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  • Beautiful poem...you have sych a nice voice...I am subbing...stop in and see me sometimes...I am, also, JC and Donna Lee and jacampoet...good work...((^.~))..JC...

  • Beautiful poem my friend Sunbeam , thanks ;-)

    Greetings from ,

    ~ Lara ~

  • @lara8550able Thank you, my new friend Lara! I appreciate you stopping by!! :)

  • this is such a beautiful poem xx Especially loved the phrase- And now I come to realise that, although we are silent

    Our hearts still talk__xxxx

  • @yuetching Hello and welcome to my Channel! Thank you for such a lovely comment! On that line you mentioned - yes - it is amazing what happens in the silence! :) Have a lovely day! Sunbeam :)

  • I finally found you again. it's been awhile since am searching-- missing to re read your poems, sunbeam-

    have a wonderful moment.

  • Thank you so much for such a sweet comment and for re-finding me!! My Channel will be here for some time to come - I am doing some bits and pieces beyond poetry these days - but this is where I began and my heart comes through these poems and out to anyone who listens and watches carefully :)

    Happy Sunday! Sunbeam :)

  • Hello and welcome to my Channel :) Thank you! I am glad you liked it! I am doing a batch of travel videos next - as I went away for a month to the States in July - but perhaps after that will get back to the poetry!! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • .....a warm velvet tone articulating the silences,illuminating the melancholy...love,Michael.

  • Hello again Michael :) Nice to see you! Yes - there is melancholy in here for sure!!...Experiencing melancholy makes us appreciate joy all the more when we find it, I think :) I hope you have had a lovely weekend and best wishes for your week! Sunbeam :)

  • very... very... nice :)

  • Thank you! I appreciate your stopping by! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • WONDERFUL...

    5*****

  • Within the heart, love's language is spoken so fluently and freely, yet with a rather cryptic quality which always enamors yet ofttimes eludes us for its own involvement. When two are assuredly found in one another and bound, is it not this which keeps love fresh, where the hearts take lead? Yet once estranged, it is a bond not easily broken. You have written of this in beautiful sentiments. As many times ...

  • (cont'd) ... as I have read this, I am rather surprised to find I have not commented before, as this is one of your more intimate pieces. A very rich poem, my beautiful friend.

  • Oh - thank you for watching and commenting on this. It is a while since I have felt such depth of 'heart talk' with any other soul now....though knowing it exists is reassurring!!

    I can almost imagine sitting beside you reading this now....lol...how lucky we are to have met :)

    Love to you today!! Sunbeam :)

  • This is absolutely amazing poem... !! So very beautiful!!

  • Thank you :) It came from deep in my heart :) It is so lovely when others come by and find something in it - I really appreciate that! :)

    Sunbeam :)

  • Really a wonderful poem.

    It has to be read in peace.

    In a silent space, its music can be heard clearly.

    Regards,

    Sergio

  • Hello Sergio :) Thank you for stopping by. I agree with you. Read in peace....the energy of the poem can be sensed a little more by sensitive souls who want to explore beyond its surface :)

    Best wishes for today, Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful poem. I so understand it, I am going through this right now... telepathy is insane :/ lol

  • Hello :) Thank you very much for watching. Time does heal in the end...and the 'heart talk' fades eventually :) Sunbeam :)

  • Happened upon your art only moments ago, have now found myself tear stained and alone...

  • Hello :) Your comment is beautiful and you have the most wonderful Channel name also! Thank you for coming by my Channel and welcome :) I feel honoured my poem touched you in some way.

    Sunbeam :)

  • Hi Gian

    Oh -I have been known to have my moments of ranting and raving..lol. Recipients of that have likened it to 'the worst case of sunburn I ever got'..LOL..Well, I think - what CAN you expect if you cross a Sunbeam?..LOL

    But it's true - that blows thru me like a breeze and I soon remember what is important -which is my own peace of mind and that is most easily gained by establishing peace inside and outside.

    Thank you for stopping by - am pleased you are enjoying my poetry :)

    Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful...

    "But in the stillness and quiet moments, it seems

    Your heart still knows my heart's name" - wonderful words!!!

  • ralirade: Hello and welcome to my Channel :) Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such positive feedback for me - much appreciated! Sunbeam :)

  • 'Soul mates wronged' comes to mind. It's one thing to wrong just anyone, but what a shame and what a crime it is, when a wrong is done to one so 'in time' and divine. :)

  • I think 'hearts can talk' whenever a separation has occurred that feels perhaps premature in some way or unfinished. This poem captures a moment when I discovered that happening and realised what it was!! :)

  • That is truly amazing! That didn't occur to me before except in the movies. I can see though that with the ideal spiritual pairing that this could happen. Wonderful and mysterious! :)

  • Beautiful!

    Danny

  • Thank you Danny - you are having a good dose of my poetry today...lol :) Another YTuber made this poem into a song which we sang together - it is on my Channel 'Our Hearts' - you might like it, with your musical leaning etc :)

  • I'm going to check it out now!

    Danny

  • Wow, that was absolutely beautiful. Your voice and accent make the words come alive. Lovely!

  • mtzpoms: Hello :) What a beautiful comment - thank you kindly!! Here's wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead!! Sunbeam :)

  • So beautiful!Awesome!

  • satothequeen: Hello :) TY so much for stopping by and viewing my poem - much appreciated!! Sunbeam :)

  • Heart to heart nose to nose with nothing between us apart from our toes with smiles out loud and shinning eyes its good to talk to you like this all i need is your angels kiss :-)

  • RabAdamson: Very-ery beautiful :) TY so much for stopping by. Sunbeam :)

  • 1momentinthyme1 (6 months ago) +1

    a truly remarkable work,this poem is superb:) "goodbye" i use when i turn my back 4ever:)...i'll come back for another doze of your thought...5/5...PEACE

    :)once more, thank you for this poem.

  • Hello! TY very much for watching! Here's wishing you a wonderful weekend! Sunbeam :)

  • Love this. It came up as a related video to one of mine :) and here I am. Let me untangle my hair now beautiful Sunbeam.

  • lol:) Hey! How come YT is entwining our videos already? We only just met! Seems rather forward..lol. I must chat with the Editor :)

    Thanks so much for checking this out,sir. A friend made a song out of this poem. It is called 'Our Hearts' and is on my Channel-just in case that one isnt a link on your vids too..lol..and you are interested in seeing how it comes out set to music.

    Well-I hope you are having a good wkd. It's nearly 'Sun'day again :)

    That's the day with all the Sunbeams in it :)

  • This is such a beautiful poem.Found in issy`s A-Z share.Thank you to you and issy.10/10 and hugs..Jan and Susan.x

  • Hello Jan and Susan :) Thank you very much for stopping in on this poem. Hope you have a lovely Wednesday. Sunbeam :)

  • Hello :) How odd! I was just watching one of your videos this morning, as my friend ASAngelo had favourited it! Thank you very much for stopping by! Sunbeam :)

  • beautiful! ^_^

    thanx for posting this piece!

  • TheUnitedFreak: Hello :) Thanks very much for taking the time to view this poem :) So glad you liked it! Have a wonderful day!

    Sunbeam :)

  • As always, well thought out and nicely done. I meant no disrespect by attempting to share something I was proud of, I DID warn it was in a dark setting. Should of just sent the poem itself to you or was it the music video with the classic clips that offended? Either way my apologies. You have inspired me to develop a vehicle for writing and sharing poetry. You have a good heart and it shine. One day, your initial faith in me WILL be restored, I promise. No hard feelings, glad to have met ya.

  • Hello :) Please see email!! Certainly no hard feelings here either. Thank you for stopping by to listen to this poem :)

  • I wish all poets would put up the words as they read them, a really great video; I love both the words and the visuals. Another 5-STARS and another FAVE. You Rock!! :)

  • Hello :) TY for those stars and the fav - so glad you liked this :) Sunbeam :)

  • That was a beautiful poem Sunbeam, and I enjoyed your reading of it, you have the perfect voice for reading poetry... maybe it's just because I like your accent (LOL)... but I did enjoy it! Your poem was wonderful, sometime the mind and the heart don't always agree... that's when life can get quite complicated! Your poetry is great Jill, I enjoy it... FrAnK (5*****)

  • Hi FrAnK :) Thanks so much for watching this - glad you liked it. Oh - that mind v heart tangle...sigh!!

    I don't know if you saw but another YTuber (encinitasmel) turned this poem into a song and we sang it together. It is on my Channel too called 'Our Hearts'...poetry and music!! Now they seem to always fit together well somehow!

    Have a wonderful day FrAnK and thanks for taking the time to stop by!!

    Sunbeam :)

  • ...as I looked over your page, trying to decide where I should look next, I was drawn here. And after hearing, and reading along, I know why....

    "amidst the wreckage"....these "hearts still talk" ..What a brilliant and unique concept!

  • moondogg55: You picked out the very parts that initially inspired the poem.

    Often my poems come to me first in an image that penetrates my mind until words fall around it...With this one - I saw two hearts literally glowing in a wreckage scene - like smouldering....and glowing and from that - the poem came.

    I am so glad you liked this one :)

  • Hello again:) Thank you for such a wonderful comment. Glad you nejoyed this poem so - truly!! It means a lot to me! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Yet again very nice!

  • Hi again!! I am just checking my vids - they all seem ok so far!! Glad you got to see this one - a singer songwriter made this into a song called 'Our Hearts' which we sing together - it's on my Channel - you might like that too :) With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Hello :) I am honoured by your interest in my Channel. I loved your images...you clearly have a sensitive soul - a great prerequisite for any poet/author :)Come back anytime - you are very welcome here :) Sunbeam :)

  • Great thoughts in beautiful lines.

  • Hello vgentertainers!! Thank you for stopping by and listening to my poem - much appreciated!! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Hello again!! Lovely to see you. I love this poem - glad that you enjoyed it too!! 'Goodbye' is so final - maybe that is why our hearts can struggle with it long after our minds seem made up!! Sunbeam :)

  • Hello Richard!! What a beautiful comment - thank you. I feel somewhat exposed!! I can only say in return that you must have a great ear for such things!! :) With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • I really liked this, lovely poem!!

  • Hello!! Thank you very much - I am glad you did like it!! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • This poem has a soft lilting English quality to it: the regrets of a relationship that has ended, but still haunts the writer. I always think the last stanza is so important and this one sums up the whole poem,

    "In the quiet moments

    By day and by night

    I hear our hearts talking

    Trying to say 'goodbye'"

    This is very poignant.

    Thanks for posting this.

    Kind regards, Peter

  • Yes - I agree on that last verse. Expresses the something 'undone'...Thank you for watching and commenting :)

  • Hi Poetess

    Thanks for your kind comments on my poem "Isle of Hope." I decided to visit your site to have a look at your poetry and I'm so glad I did.

  • Thank you for doing so :)

  • Well done...lovely poem!

  • Thank you for stopping by!! Glad you enjoyed it!! I am not sure if you noticed - but encinitasmel (a singer songwriter on here) made this poem into a song that is on my Channel also...you might like that, if you haven't seen it already!! It was magical seeing this poem become a song!! Have a great day!! Sunbeam :)

  • Yeah, I'm familiar with encinitasmel's work...thanks for pointing that out! I'll check that song on ur channel :)

  • This was beautiful :)

  • Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed it!! Sunbeam :)

  • One heart bleeds

    A graphic sadness

    Two hearts bleedness

    Longing gladness

  • "Bleeedlees" **

  • Hello :) Thank you for taking the time to stop by!!...Somehow, although it may feel like it sometimes, I don't think our hearts are ever 'one heart' or totally alone...I do believe 'heart talk' exists!! :)

  • Interesting poem...

  • Hi Teddy!! Thanks for checking this one out! Hope you have a wonderful day! Sunbeam :)

  • Okay, I'm in love with your poetry and your wonderful reading voice!! 5*'s

  • Wow! What a beautiful comment!! Thank you!! :)

  • I love poetry very much! This poem is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us. You have a real talent, and it is a pleasure to meet you!

  • Hello :) I am so glad you enjoyed this. A lot of my poems are 'from the heart and soul'. I think you and I may blend well in that way - the videos of yours I have seen so far have the same beauty of something from the inside of a soul coming outwards, if you can understand what I mean!! :) I am very pleased to have met you also....thanks for stopping by :)

  • powerfull words

  • Hi! Yes! Powerful emotions behind them! :)

  • I love it your peom

    This is so SUPER AWESOME

    I enjoyed it very much

    10 stars

  • Wow - Thank you! I don't know if you have seen it - but I collab'd with a singer-songwriter on YT to make this poem into a song...it is on my Cheannel - 'Our Hearts' - you might like that also!! Thank you for stopping by - much appreciated!! :)

  • Hey my friend you know i kinda thought of dance act to your peom

    but now turn into song

    Mama mia this is so awesome

    can i dance to your song

    I really really love your poem

  • Hey!!!!!!!!!! Lovely to see you. Well, Missy - I have a surprise coming up in relation to this poem - just tune in again in the next 24 hours to see my next vid :) Love you xoxo

  • wow  what a poem, your great

  • Hi!! Welcome to my Channel - Thank you so much for watching and commenting and rating!! Really glad you liked it :) Sunbeam xoxo

  • It's so beautiful!!!!!!i really really love it

  • Thank you very much for watching and commenting!! Much appreciated :)

  • This is just wonderful my dear!!! I love poetry and I love when a friend sends me poems. I will send you a pm with some of my poetry friends

    Luvs

    Natasha

    xxxxx 5* of course!!!

  • Thank you Natasha - I got your message - thank you. You are very kind. I am very glad our YT paths crossed today :) With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo

  • Beautiful. Love your poetry.

  • Hi :) Thank you very much :) Welcome to my Channel xoxo

  • That was so lovely, thanks for sharing this :)

  • Thanks Jack!! Glad you enjoyed it :) Have a wonderful day, Sunbeam xoxo

  • Hello Anne :) Thank you for your kind comment...Another YT member (Breakthru Counseling) wrote a comment on my page saying 'What emanates from the heart penetrates the heart' - I really like that - I think that is true...I feel that in your songs too :)

  • Wonderfull :o

    It really touched me, as I've played it multiple times already

    You have a very soothing relaxing voice, which really suits this poem.

    Keep writing!

    -xx. Mich

  • Hi Mich :) Thank you so much for the encouragement - it means a lot. I hope you will post some of your poems in the future too - I would love to see them :)

  • Perfect !! Thanks for sharing Jill, loved it. :) Keep up the great work !! I'm glad I found you.

    Take care,

    Anindya.

  • Hi Anindya :) Thank you so much for watching. I am glad I found you too - I love your videos - you have a peaceful way with your playing, which I find a little oasis to come and visit!! Sunbeam xoxo

  • It's a really fine poem Sunshine, and I really like your comments about how you came to write it while traveling. A nice way for me to close out the evening. Thanks, -Ron

  • Hi Ron....I hope you had sweet dreams!! Thanks for stopping by!!.....:)

  • I love your poems beautiful soul! :) So glad you found me here. Bright Blessings of Abundance, Joy & Peace, Kelli

  • Hi Kelli....Thanks for stopping by! Glad you enjoyed my poem, with kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • What a beautifull Poems you have made.

    Thank you for sharing them.

    Greetings Angeline

  • Hi Angeline :) So nice to see you here - Welcome!! Am very glad you like my poems :) Have a wonderful day...Love Sunbeam xoxo

  • Hey dear I love your poetry and really enjoyed it! xoxo

    Chris :o)

  • Thanks Chris - glad you liked it :)

  • Thank you for sharing your thoughts. You might possibly enjoy my song "My Kind of Love", which relates to your topic in some ways.

  • Hi :) Ok - will go and check it out right now!! Thanks for stopping by - welcome to my Channel :)

  • Wow this is absolutely beautiful! I have always loved poetry. One of my favourite poets is Seamus Heaney! In relation to your poetry there is a lot of emotion and feeling in your words, just wonderful! 5 stars! Tamara xx

  • Thank you so much for your kind words :) I will look up Seamus Heaney....Here's wishing you a wonderful day :) xoxo

  • I wish you a wonderful day as well!

  • lovely poem! Thanks for posting God bless ....rajesh

  • Hello :) Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for watching and commenting, Rajesh! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • ~Very nice, it reminds me of when I met a prominent love of my life after nine years after our parting, and we both had this to say: ~Thank you~, and ~I'm sorry~, it was very healing.

  • Yes. How wonderful you both had that opportunity and the maturity to do that! Sometimes we hurt the ones we love the most and that needs repair as much as possible if we are to find peace and stop our hearts talking at some level 'in the silence'...Lovely to see you here - come back anytime - I appreciated your perspective very much :)

  • This is beautiful:) fived and faved & subed:) *****Jane

  • Thank you kindly :) Glad you liked it so!! xx

  • Oh my goodness!! I think that is the nicest comment I ever got - not to mention an epic sized one :) I LOVE it. Thank you so much for your kind words - you really made my Sunday!! There are plenty more in my back catalogue of poetry and new ones coming in also - so I will be adding more as and when I get chance to on top of busy work and home life...feedback like that makes it more than worthwhile. Thank you again. Love Sunbeam xoxo

  • You've got perhaps the best reading voice of any poets I've come across on YouTube. This is a very good poem. You make me believe that you believe in this.

  • Wow - thank you so much, sir - that means a lot coming from you. You know - I do believe in the essence of this poem, as when I wrote it a while back - I was living it!! Comes from being a mighty sensitive soul, I guess - you hear heart to heart whispers and that kind of thing!! All great for the poetry!

  • wow, great poem. You have a very pleasant voice to listen to, Sunbeam. I really like it!

    Roeleke

  • Thank you!!....Am really glad you enjoyed it!! ((HUGS)) xxoo

  • This is really lovely. I like your voice, it's so soft and clear :)

  • Hello you :) Thanks for stopping by and listening....One day soon I will sort out a cam and get in front of it...lol...for now I have to rely on my voice alone...Thanks for your kind comments xxoo

  • Oh this poem is so lovely. It touch my soul.

    Peace to you xoxo

  • Thank you :) I am glad you got something from it! Soul to soul :).... ((HUGS)) xxoo

  • oh wow, this is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it!

  • Hi :) Lovely to see you...thanks for taking a peak at my poem :) Sunbeam xoxo

  • Oh my goodness, I am so glad I got time to stop by briefy ... your words are wonderful, word art, so familiar probably to us all, I love it!! thank you!

  • Hello!! Thank you for stopping by....I wish you safe travels and happy adventures :)

  • I loved this one Jill. So true of a relationship that has ended. (((hugs)))

  • Hi :) Thank you. It's one of my older poems, this one - reading it was like putting the cloak of feelings within it on again...a little odd...lol..Lovely to see you xx

  • One heart can never truly let go of another, as each has known the love, beauty, spirit and grace they share . . .

    BL*M

  • Once two hearts have bonded in some way, that's very true....Luckily over time, if allowed, things fade to just the core beauty shared....everything else can fall away - leaving just that pure love 'etch' in our hearts....:)

  • Thanx for posting this as a video response.

    5 starry night shooting stars...

  • YW - thank YOU for being such a welcoming poetic buddy :) Even though I know you prefer the jetblackies...;) Thanks for those magical stars!! xx

  • Very lovely my friend sunbeam always well spoken and enjoyed warm blessings with my light love peace & harmony keep up the great work!oxoxox :)

  • Hello :) Here's wishing you a beautiful rainbow, arching high and majestic above you xx I saw one the other day - it took my breath away. Magic and beauty are all around - thank you for your encouragement :)

  • Loved it, your voice is very enchanting. I find myself captivated with a greater attention than I am usually able to afford a digital medium.

  • Hello you :) Glad I managed to drag you away from that well-dressed chicken for a few moments..lol. Thank you for your comments, my new friend - much appreciated :)

  • Again a brilliant poem. Can i borrow some of your talent?

  • Aww...come now - you have plenty of your own!! Nice to see you :)

  • excellent

  • Thank you, sir.....Glad you liked it....:)

  • That's a sad poem but beautifully read as always xx

  • Hey xx Thanks for stopping by - lovely to see you - as always...lol..:)

  • Good theme. Nice technique with the words and background.

  • Hi....Lovely to see you here. Thanks for taking the time to watch and comment - have a wonderful day :)

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