Added: 3 years ago
From: Jessicacy
Views: 580,872
Sort by time | Sort by thread (beta)

Link to this comment:

Share to:

All Comments (910)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • I'm going to do a remix of this song, I know it's kinda old, but it's a good beat to be serious on. I'm going to rap about the death of my cousin, so everyone should please check it out in about a week, thumbs up so people can see this and check the finished song out.

  • puts a lump in my throat everytime...

  • all my life ive been told to never show emotions,

    im never suppose to quit if i get scared im never suppose to show it,

    but what happens when life hits you and you fall to the ground,

    are you jus gonna sit there? or you gonna get up and let people hear your sound,

    thats the difference between you and me i will never quit,

    and to all the doubter and haters tell em suck my dick,

    cuz when im gone everybodys gonna gonna remember this name,

    thats a promise i plan to keep nobody will stop me mane

  • I love Eminem so much :)

    i was looking around youtube and i found this kid doing covers to eminems songs with his own original lyrics, he was truly amazing... i was shocked :')

    Search "Harjot Singh - Mockingbird"

    But especially look at his "when im gone cover" as that's the song which made most people cry and touched everyones heart <3

    This kid is the definition of 'respect'

    Thumbs up this comment so everyone can see this new talent. hopefully one day we will all see him with eminem :')

  • thumbs up if you closed your eyes and nodded ur head when the music started, and you did it without noticing.

  • Comment removed

  • Cool

  • Comment removed

  • Comment removed

  • thumps up if you think Dr.Dre made the beat

    ALL HELL EMINEM AND DR.DRE

    

  • Comment removed

  • força de batida PQP

  • i can rap this:)) :D

  • This is such a beautiful instrumental

  • this instrumental is so awesome.. i made a song but different lyrics(:

  • what did you use for the vocal removal im trying Audacity and I still hear the vocals ?

  • I always got this urge to hum the beat.

  • ┏━━━┓┏┓╋┏┓┏━━━┓┏━━━┓┏┓╋╋┏┓

    ┃┏━┓┃┃┃╋┃┃┃┏━┓┃┗┓┏┓┃┃┗┓┏┛┃

    ┃┗━━┓┃┗━┛┃┃┃╋┃┃╋┃┃┃┃┗┓┗┛┏

    ┗━━┓┃┃┏━┓┃┃┗━┛┃╋┃┃┃┃╋┗┓┏┛

    ┃┗━┛┃┃┃╋┃┃┃┏━┓┃┏┛┗┛┃╋╋┃┃

    ┗━━━┛┗┛╋┗┛┗┛╋┗┛┗━━━┛╋╋┗┛

  • Just made my first music video for my original rap, check it out if you can, sorry bout the bad video quality (it wouldnt lemme post it in HD :S ) here is the link:

    youtube.com/watch?v=En-rPN9VVm­k

    -thank you, romez

  • F13 = SCROLL??

  • wheres my f13

  • I remember like years ago,

    like here's a hoe

    that I can smash and pass, yo.

    Never thought for one second

    I would have fell as hard as I did

    Now we're married,

    I gotta wife and two beautiful kids

    Forget the chorus, here's you the moral.

    I never was truly happy until I was plural.

  • I Guess it's my time to say what i gotta say on the dotted (line trying to get mines) in due (time) i know im spitting a few (rhymes) trying to make it, trying to succeed so please let this go in eaze to the finish (line) my baby girl the one i call (mine) her smile can (shine)for days light the room like pictures and groom haters trying hate but i sweep em out broom as they try and talk and assume im just trying to do me this is what i want to be, A rapper comming in -me-

  • my background music.

  • The song too of course, but even the instrumental is so powerful!

  • i just made lyrics within 5 mintues for this song. so ill!

  • @PayDroV ohh that's awesome I'm doing the same. how does yours go?

  • 10 likes and i'll do the cover :)

    Trust Me

  • @playboystylie07 ohk now do it.

  • @playboystylie07 u got the exact 10 likes u asked for .. waiting for the cover :)

  • @playboystylie07 yea so where is it?

  • EVERYBODY JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP AND ENJOY THIS HOLY MUSIC,

    THERE SHOULD BE NO COMMENTS ON THIS!

  • @zittatje777  HOLY MUSIC THIS IS NOT THE CLEAN VERSION

  • @SilverGlock0605 Still good as fuck ass

  • this is just so relaxin' ..

  • I never knew this song was so soothing and emotional until I listened the instrumental.. I mean, I do love Eminem and his raps.. But still, u get a different feeling when u listen to music ONLY, without anyone singing or rapping it.u give half attention to the words and half to the music when u listen to sm1 singin or rappin, u dont get fully involved in the music.But when u listen to the instrumental, u give ur full attention to music, and thats when u get to know how deep and emotional it is..

  • This music never fails to bring chills to my heart.. Goodness.. Its soo soothing <3

  • Goodness! All those stupid dramatic comments! They got nothing to do with the freaking video! Dont spoil Eminem's videos with your freaking posts! No one gives a damn! If you want to make up a song or whatever, go do it on another freaking video asking for stupid dramatic comments! If you're not gonna say anything useful or relating to THIS video, then shut the heck up!

  • nice!

  • @AngranityHD lol xD but the space thing works (: .. anyway if u can't press F13 try to press no. 10. :D

  • i can finally upload my rap so thxs 4 the instumental

  • yay first comment!

  • yeah eminem number one

  • sad

  • sa

  • it seems sa to me cause i saw this first on the owen hart death video.

  • I can't let a day go without having listened to this song at least once.

  • if you like this amazing song, you may like this one too <3 "MOCKINGBIRD - HARJOT SINGH"

  • Have you ever master bated so much you started shakin not the expression NO! Literally started shaking. When you know that you cum and you still do it and you'll destroy any pussy even if it was dirty. But what happens when karma turns right around and bites. Even a girl starts to like you, daddy look what I did, daddy's gonna pull his shit.

  • @bootysmacker123 hahaha

  • i can almost remember a time when a couple-a my homies werent dynn.

    this life is like waitin in line for nothin but pain. its part a the game, drivin me insane

    a couple went in car accidents a couple o deed. i hope god can hear me plead

    cuz when i go tears from friends aint what i need.

    i have yet to spread my seed n may never get a chance to.

    when i think largely i thinka u smilin tryin to hide the cryn u done.

  • everytime i'm listenin' this song i start cryin' :) i luv this <3

  • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ஜ۩۞۩ஜ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬

    SHUT UP AND ENJOY THE MUSIC!

    ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ஜ۩۞۩ஜ▬▬▬▬▬

  • rappin on this soft beat, with them violins thinkin bout you, as your number im dialin i cant help it, cuz all this shit is pileing in my brain, im insane, your dead and lyin in the dirt 6 feet in my back yard i knew i shouldnt have been smokin that crack hard i kept your body in the trunk of my black car, i cant turn back, this was the last straw i fucked it up, i lost, its over now everynight the bed gets colder and everyday my age gets older but i wish i was with you in Gods holder
  • rappin on this soft beat, with them violins thinkin bout you, as your number im dialin i cant help it, cuz all this shit is pileing in my brain, im insane, your dead and lyin in the dirt 6 feet in my back yard i knew i shouldnt have been smokin that crack hard i kept your body in the trunk of my black car, i cant turn back, this was the last straw i fucked it up, i lost, its over now everynight the bed gets colder and every day, my age gets older but i wish i was with you in Gods holder
  • WTF? Sweden?

  • @callofdutymr98 YEA EMINEM'Z BEEN IN DA SWEDEN.

  • Drop to my knees, beggin my higher power please.

    Saying I dont want to die, can you let me stay alive?

    I will do the right thing, so this song I sing.

    Binx, come back dont snap forget all the crap

    all this bullshit is seeming a little wack

    your better than that

    dont fire up the warpath

    Just sit back take a sip and relax

    I gotcha back

    1

  • this is Eminem's finest beat of all time

  • this fucki** stupid why aint there no muzic

  • @lalupocha uhm maybe because you went to instrumental? your stupid.

  • @lalupocha check your sound.

    and your spelling.

  • @lalupocha Itz instrumeantal stupid

  • @lalupocha all it is is music you fucking retard. your grammar and spelling is horrid.

  • im making a cover against the illuminati since they wanna kill eminem

    give me 30 thumbs up and ill post it on youtube

  • makes me think of my past alot

  • Baby please understand I'm going through a tough time All I ever wanted is just to see you smile But, you seem to get colder I can't approach you, cuz you'd just ignore me And brush me off even when i say "Hello"... Eventually it will be gone When my feelings fade, leaving me stranded Once again on this sad island That I can't escape from no matter what I do It seems like this is my only option *Gunshot*
  • Wake up in the morning its 5.30, thinking of you, i feel dirty

    my feelings against me,they wanna hurt me,all thats on my mind is she

    i need to believe,that god has another trick up his sleeve

    working a 100 hour week no time to blink all my emotions i bottle up and hope they shrink,just want to sleep all day and drink, life is trash, just wanna bin it,the thought of confronting my life i just wanna kill it,want it to go back to how it used to be,just me & missy lea,now i just wanna hang on a tree

  • 0:00

  • Can I use this for a cover?

  • Hold down space for slow motion. and press F13 for super speed

  • @Ahlexx13 thats a load of shit!!

    

  • @richo4ever xD

  • @Ahlexx13 you got me there, fuck haha

  • @TexasHasPoo :P

  • @Ahlexx13 Umm..there is definitely not an f13 on my keyboard..ive come to this conclusion after several visual scans of my entire laptop!

  • @caseydahulk if u didn't find the f13. please try to press no. 10

  • @Ahlexx13 hmm slow mo not really thats just pauseing and starting and there is no F13 :)

    gg but you fail unlike MM he never fails with any of his raps they all mean something unlike you :)

  • @hellboy274 GJ! you figured out a trick! smart kid!

  • @Ahlexx13 haha i felt for it

  • @Ahlexx13 where is f13 at ?

  • @Ahlexx13 i can't find f13

  • @Ahlexx13 F13?? WTF? i have no F13

  • @Ahlexx13 haha macs have f13

  • @chaosV1000 thats pretty funny, I llook down on my keyboard and dont se eit im like WTF?

  • @Ahlexx13 ffs fell for it lmao

  • i first heard this song when i was about 8 my brother was playing it and i forgot the name of it and i was scared to ask him 4 the name of the song cause it was rap i tried to explain the song but he didnt no which song i meant. im 12 now and i found the song about a year ago and i now love eminem! hes the most talented musician ever i think! i never forgot it after i first heard it and i found it again. finally. im never gonna forget him! <3

  • 2pac R.I.P...

  • /watch?v=h8zpyMcJfBM&feature=w­atch_response

  • (First time i write my own lyrics, sorry if they suck ^^)

    it's about this girl that i like, i cant seem to approach her

    oh my god please can someone put my out of this torture

    It's always the same thing, about this "special girl"

    Which always ends up leaving me in a twisted world

    ---

    But now i've had enough of this torture and pain

    I gotta get a grip, which will grant me the same,

    feeling as most of the guys get, when they're in love.

    But now it's my turn, MY TURN to fit the glove.

  • @piwoot really cool, i like it :)

  • i didnt mean to take things the wrong way, on anything that you say, my love grows for you everyday, in everyway, i know i need a job, im sorry i feel like a frod, so time to stand up, nd fess up, cuz this is messed up, i jus love you, sucess to catch up, id give my life to see you happy, i jus dont want us to sink, cuz i couldnt even think, mine as well drown myself ina sink, before i blink nd realize, that i despize guys, tryna get in between ya thighs, cuz your the only reflection in my eyes

  • Take a ride to myy block .. <#

    R.I.P tupac <3

  • all my life people have tried to put me on blast,

    tryin to point out mistakes that ive made in the past,

    they try to judge me on every single move ive done or made,

    i jus try to look away and pray to god for a better day,

    but yall keep pushin me to the point to where i jus wanna give up and quit,

    maybe if i stop tryin to spit yall would hop off and that would be it,

    then i look at myself in the mirror and i tell myself,

    you dont need nobodys help you can do this shit by yourself,

  • Comment removed

  • I may not be a fan of rap music but Eminem is one of the most talented musicians in the World this song is so damn sad

  • why is every one making lyrics,,,lol

  • Used this song for a school project!

  • @64ttsfd Same!

  • great job son ,, subscribe and like

  • @warcraftguy10 i have sung this song in school

  • thumbs up if you want me to sing this song out loud in school

  • Life is a game, unfortunately it's something you gotta play

    And to maintain, its the same for people on every other day/

    The pain, real shit it digs ya gotta get up off the dirt

    Its a death lane, and in the end everyone gets hurt/

    Things get so bad that sometimes i wanna stop writing

    I get the motivation, to pick up the mic and carry on fighting/

    I remember back in 29th of june, when i came,

    My memory lane, something that will never be the same/

    -- V CONTINUED V --

  • -- ^ CONTINUED ^ --

    As time starts to bend, i look back at things through time

    I was bored for hours on end, put together couple of rhymes/

    To express it through my raps, standing up and spitting it

    Gunna get it all on a track, and i never feel like quitting this/

    Taking it step by step, through life you gotta be smart

    Don't do sumthin' stupid and then end up in the dark/

    Life aint nice, and if you don't play the game right it might,

    Just might come back to bite you..spite you, and frighten you.

  • MY heart breaks, and i try to maintain, but the pain is too great, my family calling me a shame, and my friends say im lame, no on earth has seen these tears, running from blood and fear, cowards keep hating,ill be in heaven soon im just waiting,for that moment,when my eyes open, the truth is unspoken,so what will happen,when my spirit is leaving,will i still have my passion,4 being loved by music, they dont get it, my life aint pleasant,i pray death is coming,i waited for it for so long,im gone

  • Uhh, Yeah It's 5am this morning, theres a lotta heavy rain pouring and I've got so much pain running through my vain's it's like I gotta die in vein but I'm not ready, to fly as the day comes to sudden stop, I begin to empty my soul to this beat, It's a lil late as everything is drifting away and if I try to lift myself, inflict self-harm, and you can feel my own ears bleeding and now I can't hear a thing I try putting my ear to the speaker, but all that comes out is blood.
  • THIS IS A GOOD FREESTYLE BEAT

  • This really pissed me off.... I just worked like half an hour on this little rap and when I went to send it, it like deleted or something and didn't send, god damnit it was pretty good too.... If anybody wants me to make a rap for them funny or serious just let me know like message me or something...

  • shit is sad :/ but its sick at the same time :p lol

  • play this a a funeral

  • StrategistCOD at the time i probably wud have stabed sum1. i wrote this kuz some stupid bitch aborted my baby at 5 months.i kant rap bt dis beat made wana say wat i said

  • holy-crap!!!!!! love him

  • So apparently I'm a failure in your eyes/ How could a mother always tell her son so many lies?/ You live your life like nothing just went by/ I could die/ You wouldn't cry/ You care about my money, that's the only reason why/ As long as I have a college education, i'm fine/ right? I have giving up on my military dream just for you, wasn't that kind?/ It was a stupid dream anyways, I'm to shy/ I guess i'm the kind of guy/ who's put under so much pressure that he needs to get high/

  • @JoeyJoe4411 what does this have to do with the video?

  • @Nouranmosaad97 Wow, I wrote this fuckin forever ago!

    Anyways, um... I wrote this when I had to give up my military dream to go to college.

    I listen to the song and I wrote what ever came to my mind....thats about it.

  • @JoeyJoe4411 Sometimes u just have to let go something for something else.. And I know how bad it feels.. But u never know, maybe letting go ur military dream for college would do u better :)

  • [Insert Crappy Freestyle Here]

  • @bostonbragg [yo suck dick fag nigga nigga fuck yea wana fight... uh .. bitch]

  • @bostonbragg [Insert Fucking Fool Idiot Troller Comment Here.]

    Fuck off and let ma' bros rap as much as they want..

  • @magnum357help

    agreed what do these people think instrumentals are for

  • @KidCuds Not for crappy Youtube "rappers" to spam the video with their awful verses?

    What, do they think Kanye West is going to stumble upon one of these videos and be so blown away that he'll sign them?

  • @shadow1dx

    thier just havin fun seein what they can do

  • @KidCuds Keep it on their damn notepad. Go spam it on their Facebook for all I care.

    It's annoying going to ANY instrumental video and seeing walls-o-texts. I doubt anybody reads them and they just stretch the page and make comments section more unreadable than they already are.

  • onvergeetbare tijden whahaha net zo gejat.

  • First off, whoever says taht these peoples hearts, which were turned into these freestyles suck are the ones who truly suck. Ferreal. Even if its not good, thats someones fucking soul typed onto this virtual paper. These people came here for the inspiration of a truly great man, Marshall Mathers, and fused that inspiration with their heart, and transferred that passion into those lyrics. Secondly, untill you put something better, shut the fuck up.

  • Hate when people are all like MY LIFE SUCK even though they haven't been trough (I'm sorry) shit in they're lives... :|

    With a rifle to my head and i don't cry well i did, but now i only punch a whole wall down, get's flash backs and shit...

    And I'm allowed to say shit and fuck, because my life is fucked up.

  • insert shitty freestyle here

  • YALL BITCHES TRYNA RAP SUCK

  • So dope

    

  • Love This Beat, Check Me Out On This Jant! I Could Change Lives With A Voice Like Mine And WOrds From Me

  • wake up dont fall asleep and drift into a permenant dream, breath breath im falling to my knees in disbelieve, im crying so hard i cant breath, some times when ppl die i wish i cud, no snap out of it it isnt your time yet, live long a survive thats what they wud want, they need u to be a leader and take ya place up front, care for those who cant and need a helping hand and as they feel they stuck in the sand, death isnt easy so smile and look up cuz in your heart they aint leavin.

  • The day I'm no longer there you gon wish it wasnt true// life is so unfair the crazy shit it brings to you Ya scared,

    all alone lost on a road..wit no where to go, stuck in a zone..where time is passin so slow //

    Didnt mean for this to happen Im sorry I had to go baby take care of the kids an I'll keep you safe as your angel//

    Traggic crash in the past, impossible to come back// Im gone to a new place in heaven is where I rest

    RAP/HIP-HOP ARTIST CHECK MY CHANNEL SUBSCRIBE

  • i wrote a song but it was 2 long xD

  • I meen it this time, please dont cry at the sight of me, i can barley keep it together hold it all inside of me, an inspite of me, loving you, i understand you gotta do what you gotta do, just know this, you being happy is all i desire i swear to god an cross my chest hope to die, just one more kiss, between you an i, my eyes are heavy skys are dark an gorified, clouds are moritfied, faces i gotta replace em, save em, before i end up in the same old red cup an blunt routine,please come back 2 me

  • Sometimes i wonder if she miss wonder if she reminisce about me, the way i look back on our history, laying together in a big brass bead, our love was my life so when it died i was dead, just a walking empty vessel trying to cope, i lost my baby girl my world an now i just pour drugs an liquir down my throat, to be specific oxy 80'san jack daniels, sittin here with the flannel, your mom got me for christmas, god damn i really miss this, is there anything i can do, to convince you, im better b00

  • yo its the fear of rejection that creeps inside of me i say to my self i gots to believe but my brainlikes to play fucking games so the nite is about to wind down i say to my fucking head its my time now . damn she is so beautiful but some reason my shyness wont let me say hello damn she is gone . i geuss i will never get to say hello but so long :(

  • I love it when they put up instrumental videos because I make my on christian music and it's really kinda hard when u dont know the beat and things like that

  • The song is really good with the rap but you hear and feel what he is really feeling without them.some people say actions speak louder than words well the melody really speaks in this song

  • @thespencer94 mhmm 

  • You dont really get the deep meaning to this song until you listen to the instrumental only.

  • cheerz who put diz up it helped me and ma frendz sing a singsong at school cheers

  • have you ever made a mad thing which made all people thinks a crazy thinks about you im losing my mind and slowly i find everybody around me hates me,i don'know why they hate me is it a jealousy or philosophy is it craziness or laziness of me, i don'know but when i'm gone just carry a gun and shoot everything you hear my shout.:::....incomplete

  • I keep writing these rhymes, knowing the world will never see it.

    They said I lost my spark, so I'm about to be re-lit.

    They said I lost my melody, they said that I should give my stuff to charity.

    So pleasantly, ya tellin' me, that my raps should be a felony.

    But presently, it's my destiny,

    And I'ma do this until I'm seventy, despite you haters jealousy.

    I'ma bout to jump out, like I'm that rabbit from Velveteen

  • This is actually really pretty by itself, with the background violin and cello

  • check my freestyle to this 1st recorded track ive done more to come

  • im 12 and ive got to make a rap for this in social studies lol its gonna be awsome (if i can get it done its so hard because i have to make it about this guy named joanne gutenburg any advice prob none u know about him lol(:

  • will anybody listen without them fucking dissin they put down many people now the got them wishin i hope and prayin to god that one day haters will change but that will never happen cuz i dont find any strange its a part of history dont stuck in misery just pay attension as you think of hermony or else what will you do stand up for yourself or will you go through bullshit like everyone else there is no need for that you can be diffrent, please think of somthing, make it brilliant...
  • i cant stand who i am today, but i got someone to blame cause it was you who made me this way. you got to know me real well, which side did you get to know? a life full of failure with nothing to really show, i think its time you go, now start to think of which side you really know.

  • I need to record what I wrote for this it hits hard as fuck All though none of it's true it seems like it is

  • Comment removed

  • 0:58 <333

  • :58 <3333

  • nice

  • nice

  • wonderful to freestyle....

  • Writin wit this writers block, I read the clock.

    2:30am is the time. Head grip, mind in a lock,

    I wouldn't mind if you woke me wit a lil' knock.

    Cause everything you do, it is grand.

    Whenever you write, I forget about my band.

    Angels singin is you talkin. Look at my hand.

    It is trembling cause I'm talkin bout you. I cant stand.

    Screw my life! I'd rather have back my wife!

    As a sing of my love, I shall drop this knife.

  • @TheCmoney1995 DUDE FUCKING SICK!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!

  • @Eziokilla9595 madar fwkr 

  • hope u liked it

  • It hurts. I can feel our love-it's gappin.

    My mind, still on you, but yet still overlappin.

    If I had anotha chance, I'd love you in advance.

    If I could, I'd get a tattoo of you cause ur dat good.

    Only if life was a maze, you'd find me in a gaze.

    I love you. Do you understand that?

    I worship you. Thats where I'm at.