Best line of all. My God. Tell me you guys are gonna make another one. A lot of people would so love to see more of these, you guys should consider a career in this.
Aside from what everyone else has already told you, I have a couple things that couldhelp it be better. There's a dialogue thing in the beginning; Dex repeating 'coming along' isn't the way that people talk, though that was might have been Dexter being awkward. Jeremy blatantly goes after HanShotFirst in front of the teacher. No way that would fly. And when you shadow-stab Jeremy, he should have his head up, arms straining against the plastic, *something*. Nobody accepts being stabbed passively.
Coolness. I liked the lens flare with the kill room, and the humor was awesome - 'even on the internet, I don't know how to smile'. Masuka was pretty funny too, and the soundtrack was right on point.
That girl who notices Dexter by name when he's going after Jeremy could be a problem later.
My issue is that it is modern (red bull, facebook etc), dexter seemed to be social (I remember him being completely isolated until he was married), the lack of cold logic (by this dexter) and his code states he should only kill those who *murder* and feel no remorse but other than that...I loved this piece of work. Glad to see Masuka finally got some real action and not pay for it. Kudos to you. :)
@jallison71 I agree, though I really think Dex wouldn't limit his search to his own college campus, let alone his own class. It would draw too much suspicion.
The execution is damn near perfect. You did the best with the equipment you had. Some of the actors could use a few classes though, and the writing was kind of weak at some points.
Pretty near perfect distillation of everything that makes Dexter...Dexter. Except I was waiting to find out the guy killed someone. I guess there's pry not as many killers on campus, so Dexter would have to settle on cheaters if he wanted to have time to maintain his GPA :P
I don't know if anybody else noticed this and if it is a coincidence. But "Julie Carpenter" could be a combination the actresses' name of Deb and Rita. "Julie Benz" and "Jennifer Carpenter".
This is SO AWESOME!!! I'm a huge Dexter fan and you guys did a really fantastic job! The lead actor really did capture a lot of Dexter's mannerisms, really great job!
Good filmmaking here but there were so many things that would get you caught. Also, there were several things that wouldn't have existed when Dexter was in college like Red Bull, thin laptops and Facebook.
this was actually really good, good acting and execution. but i have some problems with dexters choice in victim. mostly because he does not follow the code. its hardly dexter without the code. dex kills those who kill. never have i seen him kill for somthing as innocent as cheating on tests....kindof a plot inconsistancy next time his victim needs to be a murderer so that dexters kill is within the bounds of the code. also ease up on the one liners.
"Shit My Paper!"
Best line of all. My God. Tell me you guys are gonna make another one. A lot of people would so love to see more of these, you guys should consider a career in this.
Elyograg1 1 week ago
"I have my own ways of getting high." Perfect line.
But Dexter would never kill someone for cheating in school...
ElCavalier2010 1 month ago
@ElCavalier2010 Well,Dexter killed someone for raping girls and posting it on the internet in the first season.
buzzy0016 1 month ago in playlist More videos from dormroomdexter
amazing
cooldogcool51 1 month ago
This is genius. Awesome job!
KelseyLynnMusic 1 month ago in playlist More videos from dormroomdexter
lol im never cheating
theoutcaststore 1 month ago
Great job!
MrRenegadeMuffin 2 months ago in playlist More videos from dormroomdexter
I really like this. You guys did a great job!
I'll continue watching if you make more because it's an interesting take.
A couple problems with canon for the television series, though:
Dexter dropped out of Med School. I believe around the time Harry became ill.
Harry died when Dexter was 20 years old. And his first kill was actually the nurse that was poisoning Harry during his hospital stay.
Despite that, I really do find this entertaining!
JRemrey 2 months ago
Aside from what everyone else has already told you, I have a couple things that couldhelp it be better. There's a dialogue thing in the beginning; Dex repeating 'coming along' isn't the way that people talk, though that was might have been Dexter being awkward. Jeremy blatantly goes after HanShotFirst in front of the teacher. No way that would fly. And when you shadow-stab Jeremy, he should have his head up, arms straining against the plastic, *something*. Nobody accepts being stabbed passively.
ladylaurel18 2 months ago
Coolness. I liked the lens flare with the kill room, and the humor was awesome - 'even on the internet, I don't know how to smile'. Masuka was pretty funny too, and the soundtrack was right on point.
That girl who notices Dexter by name when he's going after Jeremy could be a problem later.
ladylaurel18 2 months ago
wow, oh wow. incredible, you took yourselves seriously, I love it!
321erup123 2 months ago
9:33 Dexter has some nice audience up there.
ubarevilage 2 months ago
r u doing more of these?
TheAtlbravesfan29 2 months ago in playlist Favorite videos
Probably the most entertaining youtube video I have ever seen.
KyleSpringer12 2 months ago 2
Great job guys! That was really good!
DanvLive 2 months ago
This is awesome!
artgeek1992 2 months ago
My issue is that it is modern (red bull, facebook etc), dexter seemed to be social (I remember him being completely isolated until he was married), the lack of cold logic (by this dexter) and his code states he should only kill those who *murder* and feel no remorse but other than that...I loved this piece of work. Glad to see Masuka finally got some real action and not pay for it. Kudos to you. :)
CarnieKing 2 months ago
@jallison71 I agree, though I really think Dex wouldn't limit his search to his own college campus, let alone his own class. It would draw too much suspicion.
ElloBats 2 months ago
Guy is pretty spot on Dexter in the scene when he lies about being in a work study.
MZA91LAD 2 months ago
the acting and videography was close to the real thing. i really enjoyed this and you should definitely do more
estellafox 2 months ago 3
The execution is damn near perfect. You did the best with the equipment you had. Some of the actors could use a few classes though, and the writing was kind of weak at some points.
MrPlasmaNuke 2 months ago
Pretty near perfect distillation of everything that makes Dexter...Dexter. Except I was waiting to find out the guy killed someone. I guess there's pry not as many killers on campus, so Dexter would have to settle on cheaters if he wanted to have time to maintain his GPA :P
jallison71 2 months ago
I like the oblivious teacher at 5:00ish. haha
BrokenWingman 2 months ago
Audio sucks balls.
shelobe 2 months ago
The weird thing is you look exactly like him...
GOLD3NxHAWKx21 2 months ago 2
Great job. I went to SFSU too. Small world.
meaganhayden 2 months ago
I don't know if anybody else noticed this and if it is a coincidence. But "Julie Carpenter" could be a combination the actresses' name of Deb and Rita. "Julie Benz" and "Jennifer Carpenter".
infernoxavier 2 months ago in playlist More videos from dormroomdexter
This is SO AWESOME!!! I'm a huge Dexter fan and you guys did a really fantastic job! The lead actor really did capture a lot of Dexter's mannerisms, really great job!
PrincessKeona13 3 months ago
Good filmmaking here but there were so many things that would get you caught. Also, there were several things that wouldn't have existed when Dexter was in college like Red Bull, thin laptops and Facebook.
eitkoml 3 months ago
@eitkoml nahh who cares about the technicalities right?
AfterMath428 1 month ago
Keep it going! :)
WheelchairAccessible 3 months ago
this was actually really good, good acting and execution. but i have some problems with dexters choice in victim. mostly because he does not follow the code. its hardly dexter without the code. dex kills those who kill. never have i seen him kill for somthing as innocent as cheating on tests....kindof a plot inconsistancy next time his victim needs to be a murderer so that dexters kill is within the bounds of the code. also ease up on the one liners.
drag00n77 6 months ago
What a GREAT job!! WOW!! You guys are amazing!
jdrury89 6 months ago
disappointed he didn't get the usual blood sample from jeremy's cheek....
fm97 6 months ago
P.S- they didn't have Facebook back then......
einat1622 6 months ago
MORE ! THIS IS AWESOME! ( good choice for a yound version of dexter - he kinda looks like Michael younger version LOL).
einat1622 6 months ago
More episodes!!!! I need more episodes! Good job, guys!
cutiegurljeni 7 months ago
This was awesome
jewsmakingmovies 7 months ago 11
It took you guys a while but I'm happy that you're back :D
OokamiNoYuki 7 months ago 8