Rap Song Original 2

[MrSeanlamkins]

It's awesome, you just need to scrap together a $120 mic and you're set

[slowmofo357]

@MrSeanlamkins Thanks bro. Yeah man I actually got a little recording studio going, Akai Mpk49, Condenser Mic. I may try another and put it on itunes.

[yusefwii]

dude i believe u made this but it needs pratice it doesnt rhym at all

[ogogopogoify]

for sure this shyt is bomb... all i can say is these new rappers like lil wayne need sum better lyrics

[themotherfuckinshit1]

sucks

[TheJmanvip]

rap can be depressing faget listen to eminem he talks about his life listen to mockingbird and hailllies song u did good dude

[paintballkid15]

niice broo

[dannyday58218195]

i liked this - the depressed topic doesnt bother me - im depressed so it works and i can relate.

liked chorus it worked and flowed well.

i would say was that the Verses seemed too small and they didnt really flow with the music - whoever was rappin em had no emotion in their voice at all. In a sense you could argue a depressed rapper might sound like this - but emotions such as anger and passion can shine through - this was just flat line reading not really rappin...

[Muzzzicman]

I think this song is great!!!!

if this was done in full production in a studio it would be a killer tune.

[streetsk8ter01]

and dont comment how i cant spell and im a stupid gangster thats retarded. I wrote that eithout looking up so i didnt check the spelling i just typed and click enter.

[streetsk8ter01]

honestly you need work alot homie. I rap and i rap only depressioning shit, cuz im real. unlike hip hop today wich people consider rap. this would sounnd better if it didnt echo. anyways for the the people that havent heard depressing rap your fucking retarded. then you dont listen to rap you listen to dick radio hop. fuckin listen to ice cube or dre or eminem or xtacy(me) or any real rapper out there. keep ya head up man just work on it. my myspace is myspacedotcom backslash officialxtacy

[slowmofo357]

Thanks bro... Ill check your page out...

[cuppycake3223]

okie i love this song, its the first deppressing rap i have herd but i fucking love it!! haha idk, kinda explains life for me right now i guess haha but yeah, i love it!!

~nikkie

[madisonkimbell]

Ok, im commenting. Rap song should not be so depressing, it sounds good and the lyrics r good but not for a rap song. I like it maybe you should just sing it.

[slowmofo357]

your an idiot listen to the radio lol

[Lilokool]

I dont know why no one gives comments to this

this is a great song i like it