Man, great job! Especially the sound fx during the "teeth scene" is just sickening, i actually had to turn the volume down. Did you use a lot of lighting?
I think this is really good...you got close to the film somehow...I mean, I felt that am part of it...and apparently you have got what you want, by 12:53 I started thinking how terrible and unfair life could be, and I was upset indeed XD...and that's only 15 minute film...Good job :@ :P
Was his ringtone 'Conquest' by the whitestripes.. if so nice touch. Check out our work if you get a chance would love to know what you think: just click on our name...
This was a great short film. It reminds me of an Edgar Allen Poe story "Berenice" where a man covets a woman's teeth that after she dies he plucks them from from her mouth, but to his surprise she was actually buried alive. Nice work. Job well done!
Could you all maybe look at my videos on my channel, and maybe subscribe. I'm an up and coming film maker, and i just want to get my work out there while i'm young, so i can make a name for myself. I'd really like it, and i would do the same to you if you did.
horrible acting horrible screen writing, completely unoriginal, bad sounds effects and bad pop use. not the worst film ive ever seen but it was still bad
@emza36 Okay, if you've ever tried to make a short film, you'd know how difficult it is to make a completely original script. As for the acting, it was average, and if you've worked with actual bad actors, you would know. It was written mediocre, i'll give you that, and the whole design seemed a little rushed, but the prop use was definitely good. I'd have a thing or two bad to say about the cinematography, but i'm not a dick who bashes people's hard work, and i'd like to finish on a good note.
To everyone who disliked this, you probably sit at home eating Cheetos & never doing anything productive. This is by far way better than most American horror films, this is the kind of stuff we need to make horror. I'd love to collaborate with the makers of this film anytime! Please do hit me up. =]
You guys will probably disregard this and move on but it means so much if you could go on my channel and listen to my song Hot Ass Beat over Earl's Dat Azz. It's really good I promise. Thanks in advance
the first time i saw that homeless fuck lurking near my house i would of killed him. or run him over with a car. "uh he ran out in front of me." i liked how the begining came back in the end. it was unrealistic though and that almost ruined it. 7/10
Greaat Film!.. But Have To Question Thiss.. Whaat Is The Amount Of Money The Lady Left Him On The Floor Going To Buy Him Egzacly?! And Lovee The Rubbeer Duck On The Side Of The Sink!;).. What Happenddss To The Lady In The End? Like Thiss If You Think There Shud Be A 'ThrowAway' Part 2 ;)
The plot and cinematography were good. The acting was good. The Bum's look was convincing and the person that played him did a good job being disturbing, lol. The gore effects were impressive. good job.
my god this was difficult to watch.
EvilGregProductions 1 week ago
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your not soppouse to talk to people who like that -.- guy looks like a cave man escaped from a crazy house needless to say WTF.....
xlordbimpyx 1 week ago
Chuck Palahniuk saw this?! Nice! Favourite author :D
JohnnyVanilla1 2 weeks ago in playlist Short horror films
that scared me a lot lol
omggitsjessica 3 weeks ago
Man, great job! Especially the sound fx during the "teeth scene" is just sickening, i actually had to turn the volume down. Did you use a lot of lighting?
1849ad 1 month ago
I think this is really good...you got close to the film somehow...I mean, I felt that am part of it...and apparently you have got what you want, by 12:53 I started thinking how terrible and unfair life could be, and I was upset indeed XD...and that's only 15 minute film...Good job :@ :P
stopscreaming100 2 months ago
I don't think I've ever been so uncomfortable
Highskoolrecess 2 months ago
wHAT DID I UST WATCH ?
Bubblegumdutchess 2 months ago
Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
DuuhDude 2 months ago
Ouch.
619alexfarr 3 months ago
Was his ringtone 'Conquest' by the whitestripes.. if so nice touch. Check out our work if you get a chance would love to know what you think: just click on our name...
CarsonCoePriceFilms 3 months ago
This was a great short film. It reminds me of an Edgar Allen Poe story "Berenice" where a man covets a woman's teeth that after she dies he plucks them from from her mouth, but to his surprise she was actually buried alive. Nice work. Job well done!
13sixstring 3 months ago
Hey guys
Could you all maybe look at my videos on my channel, and maybe subscribe. I'm an up and coming film maker, and i just want to get my work out there while i'm young, so i can make a name for myself. I'd really like it, and i would do the same to you if you did.
Thanks
twilightproductiontv 3 months ago
09:10 is so scary!
ItsPeterchu 4 months ago
Damn she is hot...
joshua5micka 4 months ago
didn't he take her eye?
DamiousMalikar 5 months ago
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sweetflower666 5 months ago
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sweetflower666 5 months ago
horrible acting horrible screen writing, completely unoriginal, bad sounds effects and bad pop use. not the worst film ive ever seen but it was still bad
emza36 5 months ago
@emza36 Okay, if you've ever tried to make a short film, you'd know how difficult it is to make a completely original script. As for the acting, it was average, and if you've worked with actual bad actors, you would know. It was written mediocre, i'll give you that, and the whole design seemed a little rushed, but the prop use was definitely good. I'd have a thing or two bad to say about the cinematography, but i'm not a dick who bashes people's hard work, and i'd like to finish on a good note.
nFnBjR 5 months ago
@nFnBjR sorry
emza36 5 months ago
@nFnBjR well spoken.. sorry dude!
emza36 5 months ago
Respond to this video... sooorryyy
emza36 5 months ago
This Blew.
DrIvoRobotnick 5 months ago
Filmed in 24p? :D
svircheto 6 months ago
the teeth scene was disgusting :D
94joefox 6 months ago
To everyone who disliked this, you probably sit at home eating Cheetos & never doing anything productive. This is by far way better than most American horror films, this is the kind of stuff we need to make horror. I'd love to collaborate with the makers of this film anytime! Please do hit me up. =]
TheSarahW18 6 months ago 12
@TheSarahW18 I agree entirely. A very well made and atmospheric short film. I enjoyed it :)
HungerCultFilms 4 months ago
Amazing. Great story, along with very good actors, setting, editing, colors, this had it all!
cowman1025 6 months ago
I hate tools!!
TheThreadHorror 7 months ago
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TheThreadHorror 7 months ago
this is stupid
TheRivetthead 7 months ago
@TheRivetthead
Yea This isn't even horror it is a crappy gore video.
DrIvoRobotnick 5 months ago
9:11 made me jump! good job!
rosebudcod 7 months ago
Fricken Awesome!!
scout3778 7 months ago
What camera/Lens? :)
Recon9143 7 months ago
You guys will probably disregard this and move on but it means so much if you could go on my channel and listen to my song Hot Ass Beat over Earl's Dat Azz. It's really good I promise. Thanks in advance
ErvNoel 7 months ago
amazing u have talent!!!!!
atstallman 7 months ago
Love the music editing at 2 57 and the movie is quite well written and shot.
Sam
samfrompasingtime 8 months ago
wow a 15 minute horror film is shitting on most full length films! Loved every minute of it.
brownlivvy 8 months ago
omg it looked so real nice job = 0
rcrazyish 9 months ago
sexual harassment
GoDan2010 9 months ago
if that guy tries to harass her, I will call 911
GoDan2010 9 months ago
fuck that guy that came to her house
GoDan2010 9 months ago
stalker
GoDan2010 9 months ago
wow, so evil and creepy. :O
shapman87 9 months ago
that was efing awsom NICE fuckin JOB
shaynanayfan14 9 months ago
lmao
Smile4TheCok 9 months ago
wow this is brill love all of it great work
pigeon893 10 months ago
"Like a sleepover?" HAHAH love that bit!!
GREAT FILM LOVED IT! :D
lazaro56 10 months ago
Great
thisissuchaweirdname 10 months ago
The graphics were great for how much you guys spent on it but i wish i had those few minutes of my life back
InkspillProductions 10 months ago
THIS WAS GREAT WELL DONE;D
MrMissdemented 10 months ago
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detrek77 10 months ago
ONE MORE THING! The acting was great and the shots that were taken in the party scene were really casual and perfect for "setting the mood"!
NathanOliverFilms 10 months ago
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NathanOliverFilms 10 months ago
Pros:
I like the story because it is something that a lot of people can relate to.
I could tell that the hobo is jealous of her PERFECT teeth (good camera shots for showing it!)
I have also thought all my life how much it would suck to get crushed inside a garbage truck!
Cons:
camera shots need to be more extreme in more important parts...
I noticed you were going for a sudden, more "hardy" sort of look but it was wayyy to suddle in some shots.
Over all grade for a short: B-
NathanOliverFilms 10 months ago
nice film!! freak me out!!!!!
bradli1008 11 months ago
moarl:sleep with hot guys ha :)
ZGReelProductions 11 months ago
the first time i saw that homeless fuck lurking near my house i would of killed him. or run him over with a car. "uh he ran out in front of me." i liked how the begining came back in the end. it was unrealistic though and that almost ruined it. 7/10
MrKaine777 11 months ago
Brilliant film x
charlybarly100 11 months ago
Well done- the girl's performance was very good
Cerenok9 11 months ago
it was interesting to say the least but at most it was an original idea unlike so many other films that r out now. awesome job
Naturia123 11 months ago
AWESOME JOB....
TonyJoaquin3 1 year ago
Eh. Good picture quality and decent camera work. The actual premise and the movie, eh, not so great. Good job though. Keep it up.
VoltageEntertainmnt 1 year ago
I loved it :)
JoweeRH 1 year ago
It could be very offensive for homeless people but the film tells us a story. Cool short film!
brunofelix20 1 year ago
scary old man! I want to kill him ..
Bernachaeleeckson 1 year ago
one of the most amazing short horror movie I ever seen...
I love the story!!
Bernachaeleeckson 1 year ago
dayum That's Fucked Up haha... I Wanna Be In A Horror Film haha XD
OrionIndependent 1 year ago
hey nice film I am looking for someone to make a short film based on my script I have a link on my page it is a horror trilogy
dogmen1321 1 year ago
Greaat Film!.. But Have To Question Thiss.. Whaat Is The Amount Of Money The Lady Left Him On The Floor Going To Buy Him Egzacly?! And Lovee The Rubbeer Duck On The Side Of The Sink!;).. What Happenddss To The Lady In The End? Like Thiss If You Think There Shud Be A 'ThrowAway' Part 2 ;)
xPrincessJazx 1 year ago
the acting is shit, but you have some nice staging in there!!!
lbvedj 1 year ago
Very Nicely done! Loved it
klithiumc 1 year ago
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Magicrazy1 1 year ago
Lmao she should, of called the cops on that Homeless guy lol!
Well i guess thats what, happens when you, feel sorry for junk people lol!
LuciferWitch666 1 year ago
Cool.
hwdrebel 1 year ago
0:53 lol
andrewjace2233 1 year ago
9:13 think I just pooped myself...
DPKFineArts 1 year ago
wow that was amazing, made me go " whoa!" when her teeth got pulled lol A++ on the effects :)
convoy1999 1 year ago
The plot and cinematography were good. The acting was good. The Bum's look was convincing and the person that played him did a good job being disturbing, lol. The gore effects were impressive. good job.
nikocaulkingadhesive 1 year ago
Nice work great film
M.V.B Films
MEOSHABEAN1 1 year ago