Wow, I liked it very much; very good editing, works very well with the flow of the music. I have one critisism though-at the end when it shows what happened, the guy in the backgroud already has a bloody shirt before he kills her.
Thanks for the comment! Regarding your critique, the man in the background was supposed to already be dead. While this didnt come across as I'd hoped, the man dancing with his dead wife was supposed to be a flashback. The cop comes in, shoots him, and then we get a flash forward to present day. A young, cheating couple comes in and the ghost of the man kills them. If you look carefully, the dead wife was a blond while the woman at the end was brunette...
good job guys. i know how hard you all worked and am very proud of you. next step make some more shorts and write out a feature. congratz on the short and i love you all very much!
that was cool, you played a good cop MALAKA... Next time keep your finger off the trigger.. Keep doing the films. That lady really looked dead. Best wishes to you stelios!!!
Wow, I liked it very much; very good editing, works very well with the flow of the music. I have one critisism though-at the end when it shows what happened, the guy in the backgroud already has a bloody shirt before he kills her.
holdenchase23 3 years ago
Thanks for the comment! Regarding your critique, the man in the background was supposed to already be dead. While this didnt come across as I'd hoped, the man dancing with his dead wife was supposed to be a flashback. The cop comes in, shoots him, and then we get a flash forward to present day. A young, cheating couple comes in and the ghost of the man kills them. If you look carefully, the dead wife was a blond while the woman at the end was brunette...
RedemptionBoulevard 3 years ago
p.s. you rock!
eparnett 3 years ago
good job guys. i know how hard you all worked and am very proud of you. next step make some more shorts and write out a feature. congratz on the short and i love you all very much!
eparnett 3 years ago
OMG the video is great!
Stevo the best cop ever! jaja who would of thought!
Congratulations to all of you, good luck!
I know you all worked hard.
gbetanc1 3 years ago
Excellent!!!!!...ever though about changing careers? Either cop or an actor :)
basiamucha 3 years ago
the ambrosial procure is waning. vexing a wollow of haunting asinine
dustinwad 3 years ago 2
that was cool, you played a good cop MALAKA... Next time keep your finger off the trigger.. Keep doing the films. That lady really looked dead. Best wishes to you stelios!!!
SGuija 3 years ago 2
Love it! The video really works with the music- Excellent!
lou0960 3 years ago 3
excellent!!
jennifermalk 3 years ago 4
Nice film, really liked the feet hanging in the air by the murder, pretty cool. Good Luck.
angle0fPr1ce 3 years ago 3
A+++ kudos to all of you. Great! Thanks!
garzmax 3 years ago 4
Awesome video! good job guys, luv the stevo's follow scene @ 2:48
xizmo 3 years ago 4
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russechegaray 3 years ago 5
thumbs up guys, great work
nikukla7 3 years ago 4
... again a woman has been killed on this festival.
BUT it's well done and hauntingly.
U2Stay 3 years ago 5
nice film, one of the few shorts ive seen that makes sence
beg330 3 years ago 4
Intense, Great short Film! Look forward to seeing more from you..
St14L 3 years ago 6