It's more of a combination of ideas than a song, but there were some sick ideas in there. Plus, sweet arpeggio at 1:58! But what this song really needs is a strong drumbeat, I had trouble gettin in the groove! 4★
Thanks. I was hoping it flowed a bit better. I have almost no experience with drums and am not very good at creating a strong drumbeat. I'll work on it when I get a chance! Thanks again!
I'm not going to kiss your ass, the structure is a bit off (I think) at certain points, but I like how you mixed up the timings and I really admire that you were able to put this together. I mean...believe me, you, it takes a lot for me to structure anything very well much less to present it to the general public so...I admire that.
I understand that, dude. I work on things I want to do in spurts, so I'm surrounded by half finished projects. I'm working right now on speed with my left hand to get it up to par with my right. It hurts! This is a good foundation, though, dude. Like...I'm not this good at structure when it comes to music. I'm wanting to work on the world's worst purposely crappy metal music video soon, though.
It's more of a combination of ideas than a song, but there were some sick ideas in there. Plus, sweet arpeggio at 1:58! But what this song really needs is a strong drumbeat, I had trouble gettin in the groove! 4★
alexorwhatever 1 year ago
Thanks. I was hoping it flowed a bit better. I have almost no experience with drums and am not very good at creating a strong drumbeat. I'll work on it when I get a chance! Thanks again!
shevaneltaketwo 1 year ago
Thanks!
shevaneltaketwo 2 years ago
I'm not going to kiss your ass, the structure is a bit off (I think) at certain points, but I like how you mixed up the timings and I really admire that you were able to put this together. I mean...believe me, you, it takes a lot for me to structure anything very well much less to present it to the general public so...I admire that.
SolaceInEntropy 2 years ago
Yeah, I don't want to say I'm entirely done with it. It does need more work, but I don't have much time anymore to add or come up with any new ideas.
shevaneltaketwo 2 years ago
I understand that, dude. I work on things I want to do in spurts, so I'm surrounded by half finished projects. I'm working right now on speed with my left hand to get it up to par with my right. It hurts! This is a good foundation, though, dude. Like...I'm not this good at structure when it comes to music. I'm wanting to work on the world's worst purposely crappy metal music video soon, though.
SolaceInEntropy 2 years ago
You are a genius! :-) Congratulations.
sweeta666 2 years ago
Thanks!
shevaneltaketwo 2 years ago