The acting could have been a little better, and the cussing didn't really add anything to it except make the characters less likable.
I like the story though..
The only thing I would change would be less cussing, then the characters would be more likable, and then the deaths would bee more of a loss for the viewer because they'd be a little more attached to the characters.
Which soundtrack title is this, Justin?
emenentia 8 months ago
@emenentia it's the 'Brown Waters" OST. :) Custom scored by myself.
EdgenAnimations 8 months ago
The acting could have been a little better, and the cussing didn't really add anything to it except make the characters less likable.
I like the story though..
The only thing I would change would be less cussing, then the characters would be more likable, and then the deaths would bee more of a loss for the viewer because they'd be a little more attached to the characters.
Good Job though, 4/5.
loser23jtw 2 years ago
I dont think the cussing had any negative effect on this film. I give it a 5/5 I mean everyone cusses. Its just normal.
NinjaPuma9408 2 years ago
Give Stumpf an oscar!
mattrat31 3 years ago
Hmmm...this pond looks familiar... :P
Yeah, it is that 'Chad Adamik'--from your church. I don't make videos, just watch 'em.
I remember coming over when you all were working on it. I'm glad to see this movie turn out so well. I am really impressed with your short films...
ChadAdamik 4 years ago
...WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?!
Sibraagames 4 years ago
a movie.
EdgenAnimations 4 years ago
Jonathon Stumpf will definitely be the next Brad Pitt!! What a stud in front of the camera.
hammer1774 4 years ago
You are an excellent writer, director, composer, etc.
FinnVintersorg 4 years ago