Who the fuck are you? Trying to hate a Detroit Tiger, I'll destruct you at your 9-5, working fast-food? I'll put your face in the fryer! I used to count too but lost it to the multiplier, 10 points for a headshot dude, a bullet is your prize, so come collect after the cypher. You might be nicer but I'm not guys, I would kill you for your fucking lighter then use it to set your wife of fire! Dirty laundry nigga cell bomb inside your fucking dryer, set to speed dial BOOM!
first thing i listened to this morning lol - very catchy - as some one that writes rap i cant hear anything missing though? base is fine , melody perhaps needs to change a bit as the song goes on as its a bit repetitive but thats all i can think of - respect
so many people are influenced by the mainstream hip hop, it starting to sound more like pop, if u listened to one of the old school beats, it would be very simple with a catchy tone, the main tone, goes to the end of the song usually in the old beats, im not scott storch or timbaland yo, just a kid with a kit.. and thanx alot bro..
man,generaly this beat is good,but still i have the feeling that something is missing(dont know why:)):in percentage it hits about 95 %)))still a nc work,filled with energy........)))))))))))))
ur probably right , i usually discuss my beats with my friends before i post any of them, they said the same thing and it needed some finishing touches, (/:-I)
yo is it iight if i use this beat for a track i been workin on brah?
blueberrybeast420 1 year ago
Who the fuck are you? Trying to hate a Detroit Tiger, I'll destruct you at your 9-5, working fast-food? I'll put your face in the fryer! I used to count too but lost it to the multiplier, 10 points for a headshot dude, a bullet is your prize, so come collect after the cypher. You might be nicer but I'm not guys, I would kill you for your fucking lighter then use it to set your wife of fire! Dirty laundry nigga cell bomb inside your fucking dryer, set to speed dial BOOM!
tidaking816 1 year ago
Amigo, which program you make or create These Videos?
isa2143 1 year ago
i really feel u dont have to change anything on this...
It's good as it is...
A bit raw...
good one spinal!!!!!
karthik1812 2 years ago 2
Yeah well betta not ruin it by putting on too much, I like simple beats, they're the esiest to rhyme on .
Mahizzle420 2 years ago 5
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Mahizzle420 2 years ago
SIK TO THE DIKS!
Mahizzle420 2 years ago
first thing i listened to this morning lol - very catchy - as some one that writes rap i cant hear anything missing though? base is fine , melody perhaps needs to change a bit as the song goes on as its a bit repetitive but thats all i can think of - respect
mcshoebox 2 years ago
so many people are influenced by the mainstream hip hop, it starting to sound more like pop, if u listened to one of the old school beats, it would be very simple with a catchy tone, the main tone, goes to the end of the song usually in the old beats, im not scott storch or timbaland yo, just a kid with a kit.. and thanx alot bro..
spinalrupture 2 years ago
I really like it man gets u thinking of lyrics straight away lol
mcshoebox 2 years ago
5*****, big up
LADJA31 2 years ago 3
decent cuzz 4 star
MrFivestar2009 2 years ago
huh,my comm would be the first one...
man,generaly this beat is good,but still i have the feeling that something is missing(dont know why:)):in percentage it hits about 95 %)))still a nc work,filled with energy........)))))))))))))
DMC3574 2 years ago
ur probably right , i usually discuss my beats with my friends before i post any of them, they said the same thing and it needed some finishing touches, (/:-I)
i think i got hasty..
spinalrupture 2 years ago