H8TAZ (fast rap, single verse by L Fiers)

[xxivblkk]

lol

[harrythedredd]

v nice

[MCTOfCTL]

ye man pretty good fast shit not the best clarity ever but its live so its still pretty tight

[LFiers]

Yeh i admit, it was a bit rough i hadnt rehearsed at all, just rapped it straight after. Cam aint the best either. lol. Thanx man!

[bonethug7]

Again, you have some speed but your flow is way too fragmented and slurred to make anything of it. If you concentrated on lyrics and not speed you'd be better. Right now adding a simile at the end of each line ISN'T good lyricism. I suggest study Tonedeff and Nas. Also I notice that every negative criticism you receive you just dismiss. Not a good idea. You don't have a record deal yet so perhaps you should try to improve from the criticism, as it's obvious I'm not a hater, I'm giving advice.

[LFiers]

Sory to sound annoyed but i kind of am cuz u think i dismiss all negative comments which i truley dont man. Werent we talkin speed? Check the syllables per second of this n compare it many and then hit me back. I aint been a bastard dude, i like u, u cool, its just every comment from u is negative bro. Seems like it anyway, correctme if im wrong, im a bit drunk now so im proly trippin out. I appoligise if i am. But sayin im fragmented is bs, u only used dat term afta i sed it abt ATM. Fragemted?

[LFiers]

(Had to re-write this cuz accidently deleted the 1st 1) Call that advice? Check this, i know u pretty well as a youtuber, weve argued about heaps of shit, but u fukn trippin, u aint checked enuff comments thenn if u think i dismiss all negative comment bro. Dam, its just that it seems like its all u do. I have accepted many n. comments n u dont care to chek em which again seems like u just been negative. Sry man, but ATM aint that good at all. Especially in his flomotion.

[bonethug7]

Because most negative comments here are insults, mine aren't. I'm actually trying to help you. And no, I'm not using 'fragmented' as a choice word, it's the best way to describe your rap. ATM's other verses maybe fragmented but his Flow Motion is easily the best example of Caucasian speed rap on YouTube. I was very impressed and believe me I know this music genre very very well.

[LFiers]

And that means i dont? Wtf? I do too, i aint gonna get into it cuz theres no point but stop goin on like what u say is all fact dude. ATM aint that good at all, get over it, its my opinion, it may not be yours. Lets agaree to disagree then. How the fuck is my shit fragmented, of all things i may be, that what i believe is the last thing i am. Unless u have a different definition of the word. I appreciate u trying to help but u come across in the rong way. Have u ever said anythn positive abt me?

[LFiers]

Overall, i may agree ith sum things u say but sayin im not quick i wont cuz ive used syllable counters and ive hit up13.5-14.5 syllables per sec n cmon, tell me thats slow. And labeling me as fragmented is just funny. I listened to my shit, n fragmented is not justified. My flows i believe are smooth. Anythn else is subjective. Fuk da haters, i know ur not 1 of em, but u need to re-think what ur trying to say sumtimes. Xplain it beta. Do u have any "pros" ud like to share abt my styles?

[Nesanofriends123]

that was syk people only pay you out cuz they can't spit like that

[LFiers]

:) Thank you bro.... 4 real.

[mrwang2323]

......................what is this......

[princessereefah]

r u serious ur comparing bizzy bone to him

[LFiers]

Many do. Why? Idk i guess its my voice who knows. Who cares. Btw, this track is just excuse to show that i can rap hella fast, check my other shit out aswell b4 u judge. Btw fast rap is fun, but it aint the only thing im about. Lyrics are what really count. I hope u like, but if not, its all good! Thanx 4 commenting anyway:)

[eatches07]

i like yAh oTher tRacks mAn..!bUt this sUcks ..>!

this is sHit man!

[heylilfag]

fuck you sound shit!!if your better than eminem than you can rap but with this OHH HELL NOOO!!

[titch8911]

u shitmy gran is faster than that

[LFiers]

Im sure she is 10 times faster! Whens her next show? :)

[joereid11]

yo man ur grans pretty fast i even got her to take out her teef

[nitrousmc]

pritti fast pal keep up the good work yo :)

[silvertrigga]

Bizzy Bone bout to get some competition.

[LFiers]

LMAO! Oh man, thats the coolest comment ive read in ages! Thanx man, keep up ur shit too dude, im lookin forward to ya next track, i only heard "Hiest", dont stop, keep it flowin dude.

[LFiers]

Thanx dude, especially comin from you. Means alot.

[therealrebelxd]

Pretty good. aye, fucking up a bit only makes you better at the end of the day. Hell, I'd be lying if I said I never fuck up. Rappin' at an extreme lyrical status takes a hell of alot of mental concentration. It also keeps you sharp in your thinking. Keep it up.

[AyreWolf]

shit dude... that's fast. Nice. o.o

[LFiers]

Thanx man, if u want lyrics, click on "more" top left. More to come. peace.

[rdwilko]

shit lol

[LFiers]

Thanx bro, i appreciate that, i really feel where your comin' from.

[LFiers]

Love you too, thanx 4 da support.

[HurtingYourFeelings]

that was pretty ill dude, check out my channel i spit a verse myself its called Carnage

peace!

[AUPOURIMAORIBOY]

that was pretty mean brother...tight alright...5 starz

[phx187az]

pretty tight, "fucked up a bit" LOL no one gets it right the 1st 2nd or even 3rd or 4th, not even the greatest, tight tho

[LFiers]

Omg well said man, well said, u a rapper? Cuz u seem to know more than most rappers do if ur not, dam straight, it takes HEAPS of rehearsing to get that shit down, i seen other mc's do thier thing while they look at thier moniter 4 there lyrics, n dudes r like "look at the cam man, whats wrong with u!?", & i just laugh cuz most non-rappers dnt get how much rehearsing needs 2 go into it b4 they know it all off by heart, especially when they're that complex n quick!

[jozusan]

at least you got the lyrics so i followed along with ya.