I think this is a love triangle or something like that. Nice film, although I'm particular with emphasized parts which leads the viewer to what the director and the writer wants to convey. I'm not good at making video, but I love short vids, because it's so amazing how the creators [in general] comperes an entire situation in just a few minutes. And In my point of view, you did well with this one.
okay the shots were great, i felt a suspense but no idea why i felt suspense, the shots built suspense but the story is too complicated, who killed them? Was there two guys or one?
@MaglioProductions I appreciate your attention to detail but there are no dead people at 3:21 and I'm certain when the male character is shown dead with his eyes open, he doesn't blink. Trust me, I made quite sure in post. Thanks though.
@gloriaisfab do you mean everyone as in two of only three people in the entire film? The same two people who are in a relationship, therefore likely to dress with similar styles and taste? Then yes.
I noticed a lot of independent film makers these days focus too much on the technical aspects of film making, but not the story. Technology today makes special effects look more believable, but the stories are poor. Sorry, but that's just my opinion.
That was pretty well done. I think it would have been pretty dope if at the end of the montage of them together you could have seen the killer stalking them in the background of the footage, and it ended like that instead of the door closing.
@mellissa981 I wrote, shot, directed, and edited the film as well as wrote, played, and recorded all the music. Thanks for watching and I'm glad you like it!
Acting: 5/10
Cinematography: 9/10
Story: 6/10
Editing: 7/10
Music: 3/10
Overall Grade: 6/10 it was good, but it could have been better
TheMrOshawottGuy 1 month ago
i think i got it.. and i enjoyed it. nicely done
kidnickels17 2 months ago
I think this is a love triangle or something like that. Nice film, although I'm particular with emphasized parts which leads the viewer to what the director and the writer wants to convey. I'm not good at making video, but I love short vids, because it's so amazing how the creators [in general] comperes an entire situation in just a few minutes. And In my point of view, you did well with this one.
Sphintrrix 2 months ago
er...I don't wanna come across rude or anything but...um...what the fuck was that all about?
bigbadreddog 2 months ago
okay the shots were great, i felt a suspense but no idea why i felt suspense, the shots built suspense but the story is too complicated, who killed them? Was there two guys or one?
Justinian43 2 months ago
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padmasiddhifilms 3 months ago
Attempt is very nice..camera work is awesome...bt i think there was somthing missing in the script....bt over all i like ur film...keep going
padmasiddhifilms 3 months ago
Great short , but at 3:21 you can see the dead guy blinking , but besides tht great
MaglioProductions 3 months ago
@MaglioProductions I appreciate your attention to detail but there are no dead people at 3:21 and I'm certain when the male character is shown dead with his eyes open, he doesn't blink. Trust me, I made quite sure in post. Thanks though.
Hawkbe 3 months ago
@Hawkbe i don't know what it is but at 3:21 the guy laying on the floor next to the guy in the chair, something moves on his face. What is that then?
ThePurplejaybird77 3 weeks ago
Great film but I dint quite get it. Is the strangler an ex boyfriend?
Sirduncan10 3 months ago
@Sirduncan10 It's more open to interpretation. If you look at the clues given within the film, you may find out more definitively.
Hawkbe 3 months ago
@gloriaisfab haha thanks!
Hawkbe 3 months ago
@gloriaisfab do you mean everyone as in two of only three people in the entire film? The same two people who are in a relationship, therefore likely to dress with similar styles and taste? Then yes.
Hawkbe 3 months ago
Emm it is quite nice.. But if you should splat some blood and fleshes to the ceiling when he commits suicide..
skemaboy87 4 months ago
I noticed a lot of independent film makers these days focus too much on the technical aspects of film making, but not the story. Technology today makes special effects look more believable, but the stories are poor. Sorry, but that's just my opinion.
cmccarreiro 4 months ago 2
That was pretty well done. I think it would have been pretty dope if at the end of the montage of them together you could have seen the killer stalking them in the background of the footage, and it ended like that instead of the door closing.
TownieFilms 4 months ago
Who's gonna pay the water bill ?? o_O Nice
bonita82 4 months ago
nice video .. did u make it.. it has a very nice theme
mellissa981 4 months ago
@mellissa981 I wrote, shot, directed, and edited the film as well as wrote, played, and recorded all the music. Thanks for watching and I'm glad you like it!
Hawkbe 4 months ago
Nice. I was concerned it would delve into gruesome murder and gore, and I'm glad it didn't. It did leave a lot of questions unanswered, though.
pineapplebaron 5 months ago
Very well done, great atmosphere :)
HungerCultFilms 6 months ago
love your angles
reallydarkfilm 8 months ago
yumm i want some of that SOUP looks fkn awesome hot girl to yay.. this was good film !!!
shitchops 9 months ago
@shitchops Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Hawkbe 9 months ago
very cool
1bobo1 9 months ago