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From: OneToughCookiee
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  • Wow it's been a year since I last read this story?!! & not only it's been a yr but I only read two chps. Well, that's gonna change :)

  • ooooooooooooo he is soooooooooooo sexi i would've fainted right in front of him (sorry i;m so late) but antyways i would've been so nervous to talk to a guy like him i'm shy too so that's probably why and i bet his hands are soft too LOL LOVED IT 5*

  • Nice....

  • I LOVEEEEEEEEEE THIS U DID A GOOD JOB GURL

  • wow Patty! Loved it!

  • i already seen this before i just didnt have a youtube account......but i have to say this is the first vid ive seen from b5...........5*

  • this is also my forth time reading this gurl its that damn good lol

  • third time reading this

  • haha same !

  • @rawrbaby07 hha thats cool

  • this is great honey!

  • i can tell dis is gunna b madd gud...dis shud lyk b a movie...its so cute

  • I love this story sooooooo much that I can play Arianna in a movie because she is just like me, Im a shy person as well I can relate to her. What a great story.

  • damn on the first chapter ur so good 10*'z

  • thats insane and this goes out to everyone who is seeing this....HOW CAN YOU JUST LIKE ONE OF THEM??? they r all gorgeous!!! maybay thats y i keep going back and forth. thi is y i cant go out with any of them (( ha...like they would ever go out with me )) i would probaly cheat on him with everyone in hollywood....im a bad persoon 8((

  • oh okaii im about to check out carnells story.. i love ur other vids of B5.

    this is random but i used to love bryan then i went to patrick then carrnell back to patrick then to marcel from 2much then myles then back to marcel then milo and now im back to patrick...in a matter of one and a half weeks. 8)

  • Hahaaa woww thats a lott .

    I love themm equallyy now lol

  • okaii i dont mean to critize. but this is just my opinion. but i really enjoy reading these stories but so far every story i read was too unrealistic. im srr but this is unrealistic too. but ill keep reading the rest of patricks story

  • Nooo its okayy i agree with you too . Since this was my first storyy It wasnt as realistic . But my others are better .

  • whoa baby.

    loved it!

  • that was great

  • who knew. this is a good story.

  • FOLLOW YOUR HEART AND DREAMS!

  • you are so creative! you have a gift! you should be a author for stories. follow your heaty and your dreams. life is full of surprises. love the story by the way!!

  • aww ths i cuteee.

    i love ittt

  • omg I LOVED DIS STORY!!

  • Thank you :D

  • that was funny when you did the replay of what patrick asked you

    you're so silly lol

  • iz diz a true story if it iz U R SOOOOOO LUCKY

  • Nahh its not truee loll.

    Its just made upp.

  • i just realized dat dis wuz made on mi bday

  • why you gotta be like that this aint no spelling test

  • whoa if that was mee i would be more nervous than that gul cuz patrick iz just so fine...welll im about to read chapter 2 lolz

  • OmG GETTIN GUD FINNA READ CHAPTER 2 ....:p

  • wOw Tht giRl is sHyy!!=P

    Tht wàS gReàt i lOoVe it...

    dOn't Be tOo lOng giRl i'M geTting àddiCted lOl J/k nàh Càn't wàit fOr tHe neXt One ;)

  • luv it

  • dat was awsome, luved it you keep going

  • i luv ur story keep writing

  • i likes dis

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