wow sounds great! have confidence in your singing is good. Bob Dylan and Neil young launched careers with average voices. your lyrics are good but feel free to belt it out. the chorus is stong but some of the verses get thin. I have some songs i've put up, i would love another musicians option. good job!
Yeah I play drums. but the ones I used for this song were from the keyboard, I dont have a good drumset. My type of music is.. well, almost all type of music.
I love the song, the melody, the bridge... I think it is very well made and structured. I am very impressed. Sometime you have to show me the lyrics because I couldn't understand the whole thing.
You had good reason to smile at the end of this lovely song. Color in music is created by mixing in various sounds. This song is musically colorful. When you release your next vid, focus on bringing out every word of the lyrics. The music should compliment to words. You are a great songwriter for your age. BRAVO! SR
a couple of things to say...first, i think you have a good blend of instruments here (though the voice is too low in the mix)... also, i particularly like the section at 2:50 (bridge?). overall i think you did a good job here!
Nicely done. Your guitar work is strong and interesting with a pleasant full sound. As others have noted, the vocal track was a little lost in the mix, but that'll come. Thanks for posting!
awesome song, david, wow, it's so well put together and all the parts are great. The lyrics are also really beautiful, I'm sure it was a blessing to your friend:) I'll pray that God will continue to minister His love to your friend during this tough time.God bless you. :)
I love this song! You did a great job incorporating the musical parts! I'm going to feature it! (Can't wait until you put a song similar to this one together, using the lyrics we may be working on together.) SR
That's Robison. (No big deal, though; spelled wrong all the time:) I'm hard of hearing. Couldn't understand all the words of this song. What words I could hear were nice, as well as the melody and chords. Keep of the great work! SR
That's nothing, my dear friend! When he collaborate on a song and sign the papers for that first million, then we'll worry about the correct spelling of our names:) SR Keep 'em comin', man!! SR
wow sounds great! have confidence in your singing is good. Bob Dylan and Neil young launched careers with average voices. your lyrics are good but feel free to belt it out. the chorus is stong but some of the verses get thin. I have some songs i've put up, i would love another musicians option. good job!
Luke0net 4 years ago
Oooh nice! Thanks for watching and the comment! I don't like my voice that much, but I love writing and the guitar.
wastedguitar0 3 years ago
kudos 2 you
lindsaylovee1234 4 years ago
Thanks
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
WOW!!
Great video & music-song ☆! Well done☆! Outstanding☆! Cool☆! ☆☆☆☆☆♣♣♣♣♣ 5 Paws Up ♣♣♣♣♣☆☆☆☆☆
austinsplace 4 years ago
Thanks!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
que linda cancion felicitacioness
buen trabajo chaoop:)
natalia092 4 years ago
Gracias!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
I love this song I favorited it and you get 5 stars but if i could give you more stars I would.....
nosibor 4 years ago
Thanks Mr. Robison.
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
I loved it!
keep it up man
LaiYouttitham 4 years ago
Thanks! And thanks for the sub!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
That's a lot of talent for one so young! You have a future in music, I believe. God bless, Jon
FlyingHorseKnuckles 4 years ago
Thanks a lot! God bless.
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
dude I hope you have a band cause you rock
rocknrollers08 4 years ago
Thanks man! I'm in a few.
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Wow! Nice song! Good editing too!
guitmartiman 4 years ago
Thanks!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
I still like this song. ;D One of my many favorites.
BamItsJenn 4 years ago
aww :3 thanks =]
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
:) you're great :)
glad to get your friend invite :)
keep up the good work boy :)
Cheers
Kim
kim013523 4 years ago
=) thanks!! I've been working on another one, and I'll upload a preview of what the music sounds like today.
Thanks for the comment.
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
do u play drums.....?....well i platy guitar all kinds...b-4 u ask...bass piano and drums....but w/e...my type of muic is different
planets56 4 years ago
Yeah I play drums. but the ones I used for this song were from the keyboard, I dont have a good drumset. My type of music is.. well, almost all type of music.
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
sweet
planets56 4 years ago
....play me some metal....
planets56 4 years ago
Umm, okay, I'll make a metal song one of these days
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
This one is very good. Congratulations for the video too.
domivargio 4 years ago
Thanks a lot!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
hey dude.. that was really cool ;) I was almost crying LoL.. good song ;)
realliveone 4 years ago
jaja Thanks a lot!!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
aces im suscribing =P
1kenny111 4 years ago
Thaaanks!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
amazing~!
snowyrulzO7 4 years ago
Thanks!!! and thanks fro subscribing!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
WOW!!! *Speechless*
mrrad1 4 years ago
Thanks!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
good job~keep it up!=)
Purplecomb 4 years ago
Thanks! =)
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
that was sweet.keep it up.
sweetcutefrisky 4 years ago
Thanks!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
I love the song, the melody, the bridge... I think it is very well made and structured. I am very impressed. Sometime you have to show me the lyrics because I couldn't understand the whole thing.
ancusman 4 years ago
hehe thanks!!! It'd be cool if you sang this song sometime!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Very nice my friend :D !
I like it 5/5 !
Chronofaith 4 years ago
Thanks Cronofaith!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
It's really good!
~Metallicamaster007
Metallicamaster007 4 years ago
Thanks~
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
You had good reason to smile at the end of this lovely song. Color in music is created by mixing in various sounds. This song is musically colorful. When you release your next vid, focus on bringing out every word of the lyrics. The music should compliment to words. You are a great songwriter for your age. BRAVO! SR
nosibor 4 years ago
Thanks!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Hey, nice song and good video editing.
Don
Dweb98 4 years ago
Thanks Don!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
a couple of things to say...first, i think you have a good blend of instruments here (though the voice is too low in the mix)... also, i particularly like the section at 2:50 (bridge?). overall i think you did a good job here!
songsbymikedotnet 4 years ago
Thank you!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Hey David, I seriously love this song. It's awesome.
BGSFilms 4 years ago
Thanks Brandon!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Nicely done. Your guitar work is strong and interesting with a pleasant full sound. As others have noted, the vocal track was a little lost in the mix, but that'll come. Thanks for posting!
garageprophet 4 years ago
Thanks a lot!!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
nice tune and great job man! a little reverb at the voice and it have more volumen
oldie1001 4 years ago
Thanks for the suggestion!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
awesome song, david, wow, it's so well put together and all the parts are great. The lyrics are also really beautiful, I'm sure it was a blessing to your friend:) I'll pray that God will continue to minister His love to your friend during this tough time.God bless you. :)
stringsandflute 4 years ago
Thanks a lot Katherine! God bless you!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
hey, lovely song! I really like it 5*
asidgw19 4 years ago
Thank you!!!! I like your songs too.
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Well done! Good job!
townstra 4 years ago
Thank you!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Beautiful song David, I'm very impressed..5 and faved
Rocket
Ottawarocket 4 years ago
thanks a lot Rocket!!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
I love this song! You did a great job incorporating the musical parts! I'm going to feature it! (Can't wait until you put a song similar to this one together, using the lyrics we may be working on together.) SR
nosibor 4 years ago
Mr. Robinson thanks a million!!!!! This really helps a lot!! Thank you! I'm looking foward to Touching with the Heart too! GBU
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
That's Robison. (No big deal, though; spelled wrong all the time:) I'm hard of hearing. Couldn't understand all the words of this song. What words I could hear were nice, as well as the melody and chords. Keep of the great work! SR
nosibor 4 years ago
wow... I never really noticed I was spelling it wrong all the time Sorry about that. :(
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
That's nothing, my dear friend! When he collaborate on a song and sign the papers for that first million, then we'll worry about the correct spelling of our names:) SR Keep 'em comin', man!! SR
nosibor 4 years ago
hehehe ok!!! My last name is harder to spell though ^_^
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Nice song dude ;)
bbsb300 4 years ago
Thanks a lot!!!!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Enjoyed that! Cheers!
EdMuirton 4 years ago
Thanks mr. Ed!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Great song... and it's interesting to see/listen you combine all the different parts.
You got talent, man.
danbergam 4 years ago
Thank you!!! It really means a lot!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Excellent work again man, and keep creating. Music is your friend, as well. APB
lanemergess 4 years ago
Thanks man!!!
wastedguitar0 4 years ago
Anytime.
lanemergess 4 years ago
Beautiful Song...What a Loving Giving Heart...GBY
thelordscall 4 years ago
Thanks a lot!!!! GBY
wastedguitar0 4 years ago