I'm not professional, but I love writing comic books. I hope you don't mind if I give you some advice:
Before I say this, I just want to say that it's funny and great. you got to keep going with this. but anyway:
1. Try not to put the speech bubbles right up to the characters' mouths. it looks really weird, like they're spitting out the text. particularly at 0:49 .
2. try to incorporate other characters. I don't need to tell you this of course. (continued to the next comment)
Thank You for your comment. I have some bad news about dark life. It is NOT happening. I have not got the time with all my GCSEs plus I cannot get the money to fund it. I am going to make a Dark Life Digi Comic and some occasional specials(Christmas etc.).
STUPID COMIC VIDEO!
soulreaperichigo1234 1 year ago
im sorry, but that was probably the most boring video on here. i'm really sorry. try posting AMVs instead. People love them!
yusfishful 1 year ago
I think Yusei is more duelist than human.....XD
DaeSlayer 1 year ago
I'm not professional, but I love writing comic books. I hope you don't mind if I give you some advice:
Before I say this, I just want to say that it's funny and great. you got to keep going with this. but anyway:
1. Try not to put the speech bubbles right up to the characters' mouths. it looks really weird, like they're spitting out the text. particularly at 0:49 .
2. try to incorporate other characters. I don't need to tell you this of course. (continued to the next comment)
abridgedfan 2 years ago
3. if you can, try to add theme music for each character. the whole thing is a little awkward with just silence.
4. I highly doubt I need to tell you this either, but making it a bit longer would be good, too.
other than that, I like it. If you're making more of these than I will be happy to subscribe and watch this whole thing evolve.
abridgedfan 2 years ago
lol. nice
StardustDragonFlame 2 years ago
why yusei tell someone its an illegal tournament
rasenshuriken198 2 years ago
Because he's always breakin the law and not gettin caught jack doesn't usually break the law(as much)
docwho72 2 years ago
Not bad. The word ballons kind'uv get in the way here and there, but not bad.
FudgemintGuardian 3 years ago
Thank You for your comment. I have some bad news about dark life. It is NOT happening. I have not got the time with all my GCSEs plus I cannot get the money to fund it. I am going to make a Dark Life Digi Comic and some occasional specials(Christmas etc.).
docwho72 3 years ago
first comment and awsomee
ArrancarGX 3 years ago