the hook sounds exactly like baby joker's "i miss you" look it up
Xquesoychido 1 month ago
aye send me this beat
FictionFives 1 month ago
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ptitkmer 4 months ago
I'm here noticing the crazy situations that's been going on
And its something that shouldn't be happening please keep strong
Know that there's a way out don't be afraid to escape
Make a decision that benefits where you are safe
At times arguments gets loud till it gets out of hand
His job is to walk out that's the real role of a man
In a relationship to understand to love shelter you from harm
If ever something bothering he waiting with open arms
jaymoralucifer 4 months ago
No questions asked two souls one life one pain
In it together for as long as there is more in it to gain
Can't be afraid of change if it ever came breathe and remain calm
When facing the worst going thru the storm
That wasn't shown from the start the dark came to light
Your life more important than losing it in a fight
So I'm here now just to ask you is it really all worth
The one you love shouldn't be the one to put you in dirt
Know it might be hard to step away got kids involved
I know it aint that simple to say get out problem solved
But it will continue as long as you allow it to be
And trust this aint no good to the eyes of what the children see
You already set them up for failure paint the abuse in the mind
All they see is tears and hear yelling all the time
Saying mommy here a tissue which brings a smile to end the issue
Of the voices haunting yelling I'm a kill you
That aint love real love don't die and with pain you try
So my question is why give your all without comprise
Seems like you the only one who would do whatever it takes
While he killing you softly inside till your heart aches
Where it totally breaks you making you feel out of place
Looking in the mirror unable to recognize your own face
Due scars and bruising you need to start thinking of what are you doing
Before its too late taking chances where you end up losing
Simple chorus, but im diggin the vibe, good stuff, keep uploading :)
xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx 4 months ago 3
@xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx I don't really like the chorus that much I find it kind of cheesy LOL
reckless204 4 months ago
@reckless204 lol i agree but im diggin the vibe of the beat styll. whoever made the chorus oviously had NOTHING to rhyme :P haha
xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx 4 months ago 2
the hook sounds exactly like baby joker's "i miss you" look it up
Xquesoychido 1 month ago
aye send me this beat
FictionFives 1 month ago
This has been flagged as spam show
I love it
Check my Channel guy, and tell me what you think about my song :)
ptitkmer 4 months ago
I'm here noticing the crazy situations that's been going on
And its something that shouldn't be happening please keep strong
Know that there's a way out don't be afraid to escape
Make a decision that benefits where you are safe
At times arguments gets loud till it gets out of hand
His job is to walk out that's the real role of a man
In a relationship to understand to love shelter you from harm
If ever something bothering he waiting with open arms
jaymoralucifer 4 months ago
No questions asked two souls one life one pain
In it together for as long as there is more in it to gain
Can't be afraid of change if it ever came breathe and remain calm
When facing the worst going thru the storm
That wasn't shown from the start the dark came to light
Your life more important than losing it in a fight
So I'm here now just to ask you is it really all worth
The one you love shouldn't be the one to put you in dirt
jaymoralucifer 4 months ago
Know it might be hard to step away got kids involved
I know it aint that simple to say get out problem solved
But it will continue as long as you allow it to be
And trust this aint no good to the eyes of what the children see
You already set them up for failure paint the abuse in the mind
All they see is tears and hear yelling all the time
Saying mommy here a tissue which brings a smile to end the issue
Of the voices haunting yelling I'm a kill you
jaymoralucifer 4 months ago
That aint love real love don't die and with pain you try
So my question is why give your all without comprise
Seems like you the only one who would do whatever it takes
While he killing you softly inside till your heart aches
Where it totally breaks you making you feel out of place
Looking in the mirror unable to recognize your own face
Due scars and bruising you need to start thinking of what are you doing
Before its too late taking chances where you end up losing
jaymoralucifer 4 months ago
Simple chorus, but im diggin the vibe, good stuff, keep uploading :)
xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx 4 months ago 3
@xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx I don't really like the chorus that much I find it kind of cheesy LOL
reckless204 4 months ago
@reckless204 lol i agree but im diggin the vibe of the beat styll. whoever made the chorus oviously had NOTHING to rhyme :P haha
xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx 4 months ago 2