I enjoy the camera direction. The plot was a bit too strong. The story line was nice but could have been stretched out. The dialogue was appropriate to the scene, nicely done. I thought the end was a bit over-dramatic. All that said, I still watched it three times.
@ApolloPriest Thanks for your input! I'm looking at turning this story into a feature length because I really like the characters, but I agree about the strong plot and the over dramatic end, I'm still learning though. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to watch it three times though!
@ApolloPriest I'm not too familiar with animation, but if you want to send me the poem and what you are looking for, I could see what I could do. I'm always looking for new challenges.
I enjoy the camera direction. The plot was a bit too strong. The story line was nice but could have been stretched out. The dialogue was appropriate to the scene, nicely done. I thought the end was a bit over-dramatic. All that said, I still watched it three times.
ApolloPriest 1 year ago
@ApolloPriest Thanks for your input! I'm looking at turning this story into a feature length because I really like the characters, but I agree about the strong plot and the over dramatic end, I'm still learning though. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to watch it three times though!
filmpadwan 1 year ago
@ApolloPriest I don't know if you would be up to it, but I would like to have someone direct an animation film to accompany a poem I wrote.
ApolloPriest 1 year ago
@ApolloPriest I'm not too familiar with animation, but if you want to send me the poem and what you are looking for, I could see what I could do. I'm always looking for new challenges.
filmpadwan 1 year ago