oh wow when i read the poems i could see the love, the hate the pasion... i could see how she felt writing these... poems are a work that anyone can create, but takes a speical person to hypnotizes the reader that is exactly what your friend has done. Not only do you think it's good, but ook at all the people as well. Tell your friend to not doubt herself... there will be peope who will critizes your work, but it's nice to be complomented when it's good. tell her good job and keep writing. :)
wish i could write such lovely poems, your friend has a true gift to write what she feels in her heart, me i just write stories never a poem, if i tried it would suck so be sure to tell your friend i said this and ask her to try and make more, if she wants
The poems are amazing, the videos should scroll slower though so that the words can all be taken in. that is a really kind thing of you to do for your friend, and she is an amazing writer
Oh wow, you're such an amazing poet! Don't I wish i could write like you! Aww you inspire me, Juliette! My favourite was Complicated, I really loved it, and I'm also going to say that your poems touch me a lot! Thanks a lot for writing such beautiful things ^-^
OMG!!! this is beautiful!!!:') i dream i could write like that!! y she thinks there not good is a wonder to me! and i hope she realizes that there beautiful too!!!
Wow, these are truly beautiful! My favorite was definitely, 'Complicated.' The words in practically ever poem just seem to flow out beautifully, and it shows real emotion. =) Kudos to your friend for these poems, and remind her never to stop writing! ^^
Thank you everyone for all of the comments! And to clarify one thing. The poems really are in better readable paragraphs when they are not in a video lol. Its just really hard to get it all right when putting it in video form
Juliette: You are a fantastic poet, and anyone who says otherwise should be doomed to spend eterinity in misery. I completely enjoyed your poems and I love the tone you use. A couple of pointers.
On all of the poems: some of the words didn't quite fit with the tone. Remember, not every poem has to rhyme. If a word doesn't make sense, use a different one that sounds better.
Let me tell you a secret: Very nice but recompose the paragraphs so they are easier on a veiwers eyes
okay, so my deal is, ive had a long history of poets in my family, [none famous unfortunately] and theyve all had poems published in books and programs and things [so what im trying to say is that i know my poetry]. and those are some of the best poems ive read. juliette is a very talented person and i believe that she should keep writing. and you are not saying that just as a friend you really mean it. and this might sound weird but she can trust my judgement because im a complete stranger. lol
I like it, it could be revised in different shaped paragraphs for easier reading, but the overall flow was very nice.
You Got It Bad:
This one I could relate to very easily. I enjoyed the overall feel and rhythm of the poem as well as the overall look. Maybe you could take out a few ands and study some poetry in that particular style to see how authors prepare their thoughts and take from that ?
Confusion:
I like how it tells a story. Punctuation and grammar .. =]
I can really see the image in my mind. I like the rhyming schemes, but they seem a little bit inconsistent. Just proof-read the overall poem, really.
Complicated:
I felt -very- connected with this one, and I like the flow and smoothness of the poem itself. The rhyming scheme seemed more consistent, and you seem to have taken more time on this one. I like it.
Her Beauty:
Short, a bit inconsistent, but very many good things about it. The flow was a bit less. Overall very nice. =]
Very nice picture, it painted itself in my head =] Nothing really wrong that I can see.. But try to stick with your rhyming scheme ? =] Good job otherwise.
10 Things I Hate About You:
I liked how this sounded like a personal experience, moreso than the others really. It seemed incomplete for some reason, as if I expected a different ending. But otherwise, very nice job. =]
Keep growing in poetry, you have potential hun !! =] Great job !
is the song used from the movie the tenth kingsdom when they are in kissing town or whatever?
remilner90 1 year ago
oh wow when i read the poems i could see the love, the hate the pasion... i could see how she felt writing these... poems are a work that anyone can create, but takes a speical person to hypnotizes the reader that is exactly what your friend has done. Not only do you think it's good, but ook at all the people as well. Tell your friend to not doubt herself... there will be peope who will critizes your work, but it's nice to be complomented when it's good. tell her good job and keep writing. :)
girlsailormoonbunnie 2 years ago
wish i could write such lovely poems, your friend has a true gift to write what she feels in her heart, me i just write stories never a poem, if i tried it would suck so be sure to tell your friend i said this and ask her to try and make more, if she wants
dragon77888 2 years ago
OMLD those are so good!!!! I wish i could write poems like that...
MomijiKun2 2 years ago
Awesome I love the poems ...You friend could be the Shakespeare of the 20th century
mexgirlmindy 3 years ago
i luv them!!!
sora55luver 3 years ago
the secrets one is very cute!!!
I have tried to write poetry before, but it always came out wrong.
THIS-this is real poetry!
I LOVE how it's all about love and romance!
Maybe it's because I am a romance freak.. :) lol
Without a doubt, this is the best writing i have yet experienced and for a long, long time will be the best.
suzypola 3 years ago
my favs where complicated and her beauy.
wow your friend is well good at writing poems!! and you must be a realy good friend to do this for them!!!!
powergirl95 3 years ago
The poems are amazing, the videos should scroll slower though so that the words can all be taken in. that is a really kind thing of you to do for your friend, and she is an amazing writer
somedaymabe16 3 years ago
Oh wow, you're such an amazing poet! Don't I wish i could write like you! Aww you inspire me, Juliette! My favourite was Complicated, I really loved it, and I'm also going to say that your poems touch me a lot! Thanks a lot for writing such beautiful things ^-^
xangelicstarx 3 years ago
OMG!!! this is beautiful!!!:') i dream i could write like that!! y she thinks there not good is a wonder to me! and i hope she realizes that there beautiful too!!!
ninjastar15 3 years ago
Wow, these are truly beautiful! My favorite was definitely, 'Complicated.' The words in practically ever poem just seem to flow out beautifully, and it shows real emotion. =) Kudos to your friend for these poems, and remind her never to stop writing! ^^
xxxEurekaxxx 3 years ago
wow they were all so beutiful and full of feelings. i love them. the last one was my favorite.
keegangirl99 3 years ago
Thank you everyone for all of the comments! And to clarify one thing. The poems really are in better readable paragraphs when they are not in a video lol. Its just really hard to get it all right when putting it in video form
clarinetchk 3 years ago
It's not letting me comment.='[
lubgrimmjow 3 years ago
aww but you just did?
clarinetchk 3 years ago
maybe the comment was to long?
clarinetchk 3 years ago
Yer.Maybe.
lubgrimmjow 3 years ago
Juliette: You are a fantastic poet, and anyone who says otherwise should be doomed to spend eterinity in misery. I completely enjoyed your poems and I love the tone you use. A couple of pointers.
On all of the poems: some of the words didn't quite fit with the tone. Remember, not every poem has to rhyme. If a word doesn't make sense, use a different one that sounds better.
Let me tell you a secret: Very nice but recompose the paragraphs so they are easier on a veiwers eyes
phantomrox87 3 years ago
Ditto for Complicated and You Got it Bad.
Is this love: My Personal favorite. Very Pleasant, but remember, not everything has to rhyme!! :)
10 things I hate about you: One word, AMAZING!
All of these poems are fabulous. My advice, make a website and post these poems on it and keep writing!
phantomrox87 3 years ago
okay, so my deal is, ive had a long history of poets in my family, [none famous unfortunately] and theyve all had poems published in books and programs and things [so what im trying to say is that i know my poetry]. and those are some of the best poems ive read. juliette is a very talented person and i believe that she should keep writing. and you are not saying that just as a friend you really mean it. and this might sound weird but she can trust my judgement because im a complete stranger. lol
itachilover527 3 years ago
btw, the last is my favorite as well.
and i love the sound track. it makes the poems come to life just a little bit more than they already are. =]
itachilover527 3 years ago
Let Me Tell You A Secret:
I like it, it could be revised in different shaped paragraphs for easier reading, but the overall flow was very nice.
You Got It Bad:
This one I could relate to very easily. I enjoyed the overall feel and rhythm of the poem as well as the overall look. Maybe you could take out a few ands and study some poetry in that particular style to see how authors prepare their thoughts and take from that ?
Confusion:
I like how it tells a story. Punctuation and grammar .. =]
tess35 3 years ago
Is This Love:
I can really see the image in my mind. I like the rhyming schemes, but they seem a little bit inconsistent. Just proof-read the overall poem, really.
Complicated:
I felt -very- connected with this one, and I like the flow and smoothness of the poem itself. The rhyming scheme seemed more consistent, and you seem to have taken more time on this one. I like it.
Her Beauty:
Short, a bit inconsistent, but very many good things about it. The flow was a bit less. Overall very nice. =]
tess35 3 years ago
The Night You Said I Love You:
Very nice picture, it painted itself in my head =] Nothing really wrong that I can see.. But try to stick with your rhyming scheme ? =] Good job otherwise.
10 Things I Hate About You:
I liked how this sounded like a personal experience, moreso than the others really. It seemed incomplete for some reason, as if I expected a different ending. But otherwise, very nice job. =]
Keep growing in poetry, you have potential hun !! =] Great job !
tess35 3 years ago
I've read a lot of poetry. I know good poetry and her poetry is truly amazing! It's very pretty. I wish I could write like that. ^w^
poptartgurl9194 3 years ago
that was awesome!!!! I loved it it really inspired me!
beatles6love 3 years ago
thank you for commenting!
clarinetchk 3 years ago