean to be rude but i kind of fell to sleep, i mean a girl talking to her ex dead boy friend isn't so cool i really did like the other short movie of the serial killer may be u could do some action short movies
Story line was good ...I hope to see more of your work soon ..keep it up!
ATwinklingStar 2 months ago
you are a natural! don't stop and I assure you, you will win an Academy Award someday......
look like a starr to me!
CaptainBillWalker52 2 months ago
@CaptainBillWalker52 Thanks Captain Walker!
Cheyemos 2 months ago
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Loved this!!! Thumbs Up G
DailyJustin 3 months ago
I liked the acting and editing was done well , but however I would have done close up of her eyes and her thinking while camera zooms out and then he shows up and says hi. Sometimes eyes will show more emotion then dialog. But all in all good job.
VideoGamesGalaxy 3 months ago
Meh... The lighting is not to my liking and her acting abilities... did she drink actual Sake? Maybe she's just buzzed. Who knows. I loved his acting. Its good.
raybanfandom 4 months ago
great
BAZHE 4 months ago
Pretty decent. Camera shots were well done. I like the concept of the story. But, similar to what others have commented, the acting on the part of the young lady was not not very emotionally portrayed of someone struggling with moving on. The male lead was better...but both appeared to be appearing to have emotion for one another. But no true chemistry was evident. Camera work and the music was good. Thank you for inviting me to watch your budding artistry. Deb (ctom_1985
ctom1985 4 months ago
I liked it!:) cool idea, well developed. But I think it would be better if the girl put more emotion into her lines. Overall it was pretty good though! good job!
rozita3003 4 months ago
Simple story well told!
cscdigitalgraphics 4 months ago
Really good, don't see a lot of serious works on youtube, but you did a great job! keep at it man.
MrMasterDover 4 months ago
"famous film director"?
jpoolerdom 4 months ago
That was a WELL good idea! And that boy is such a good actor, you could really seen the sincerity and love in his eyes! Great work and the lighting is much better in this film!
TheStripeyStudios 5 months ago
You're so pro man ;)
crazzynezz 5 months ago
looks good make want more >_<
project0omega 5 months ago
Man, i don't mean to be rude but i kind of fell to sleep, i mean a girl talking to her ex dead boy friend isn't so cool i really did like the other short movie of the serial killer may be u could do some action short movies
melekRebai 5 months ago
@melekRebai the you tube is full of short action films go find them.
xitebicho 5 months ago
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melekRebai 5 months ago
@xitebicho oh man, this dude Cheyemos is cool i mean he made a short film about a serial killer that was outstanding.
the romantic type isn't my thing u know. that's all and that's why i asked him if he may do some other action short movies.
peace bro
melekRebai 5 months ago
She looks like a girl I got to college with hahaha. I can relate to this, a lot of my friends that are girls come to me for support.
thelouie 5 months ago
eh... th acting for the girl was a little bad... :L but the story was great! :D
noah279878582 5 months ago
amazing
Snapzzo 5 months ago
haha i like it but the funny thing is how hard the bartender is cleaning the cup at the end of the video :)
sivyig 5 months ago
once again i must say,great acting
thejokerwhysoserios 5 months ago
Not the first. Lolol
CriticizeCriticize 5 months ago
oh yah woot woot first coment whats up and first viewer whats up wooo yaaaahhhh!!!!!!
dragonballzlover1231 5 months ago