i thinkk you are really good at descriptive writing but you should make it more into like a story rather than a journal, and if you are going to make it into a journal then name it. : Us Against The World; a Selena Gomez Journal or something like that !
Nice.
likemelikemenot97 2 years ago
the journal is cool. this is a good story
iheartechno 2 years ago
still loving the journal part
Continue writing, it's awesome....really
xoxo VaNeSsaRoX0
VaNeSsARoX0 2 years ago
i thinkk you are really good at descriptive writing but you should make it more into like a story rather than a journal, and if you are going to make it into a journal then name it. : Us Against The World; a Selena Gomez Journal or something like that !
Kiakovvy 2 years ago