Five Tips for Writing - Part One, Planning and Paragraphing

[Fastplod]

they play these in my english class!

[Mexecution19]

OMG YOURE GOLDEN MR.. TEACHER thank you thannk you..!!

[ForumQuide]

Thank you; you're a good teacher.

[dapktwinz]

F.A.P

F- Form

A- Audience

P- Purpose

[TheMusicScape]

i'd give my left testical to have you as a teacher.

[naragala01]

@TheMusicScape Edward sizer hands am i right?

[Ni7u]

Thanxxx A lot it Really helped Me ,You are such as AMEZING sir, I WISH U WER my Teacher! God bless U xx :P

[looizehorsleey]

You sir, are a genius. And truly the God of english. Your videos have helped my class to plan better, just in time for our year 11 mocks(which is tomorrow morning!) Great videos :)

[haydmashroom]

he is really good ;D



[rosie18115]

Best english teacher by far, I still remember all your advice about planning and doing several drafts - St. Aidan's missed you, thanks for these videos, they help me now even at university!

[TheMgallacher]

I have my re - sit in just over an hour. This video has really helped me, thank you so much!

[arunm001]

come to Uxbridge High School i think you would be a great English teacher

[Kursat484]

Could some one help me please i've got an exam next week and i dont know how to compare the methods of poems.

[GMALHI95]

Have this video really useful wasn't really sure on how to put my idea's down. Really wish you were my English teacher learnt more in this video then I have learnt in a year with my own English teacher

[12345cyriac]

i think that you can improve this video by, taking away the squick voice.

[thegingerspud]

hi sir

[pupRu33]

wow, iv got an english GCSE tomorrow on of mice and men and animal farm, and this has been a L-O-T of help. Thanks mate...

[leedonaldt]

the power of Y!!

[OppsyBaybee]

oh my god, i am not even kidding i did the same method for my monday language paper and i had never seen this video before. anyways thankyou for your videos i hope i get at least a B over all. i got paper 2 tomorrow :/

[abbiesomethings]

I've got my paper 2 tomorrow and I found this so useful. I always worry about writing and these tips have really helped. I feel much more confident now. I wish you were my english teacher. Thanks :)

[GigiHuc]

5.use your plan to show structure of your whole writing.

label paragraph order to show flow of your writing and develop so it is more advanced. The simplest of these, in my opinion, is cyclical structure (work begins ends on same point). To show this in your work all you have to do is draw two circles side by side and do 2 or 3 branches off labeling order and righting points but whatever point u write 1st also write for your last, this is an A-A* structure and gives a lot of extra marks.

[lilmizznm]

And war poetry

[lilmizznm]

Can u do a video for aunt julia

[TitanDNB]

I took literally all the information you told in this video and put it into the test. It helped me write in so much more detail! I feel like a total idiot right now, because I wrote so much for question 1 & 2 (20 marks) that I didn't have time for question 3 - Writing a newspaper article (20 marks). Huge disappointment. - I'm on a foundation paper by the way, ~65% = C. I actually felt like crying after the exam. (Yes I'm a guy.) - Now there's no chance of me getting an overall C in English. :(

[randomnssness]

I had my media exam today, I actually randomly watched the french movie about free runners some time before the exam, it was awesome ^_^

[owenowen212]

I had my exam today and, thanks to you, I feel like I rly did my best in it. Thanks so much and keep up your outstanding work!

[UltraGaming786xD]

thenk you very much for that"Y" idea.

[H4CKER2011]

my english teacher is sooo crap thanksss

[amadek8888]

very good and intelligent teacher

[owenowen212]

@skits94

Yeah same here lol. I'm terrible at English and my english teacher Is useless. These videos have proven really useful, I just wish I had found them before the night before the exam!

[skits94]

I have a English exam tomorrow and I had no idea how to plan but now I'm feeling more confident thank you for the inspiration.

Time to kick the exams butt.

[sadkitty195]

@skits94 hey skits, I hope ur exam went well. Did you do AQA english Language or Literature paper? What questions were u asked? ooh and did u do higher or foundation?

[Master1906]

@helpmemrdavies Thank you for this.

[H0tdogCat]

ahhhh we need the other 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ColdCoffy]

Flipping heck, your awesome.

your videos have taught me more than my whole school's education

[zajec11]

2 people dont speak english

[Mrcharliem251]

I have learnt more from this video than i have all term.

[iamnotaterroristtall]

Regarding the one sentence on it's own part, would i need to start a new paragraph after that sentence or perhaps miss a line then write the sentence then miss a line again for a new paragraph?

[cheesus309]

good job, will really help in exams.

[underc0n]

Sexy

[Jokerk1d]

@crazyelliexxxx23 is st.aidens a private or state school

[crazyelliexxx23]

@Jokerk1d it's a state school, pretty good though :)



[erinandchloeshow]

Hello Sir!!! I go to Millthorpe and I love your videos. Even though im only in Year 7 i still watch them and find them very very useful and intesting as well as entertaining. Thank you Sir.

[EMINEMisTHEbest919]

please make more videos

[LashFalse]

I wish I had this sort of education, you rock!

[CreativeGuyKyle]

Dude! Your such a big help :) I feel more conferdent now, thanks (In know I probebly spelt confident wrong :)) Thanks anyway!

[RobynWimblex]

hi this is really helpful but it would really help if you done it for all the poems in cluster one :) but it is really helpful !!!!

[TeRRoRizZe]

quit being a teacher and make more youtube videos. love em so much n there really helpful!!!

[0xxsuperstarxx0]

Can you please make the videos for the other four writing tips as soon as possible. I'm sure they'll help me get a better grade.

[idesignandcreate]

Thanks for the useful tips.

[MindlessMovies]

omg! thanks! exam in 1 hour 10 mins. :(

[georgetaylor100]

are u going to make more videos?

[kakhanded2]

I'm a university student hopeless at writing and this is fabulous!

[shannonmarielee101]

Your a great english teacher, i wish when i went to school we had a teacher like you, good job :)

[gun185]

Is there a part two out?

[rockstrips]

i want u as my english teacher aha

[masikiri]

"you paragraph it because it's cool" looooool mans got jokes!!! very helpfull BTW

[TurkishWarriorking]

Dame :\, I didn't care to plan but now...

Mwahahahahah!

[andrwleong]

Fantastic.

[cherrycakesbaybee]

This is brillaint. I am one of those people that reckons they don't need to plan. You have convinced me to change my ways Mr Davies!

[dreamcastII]

this is a good video indeed

[Aaronhelpsmusic]

you are amazing but leah Oc hates your vids because they are "DRAINING" she says

[emilybigg]

yeah and night of the scorpian too please :)

[Hakman7863]

Great tip about isolating paragraphs...

[Edwards3Carrots]

Could you possibly make a video for blessing?