Last, if this is an elevator pitch, you need to have more information on the company. Yes, it's good to know all of those perks, but I didn't have a clue on what the company was DURING your pitch. You introduced yourself, but It HAS to be in the pitch itself. I would also suggest that the closing that is more specific to your product, even naming your design. Something beginning with, "Intension Interactive..." and then making it specific.
Second, when you say all the things that your idea can do like revolutionize media, costs nothing to make, etc., don't list each one sounding like a sentence with your voice dropping. They aren't individual sentences, they are a list, and lists use commas. It makes you sound like you're finishing your pitch every time you say each one of the perks.
First, If you're not enthusiastic about your own idea or product, why should anyone else? Has any businessman succeeded by being drab and monotone? You don't have to be over-bearing or obnoxious, but be friendly and personable. If you want to grab an audience it's not all about what you're saying, its also about HOW you say it.
You guys an idiots, he is over the phone on the first call trying to make an appointment....
The answer is i would say ( if being difficult ) - ' send that to me ' - where the sales reps response would be ' I need to show it to you '
theres a lot of junk out there... but this is good =D
omganynameffs 7 months ago
wannabe
iamjordanmetcalf 10 months ago
Last, if this is an elevator pitch, you need to have more information on the company. Yes, it's good to know all of those perks, but I didn't have a clue on what the company was DURING your pitch. You introduced yourself, but It HAS to be in the pitch itself. I would also suggest that the closing that is more specific to your product, even naming your design. Something beginning with, "Intension Interactive..." and then making it specific.
Hope this helps.
akosborn 1 year ago
Second, when you say all the things that your idea can do like revolutionize media, costs nothing to make, etc., don't list each one sounding like a sentence with your voice dropping. They aren't individual sentences, they are a list, and lists use commas. It makes you sound like you're finishing your pitch every time you say each one of the perks.
akosborn 1 year ago
I agree with tvfacetime.
First, If you're not enthusiastic about your own idea or product, why should anyone else? Has any businessman succeeded by being drab and monotone? You don't have to be over-bearing or obnoxious, but be friendly and personable. If you want to grab an audience it's not all about what you're saying, its also about HOW you say it.
akosborn 1 year ago
This one minute pitch is 57 seconds long.
ShowtimeSF 2 years ago
Your shits weak!
fir3ballx3 2 years ago
Be Energetic MEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rohanp1234 2 years ago
sell your enthusiasm not the product
Dhanaviir 3 years ago
lol.. sales pitch? far to many questions.. !! a simple no is in mind.
cjmichael28 3 years ago
Well I'll admit I'm curious about the idea.
visiblemode 5 years ago
Dude! You need some serious help with on-camera presentation! Whatever your message, if you aren't dynamic the conveyance of it, you will not sell it.
Engage the camera with your eyes, tighten the shot. Be more fluid with facial expression, getsiculate when appropriate and most of al be real.
tvfacetime 5 years ago