digged the song alot, smoked a bowl lol tripped out on the fast and slow shit lmao! the guys that called u a fag and fukin gay guy, yeah they r fukin douche bags and probably arent doin shit with ther lives and if i could, i would love to punch them in there douche bag mouths! good job bro...
This song is soooo awesome. I absolutely loved it! Making the crazy fun XD Plus, my favorite animal is the penguin (Unofficial symbol of the libertarian! =P) So you are super amazing in m book all the way around.
i was in a very bad mude and i just sent somthing i norwegian to you, witch was very rud. and i am very sorry. i hadent seen the song, but i watched the movie and it turned my song around... very nice:)
I thought it was pretty good. Just all them afects with yer voice at the end. It would sound cool if instead of the effects with yer voice have like a girl singing that part.
wonderful song..it's got it all..originality humour and all those good stuff..it's a song that will lkeep me roring of laughter for hours...haha keep it up
This is really awesome... but it'd be better if you're gonna left the "chipmonk"-voice and this stuff after that outside. A "normal" version as mp3 would be very genial!
Nice song. You should put mp3's on putfile or something ;) I would've like to hear the whole thing without the squeaky FX etc. I think you may be overdoing it a tad... But keep up the song-writing.
I liked this song a lot. You really like using the chimpmonk and evil dude effects though. That could be left out. Although if you sang normal but used the affect to make the guitar faster in the chipmonk section, that'd be okay too. (: Okay you probably have no idea what I'm talking about so, I'll get outta here. Great lyrics/song though!
First off I would like to say... I love the shirt. Okay... I really don't care if you read off the screen, and you do have a talent for writing lyrics even if it was experimental. And also... If you have time look at one of my videos... My friends are crazy and amoung other things insane, none of them are sane.
I kind of write lyrics and poetry and I see where you are getting at sort of, so keep up the good work :D. Sepia Out.
xSepia, Thanks ^_^ I commented on your video and I look forward to your comments in the future (and also the past videos)! dfhjskdhghnbvkdfhfsgsksdhgkdhg...............fgjsj
Well, not necessarily picky.. But you seem as if you are the... 'Immature' style. Not.. Love. If you understand what I mean... =/ So, yeah. I'm just trying to find someone...'Worthwhile' in 'reading' my poetry =] Anyway, cheers! =D
Ahah -_-" All my poems show affections of love. I don't think you'll be my suitable candidate. But, overall, great job, and hoping to see more from this talented young fellow. (You ARE young... Aren't you? =/)
Oh, and also. (Sorry for double posting) As CryKoda has mentioned, your words don't seem to... Find the beat. Although I'm no song artist, I do have potential in poetry, so if you'd like, I COULD revise your lyrics, and tone them up. Of course, if you'd like, and to your music. Anyway, good job, and keep up the good work. Wishes for the best, --azn4ever60
azn4ever60, post all you want :P. Anyways this song was mainly experimental, i've never done a song like this with such a weird beat as the vocals come but it was interesting to see the results. Also don't bother reviseing the song but I sure wouldn't mind taking a stab at making music with on of your poems ^_^!
Yes, I have no videos submitted on YouTube, but I believe that this video was worth my comment. Anyway, onwards with the critism !
You have noticed that maybe you should have put more effort into memorization. You see, with memorization, you won't spend as much time 'reading' off your piece of paper. Instead, you could focus on your emotions throughout the song. You have talent, use it to the fullest of it's potential.
azn4ever60, Thanks for your comment, memorization only comes to me when I'm actually interested in a song (this is one of those songs I make at a drop of a hat). So until I find myself spending a week just making a song, just bear with me as I glance at the screen. Thanks for you advice though ^_^.
ok i think you met me and wrote that song about me cause thats exactly who i am, seriously, the whole song i can relate well except the 'Now with all that I said and done ladies can I get ride?' part cause well i have a car and i dont like the ladies, but besides that yeah.....anyways yeah the songs awsome! i hope there will be more!
i hope when you come to the line , Is all my new friends crazy, save me ! you are not talking about me. anyway cos you didn't have tell me i was crazy i already knew oh i saw Birth and guess what ? the main charachters name is Shawn ! haha and Click was good too. Shawn you are such good songwriter . but ahhhh! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MY EYES ARE BLEEDING BITCH! haha just kidding that was beautiful. you're chipmunk and demon have names? okay haha beautiful haha
CryKoda, Thanks for your constructive critizm, I appreictate it (man, I suck a spelling D:) Anyways, yeah I was reading off the paper, I'm not so hot with remmebering things.
I disagree I've been singing since I was little and sides the chorus needing a little more passion to it and the chipmunk parts his singing is pretty good also props for playing an instrument ^^
HOLIDAY FROM GREEN DAY!
giulianosky 3 months ago
digged the song alot, smoked a bowl lol tripped out on the fast and slow shit lmao! the guys that called u a fag and fukin gay guy, yeah they r fukin douche bags and probably arent doin shit with ther lives and if i could, i would love to punch them in there douche bag mouths! good job bro...
jmcdaniel2308 5 months ago
This song is soooo awesome. I absolutely loved it! Making the crazy fun XD Plus, my favorite animal is the penguin (Unofficial symbol of the libertarian! =P) So you are super amazing in m book all the way around.
Painter1311 7 months ago
ahahahaha!!!! GENTLEMEN AND ....OTHER PEOPOLE...!!!!
AHAHAHAHA XD
alexanderpoulakhs 11 months ago
your are super good(:
ahaha. this song is beast.
love your guitar skills!
bLaKe12bLaIr 1 year ago
that wasnt bad actually :P
lilwayne123ish 1 year ago
You're shirt is crazy.
/Tune your guitar.
FreeTalkLive 1 year ago
du suger
ludvig421 1 year ago
FAG
poyo503 1 year ago
@poyo503 FABULOUS AND GREAT
Punkrockerpixistix 8 months ago
fuckin gay guy lmfao hahahahahaha you suck dick. dnt sing anymore you are scaring all the gurlz away
mhsm22 2 years ago
still great song
MinosDaedalus 2 years ago
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marvelfett2 2 years ago
not u mariokart mayhem block him, he really sux
Mrcool354 3 years ago
great
mariokartmayhem 3 years ago
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noob, ur gay
Mrcool354 3 years ago
LLOOOOOLL
foggyoo 3 years ago
i was in a very bad mude and i just sent somthing i norwegian to you, witch was very rud. and i am very sorry. i hadent seen the song, but i watched the movie and it turned my song around... very nice:)
sk8erhenning 3 years ago
du suger hare sameballer. gå runk en ku!!! du er ikke morsom... nå har du hørt hva jeg mener.
sk8erhenning 3 years ago 4
why are commenting in Danish? well I don't think he cares about what you mean, and neither do I
vqlinh 3 years ago
I wish I could marry you !!!! hehehehe
alpasfree 3 years ago
Gentlemen. And...Other people. lol
boy818tho 3 years ago
loooooollllllllllloooooooooollllllllllllllllllooooooooooollllllllllllllllll
orangekittykatz 3 years ago 6
I like it and you do play the guitar very well.
SVHSFOOTBALL21 3 years ago
haha. i like the way you played the guitarrrr its soundddedd niceee.
davidbeckhamlvr7 3 years ago
ur good on the guitar
ibizajurij 3 years ago 2
ehats that the tune to?
brendanbrendanbear 3 years ago 2
:D I loved it. XD when the voices changed, lmao.
happyhoursfuneral 3 years ago 3
can you send me the TABS?
ide apriceate it..
By the the way awsome song, i think the chorus' guitar has a good sound to it
BucketHippo 3 years ago 3
Gentlemen. And...Other people.
lol.
I think that that ws the best part, dude. It was freaking hilarious. Or maybe I'm just tired. lol
iheartJosephlotz 3 years ago
Hm. It wasn't that bad actually. Keep it up.
MeiSakura14 3 years ago 4
Not bad, :) keep goin love.
XxxX
MeowQueen22 3 years ago
lolxxxxx
x0ska8rgirl0x 3 years ago
i thought the song was GREAT!!!!!!!
until u started singing liek a chipmunk
then it just got stupid
doit again with out the chipmunk speed thingy!
an it would be alsome!!!!!!!
novakcane 3 years ago
wow ur r so weird? the song suets u very well
CairineA 4 years ago
i like it, a lil' fast, but pretty good. :)
SunKimono 4 years ago
aload of shyt tbh =]
abzxilyx 4 years ago
Beaner
stargaterocks001 4 years ago
That is an awesome song xD
Tilerak 4 years ago
sweet speeding up skillz lol :p
utubehatesmyusername 4 years ago
are u a mongo ur something???
kimjaran 4 years ago
its fucken gay
hahahaha no joke learn how to wright songs an sing
elephantlover9 4 years ago
This coming from a guy who has three highschool musical songs favorited.
shineglosun 3 years ago
dude the guitar rithem sounds like holdiday from greenday
ParriII 4 years ago
Agreed
narutofan818 4 years ago
it sounds ok i think you should make it a little slower on the guitar the lyrics are cool... laters
nehmehmoopgabby 4 years ago
I thought it was pretty good. Just all them afects with yer voice at the end. It would sound cool if instead of the effects with yer voice have like a girl singing that part.
boxbreaker1607 4 years ago
i hate mexicans
tom180u 4 years ago
rofl from what u said in beggining i thought it was ganna suck...but itsa good song...
whiskylimped 4 years ago
made me smile... cheered up my day... you're awesome.
NavyRL 4 years ago
that was very wierd good funnny but very wierd
scotlandwillbefree 4 years ago
PLUS IT SUCKS!!!
mtnbkr6090 4 years ago
you bored after 15 seconds!!!
mtnbkr6090 4 years ago
ur a greaqt singer and guitarist, but i didn't really understand the lyrics, maybe its just me...
tordack 4 years ago
The song sounds really good! The lyrics and the beat is perfect!
Cedezz 4 years ago
thats freak en awesome
piff2323 4 years ago
thats cool man good work
cruzazul2012 4 years ago
I would like to here Sharon, Lois & Bram sing I`m sowly going crazy.
announcermike 4 years ago
i think its really kool and your singing
spriterose 4 years ago
I like the tune of the song alot !
enquvist 4 years ago
decent song but ur a queer kunt
kronstar123 4 years ago
rofl
Dusevic 4 years ago
the song is ok but i don't think you sing too good but you sing ok. I love it anyway XD
ihavelongname 5 years ago
I wanna put that song on my iPod but how!? >;o
shootchew 5 years ago
Awh, cute XD I love your singing, and it didnt make my eyes and ears bleed -Adds it to favs- Its so gooooooooood!
shootchew 5 years ago
this is pretty good... way better than anything i could come up with lol =P
hyphy4lyphy 5 years ago
holy shit i am tromatised
KH2RULEMYVIDEO 5 years ago
it's the biggest ass on the world and so stupid!!
Ersguterplueschtier 5 years ago
Not bad.
sunshineanddinosaurs 5 years ago
this shit is gay and stupid for fags like you suck balls and im going to sue you for making mi eyes anears blead
2scarface2 5 years ago
And I'm going to sue you for butchering the english language.
sunshineanddinosaurs 5 years ago
wow u shud go in to da music ind. u kno ur like wkd
shan290 5 years ago
HAHAHAHAHA UR SOO GAY bless lol x
beckymaywilliams 5 years ago
My ears blead!
Dicestar5 5 years ago
I have always loved this song. ADORE the fast and slow parts.
domovoi14 5 years ago
enough with the hair do...emo guys lol loved that part
TeamFilms 5 years ago
AMAZING! id really like it way better though if u didnt speed it up or slow it down though...maybe you could release another version?
TeamFilms 5 years ago
DUDE! ur show is awsome and i love this song and the youtube song to...keep it up!
micavity 5 years ago
thats an awsome song fair play i like it that is my type of song !!
Well done mate some good words there like the rhythem
joshere123 5 years ago
This is awesome you should be in the Music ind. cuz u r awesome
Lilmsaryn14 5 years ago
Sharpy, Shut the hell up... Noob
NeverFoundOut2 5 years ago
ur twats to tink that
lol
sharpy7777 5 years ago
still a very good song
robinrally116 5 years ago
he must like green day it's a green day bit in the guitar
robinrally116 5 years ago
wonderful song..it's got it all..originality humour and all those good stuff..it's a song that will lkeep me roring of laughter for hours...haha keep it up
dodoheads 5 years ago
well done
000000conor 5 years ago
I really liked the words near the end. The part that goes: I'll make a fool of myself for you so you don't have to cry, ect from that point. Yes.
IrkenAlchemist 5 years ago
Man, dont listen those guys which says that sux, You have future man, I really like your songs, keep doing good! greetz
mugenwu 5 years ago
This is really awesome... but it'd be better if you're gonna left the "chipmonk"-voice and this stuff after that outside. A "normal" version as mp3 would be very genial!
MinosDaedalus 5 years ago
I want this song on mp3 its my favourite
PunkStar2006 5 years ago
This guy is an awesome songwriter I love his songs!!
PunkStar2006 5 years ago
I love the song its good
PunkStar2006 5 years ago
Nice song. You should put mp3's on putfile or something ;) I would've like to hear the whole thing without the squeaky FX etc. I think you may be overdoing it a tad... But keep up the song-writing.
whothehellisthat 5 years ago
I liked this song a lot. You really like using the chimpmonk and evil dude effects though. That could be left out. Although if you sang normal but used the affect to make the guitar faster in the chipmonk section, that'd be okay too. (: Okay you probably have no idea what I'm talking about so, I'll get outta here. Great lyrics/song though!
atbi85 5 years ago
this is actually pretty good, keep up the good work.
sharon12321 5 years ago
wot notes u play send them in order to me pleasse its awesome
popzwombat 5 years ago
Pink is a good color for you my sexy goofy friend, or is it goofy sexy..hmmm try it with your collar up and dark sunglasses.
i liked the high speed guitar playing, could it be mixed with your normal voice? Can you sing in spanish or french..or russian..mmmmm
timefire 5 years ago
First off I would like to say... I love the shirt. Okay... I really don't care if you read off the screen, and you do have a talent for writing lyrics even if it was experimental. And also... If you have time look at one of my videos... My friends are crazy and amoung other things insane, none of them are sane.
I kind of write lyrics and poetry and I see where you are getting at sort of, so keep up the good work :D. Sepia Out.
xSepia 5 years ago
xSepia, Thanks ^_^ I commented on your video and I look forward to your comments in the future (and also the past videos)! dfhjskdhghnbvkdfhfsgsksdhgkdhg...............fgjsj
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
GAH! BLASTED WIRELESS KEYBOARD >_<! ....bugga
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
Well, not necessarily picky.. But you seem as if you are the... 'Immature' style. Not.. Love. If you understand what I mean... =/ So, yeah. I'm just trying to find someone...'Worthwhile' in 'reading' my poetry =] Anyway, cheers! =D
azn4ever60 5 years ago
Ahah -_-" All my poems show affections of love. I don't think you'll be my suitable candidate. But, overall, great job, and hoping to see more from this talented young fellow. (You ARE young... Aren't you? =/)
azn4ever60 5 years ago
azn4ever60, Picky now aren't we? lol kidding. (I'm 19 years old but a kid at heart ^_^).
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
Oh, and also. (Sorry for double posting) As CryKoda has mentioned, your words don't seem to... Find the beat. Although I'm no song artist, I do have potential in poetry, so if you'd like, I COULD revise your lyrics, and tone them up. Of course, if you'd like, and to your music. Anyway, good job, and keep up the good work. Wishes for the best, --azn4ever60
azn4ever60 5 years ago
azn4ever60, post all you want :P. Anyways this song was mainly experimental, i've never done a song like this with such a weird beat as the vocals come but it was interesting to see the results. Also don't bother reviseing the song but I sure wouldn't mind taking a stab at making music with on of your poems ^_^!
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
Yes, I have no videos submitted on YouTube, but I believe that this video was worth my comment. Anyway, onwards with the critism !
You have noticed that maybe you should have put more effort into memorization. You see, with memorization, you won't spend as much time 'reading' off your piece of paper. Instead, you could focus on your emotions throughout the song. You have talent, use it to the fullest of it's potential.
Anyway, wishes for the best,
--azn4ever60
azn4ever60 5 years ago
azn4ever60, Thanks for your comment, memorization only comes to me when I'm actually interested in a song (this is one of those songs I make at a drop of a hat). So until I find myself spending a week just making a song, just bear with me as I glance at the screen. Thanks for you advice though ^_^.
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
ok i think you met me and wrote that song about me cause thats exactly who i am, seriously, the whole song i can relate well except the 'Now with all that I said and done ladies can I get ride?' part cause well i have a car and i dont like the ladies, but besides that yeah.....anyways yeah the songs awsome! i hope there will be more!
woodstock2004 5 years ago
how can people hate your shirt?!! i love it (and you)!=)
sunshinedsky 5 years ago
HAHAHAH best song dude, i loved when it slowed down haha and the chorus
clarkkent74 5 years ago
im sorry...but i hate that shirt...yucky caca!!! i love that song..though... ^_^ adiós materia caliente!!
Diddle04 5 years ago
you're great!!
I still love you <3
frenchdreamer 5 years ago
Shaweet! Song rocked...and so did the shirt...huh?
bucknut8604 5 years ago
You do realise how handsome you are, right?
SeeVeeBee 5 years ago
i hope when you come to the line , Is all my new friends crazy, save me ! you are not talking about me. anyway cos you didn't have tell me i was crazy i already knew oh i saw Birth and guess what ? the main charachters name is Shawn ! haha and Click was good too. Shawn you are such good songwriter . but ahhhh! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MY EYES ARE BLEEDING BITCH! haha just kidding that was beautiful. you're chipmunk and demon have names? okay haha beautiful haha
heymey 5 years ago
lol I love your elated look Yeah? Yeah? ... then your dejected look no? oh...ok..*sigh*
BlueMoonCaptive 5 years ago
REAL MEN WEAR PINK!
RawSlade 5 years ago
RawSlade, &%$# YEAH!
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
yes I know :D
shockXmeXdead 5 years ago
I like your shirt :D
Loved the song
shockXmeXdead 5 years ago
shockXmeXdead, Sweet times 2!
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
you need to make the words flow better, seemed like you were just reading them..
but i liked the song ^^ good job!
lmfao the fast and slow part was funyn as hell
CryKoda 5 years ago
CryKoda, Thanks for your constructive critizm, I appreictate it (man, I suck a spelling D:) Anyways, yeah I was reading off the paper, I'm not so hot with remmebering things.
SpikeDaPenguin 5 years ago
I disagree I've been singing since I was little and sides the chorus needing a little more passion to it and the chipmunk parts his singing is pretty good also props for playing an instrument ^^
MidnightDreamer123 5 years ago