Well that sucks! What happens in the story...not the story itself cause that rocks!!! Love it! I decided to start reading this series so here i am and i like it!!!
oh gosh, looks so sad! and now i can't help but keep reading because I'm about to go to sleep but i don't want to go to sleep thinking about nick doing that shit!
Instead of "Tomorrow, the boys were comming home" it should be "Tomorrow, the boys are coming home" small grammer adjustment but other than that it's great ! i'll deff. be reading. Check out my stories, tell me what you think please(:
It's really good so far! I criticize my writing all the time. lol. You have a lot of comments on every chapter and 30 subs already. That's pretty awesome. It took me a while to get to 30 subscribers. And I still don't get more than 10 comments on a chapter haha. I saw the thing on your channel about cougfanakd102... she's amazing, isn't she? Have you read Shay081793's series? They are absolutely incredible. Probably my new favorite series actually =)
Awesome intro!! Reading all ur stories today!
XdemiXjoeXjemi 1 year ago
i just got your friend request, and started to read this story right here, and im already loving it! thanksss ! btw, who is the girl? selena i hope?
aJessicaBarbie 1 year ago
today...u sent me a frend request
today...i excepted it
today...i read ur stories
and today....i loved it!!!!!!! lol, the way u started it was pure GENEIOUS!!!!! LOVE IT:)
LuvsToLaughGirl 2 years ago
Whoa the way you wrote that was just....AWESOME!! like duh...
XxGeorgeBananaxX 2 years ago
Well that sucks! What happens in the story...not the story itself cause that rocks!!! Love it! I decided to start reading this series so here i am and i like it!!!
silverguitar92 2 years ago
omg!!! im going to have to sub :D this sounds amazing!!
snowfoxangel1996 2 years ago
sounds amazing!! sorry I didnt read your comment till today... oops :)
cubscutie928 2 years ago
sounds really good
i just foudn you commented on my page saying read your story so yeaah, and i love it even tho im just on the intro :D
musiccloverx 2 years ago
I loved the intro!!! I'm going to read more!!!
NKIqbal 2 years ago
omj, lol i LOVE it! i'm gonna go read chapter 1 now...lol
Jonasbrosgurl4ever 2 years ago
seriously the BEST intro ever!!
ElizaLuvsU94 2 years ago
oh gosh, looks so sad! and now i can't help but keep reading because I'm about to go to sleep but i don't want to go to sleep thinking about nick doing that shit!
JoBroLoveStoryz 2 years ago
OMG :) Im sooo glad you told me to read your series! they;re amazing.. even though i haven't read the first chapter.. i KNOW it will be awsome!
unspeakable09 2 years ago
whoaaa
i just started reading
that was amazing
seriously
wow
great jobb (:
xxMissNickJonasxx5 2 years ago
Instead of "Tomorrow, the boys were comming home" it should be "Tomorrow, the boys are coming home" small grammer adjustment but other than that it's great ! i'll deff. be reading. Check out my stories, tell me what you think please(:
x872ax 2 years ago
wow im reading
xxsmadanxx 2 years ago
oh my god, wow. thats one of the best intros i have ever read.! i love it so far!!
iheartjonas23 2 years ago
wow, i loved the intro!
coeyjbfan93 2 years ago
good(:
jonasanwrestling16 2 years ago
Wow Nick sounds like an Ass so far!
JessiluvsJB19 2 years ago
whoa!
thats.....sad!
how dare u Nick!
I'm soooooo happy u asked me to read ur series!
iluvjaj94 2 years ago
whoooo hoooo!! u go girl!
AllStarzShow 2 years ago
that's sad,like seriously I could cry :'(
but with just this you've gotten a new subcriber/reeaderrr<33
khoskins12 2 years ago
omg im so subscribing. i love how you did this[= legit.
snwbordluvr23 2 years ago
It's awesome so far
jbfangirl101 2 years ago
omg sounds awesome!
:D I am going to read it
xImOnlyMeWhnImWithUx 2 years ago
oh my jonas i cant wait 2 read this series 2day!! :)
TheJonasBrotherslvr 2 years ago
Wow, that was an awesome intro :) Great job! :)
DisneyGirl476 2 years ago
sounds awesome! :)
juliamauch 2 years ago
i like it so far.... going to read the rest :D
skatingjbfan08 2 years ago
That's a WHOLE lot better than my into's!!
Good job :D
cobierocks102 2 years ago
ohhmygod,
this is so lovely written.
well done...off to read the rest!
bianca960903 2 years ago
aww this is great... can't wait to read more!
erin206251413 2 years ago
ok, starting to check this out ;)
jessicannamaria 2 years ago
Loved it :)
JBstories023 2 years ago
woohoo. sounds good. sad, but good.
jbumpus001 2 years ago
Honestly, this was one of the best intros I think I've ever read. I'm gonna go read the rest... haha =)
JonasLove916 2 years ago
Thanks!
(:
Hope you like the rest, which I think sucks. lol. But that's just me. I criticize my writing a lot. Haha.
xxDasweetiexx 2 years ago
It's really good so far! I criticize my writing all the time. lol. You have a lot of comments on every chapter and 30 subs already. That's pretty awesome. It took me a while to get to 30 subscribers. And I still don't get more than 10 comments on a chapter haha. I saw the thing on your channel about cougfanakd102... she's amazing, isn't she? Have you read Shay081793's series? They are absolutely incredible. Probably my new favorite series actually =)
JonasLove916 2 years ago
Thanksss again.
& I guess I'm doing good. Don't really know. Lol.. and yes cougfanakd102 is! Favorite writer on youtube.
and, really? I have to check it out sometime. (:
xxDasweetiexx 2 years ago
You should, it's amazing. It's called "If We Kiss" and I'm so addicted to it now =)
JonasLove916 2 years ago
what was that song called in the intro? please respond and omg love the intro
Brittney0331 2 years ago
Come in with the rain by Taylor Swift. lol. I love it.
xxDasweetiexx 2 years ago
awesome
xoFelishxo 2 years ago
that was really really great!
nickjismyfavrit 2 years ago
That was really great!
TheRealKennaNicole 2 years ago
aww.... great intro!!! stupid Nick...
minnieiscool 2 years ago
Looks good! :)
cocobean30012 2 years ago
this is rly good!
4evrtaylorswift 2 years ago
OMG that was a good intro :)
and sad :'(
JonasIsLove2013 2 years ago
Thats a REALLY good intro.
BexMinexx3 2 years ago
It was awesome loved it :D
xSummertwilightxx 2 years ago
Great intro =D
Jonastasticfan 2 years ago