A Hopeless Romantic - Short Film

[MAQCreativity]

good work bro.. impressed.!



[molly6cats]

Despite the quality of the shots, and the concept being quite good....I found that slightly insulting. We don't actually need you to be strong or smart for our sake. Be them for your sake, go back to your chores and prayers, and find another, needier, stupider girl who thinks that having a strong boyfriend is everything. I wonder who you could date? Hmm... Oh wait I know!

Bella from Twilight.

[halfsizedlife]

cute

[gesshu213]

mr. bean?

[axes2t2]

That was nice man.Good work.

[ThenThereWasB]

Okay, that was awesome. That is all.

[jestinelapid]

Haha. The guy's so cute. Good film, anyways. :-bd

[umarhayat9]

I also had almost same story...

[cdillman83]

I liked it. I would have liked it more had you had more background noises, etc. good job

[Anibeing]

This video... its so i dont know the word right know.. but you know.. this video reminds me alot of myself... I always tried to be someone i never was.. but i soon learned that the best person to be is myself. There is no lies or no masks.. They see the true you and Thats how i met a wonderful girl and now im 20. I couldnt be any happier. ^_^

[DRZCHOZEN1931]

be who you are, and not what others want you to be :)

[MrPintotube]

i´ll start today!

[Bhaichacha]

cant see in my life boring unlogic ,no apply rule of thirds

[LukeV85]

This is very good! it's great to just hear your voice and see all the other character acting without talking.

[tM1Hoops]

pretty good actually.. i liked the narration

[ravi3shekh1]

lol the study part kinda reminds me of me wen i tried to get my girl, nd wen i became smart and a top ten student, i frkin left the country hahahahah didnt talk to her for 7 years hahah the things we guys do

[skittleslaura]

"me getting hit by a car was God's way of saying 'just be patient'"

Now that's a sick way to interpret things

[zengrz]

i love this one, haha

[nFnBjR]

that was actually really good! i would've prefered a little less voice over and shown his conflict instead, but it seemed you wanted to go for that effect. very nice

[miamara35]

i like how he thinks. Just be yourself. when you've got nothing yet, try and be better so when the right time comes, everything will fall into place just right. :) thumbs up greg!

[miamara35]

"i'll start today!" hahaha!

[Twilightisamazingduh]

How sexist!

[Twilightisamazingduh]

We can also support ourselves, thank you very much

[Twilightisamazingduh]

we can take care of ourselves, thank you very much.

[VinBoiii]

wow this film really reminds me of another film called "Just a Nice Guy" by "Wong Fu Productions"

you peoples should chekk that film out..

the only difference is that their asian lol

thumbs up if you agree :)

[ktokaybabe]

Thank you for making my day :)

[whitedaisy2010]

This is great!

[8wild8creature8]

thank you for the great film! it made my day!

[03004452309]

this short film is perfect

great emotions story and everything

excep voice over

it really sucks

man

[meab12]

He reminds me of Michael from that 70s show

[skittleslaura]

@meab12

Kelso was very stupid and was obsessed by girls (their bodies), how does this boy remind you of him? :)

[meab12]

@skittleslaura Sorry, I meant Eric. Hes nothing like Kelso ha ha. The way he looks and his nerdyness remind me of Eric a lot :)

[skittleslaura]

@meab12 ;)) yes, much better. true ;)) I love that 70' show

[hexguzman]

the vioce over on the film sounds like he is reading the lines from the script as he is recording. doesn't sound believable lol

[nakedvolleyball]

Ryan is about as athletic as one of my pubic hairs when it's sleeping.

[nakedvolleyball]

as I'm watching this kid look at the girl sitting at the table, I'm about ready to puke..

[pepsimanlf]

First: at 4:23 there Harry Potter!

Second: awesome short! I loved it!

But seriously I hope that you dressed up as HP for the Hallows!

[tawriqua]

i cant hear the voiceover at all! the film would have been better with no words just audio, the story would have told itself, i spent half the time struggling to hear what was being said by the narrator

[beesathish]

if i had to say something about this movie - i should say that this movie is "pretty"... But i was just wondering why did you make the background voice feeble and a voice format which was transmitted over a network in a phone... Also the music audio was strong making the voice to go down further....

Good one....

[nabeelballer]

at least he got hit by a MINI COOPER lol

[jonathan312]

You can make it without the overvoice descriptions.

I think that would be awesome.

(some what like focus more on music and cinematography.)

They are already really good, by the way.

[meanmanthehat]

the guy looks like justin timberlake =)

[kokaneeslammer]

think its tough now wait till your thirty

[michaudj14]

She's at the cafe every day for weeks. Thought she was going away to college....?

[MHIoscar]

nice.. good luck on future projects!

[CDSanchez7]

did u use 24p? or 30p?

[TLCook57]

@CDSanchez7 24p

[rock54543]

awsome really loved it

[TheProjectMJ]

wat happened 2 ur aveneged sevenfold music videos? They were cool

[TLCook57]

@TheProjectMJ They got taken down do to copyright :-(

[TheProjectMJ]

@TLCook57 :( awwwwwww well better taken off bc of copyright then for some other reason :)

[TheIncredibleLilith]

@TLCook57 Gutted that the a7x vids are gone, they were much better than the official ones. :(

[ashton20067]

kid's gay.

girl's got no life. sits at the same place everyday. is she glued or something?

[TheLogan132]

Yeah I found it!!! Well worth the trouble Travis. Great short film. PS, I think I saw my car

[m4xrb]

I like the ending with the movement of the camera and the smile

[spartanor]

EPIC short film best short film iv seen on youtube this movie is a lesson to all the wannabes who arent themselves

[tehcodeninja]

TLCook57 Thank you for this short film. I am in same thing in real life. I watched this and I figure I do same thing I will wait.

[cycichick101]

i love this. ur a rly good director. cant wait to see ur movies one day

[afterskoolspecialz]

I really like this. Its a warm hearted story with a definite twist. I like the sort of quasi Marty McFly story. There's this film festival online I'm working up towards, don't know how I'm going to do but you guys definetly have a chance. Its on BIGSTAR tv.

[wooooofs]

i think picknickin guys who try to tear down this film have never done anything worthwhile in their lives themselves...pity for their hopeless,worthless,unredeemabl­e souls...RIP...

[KiernanMooney]

Quite good. Likable, intelligent character. Empathetic and humorous situation. Executed nicely. I like.

[cahrahmelah]

i love the way he walks

[hollowhearts]

gr8 work... one of the best i have seen so far

[curiousrabbit6]

very nice. it made me smile :)

[picknickerjoe]

The awful script, nearly unbearable performances, terrible soundtrack, and poor casting do nothing to redeem an incredibly worthless film based on an even more incredibly stupid idea.

[dylancare123]

greatest vid ever

[dylancare123]

just like me

[ITZoMEoCC]

yay! im that made me happy! i know exactly how he feels!

[fallensweetheart14]

i liked this. =) very very good.

[amazingviolin]

It was nice

[MLGmoppy2]

GREAT!

[HopeKeyes]

Good lesson of life: always stay yourself.

What is the music at 6:30 ?

[Layk35]

stupid ending, she's gonna be gone u idiot!

[ITZoMEoCC]

if its meant 2 be it will happen

[esioul23]

i loved everything except for the nasal voice :/

[gamefreak500]

what dose this have to do with avenged sevenfold?

[gamefreak500]

I reaspect you but you sound like an after school special or mabe a religuse leson

[jskillz909]

eh if you wait to long the girl might get taken =/ but i liked the video it totally represented me a hopeless romantic =/

[Folinguell]

amazing!!!!!!!!!!

[hadesoline321]

the narating cant be heard..too bad..

[jskillz909]

really? u must be deaf

[tragiceight]

its true be yourself :)

[xl13lx]

i cam across this video at the perfect time, and it really helped me with one of my issues

keep up the amazing work

[NorthsideTillDeath]

I really like it (:

It was very cute.

[happymad13]

it was great!

i love it!

[TeklemariamStudios]

Great film. Love the narrative story.

[HigherrConsciousness]

i love all of these good short films

[11sherwell11]

pretty good 5/5

[GuusSchuijl]

very well done! The idea of directing is very good. It is original, funny and nice to look at. Keep on going!

[tete999]

super

[RightWinger78]

well done

[tasteoffelicity]

loved it! I've seen a lot of short films lately and I have to say that yours is the best one so far..

I like the way of shooting and a funny atmosphere.. And the village- it's all sunny and careless.. Where is it?

[rainb0wdust]

Awesome vid. Really good work. ^^

[subby7866]

better than some crap i seen on youtube

[cjv325]

idk if it was just me but i can barely hear the narrating..

[MiniMoon1018]

very cool film!

[ChristineHades]

really good job!!!!

XD

[crazyrat909]

Just a quick note of advice- you should really become an actor. I felt like I was watching an educational film, (I mean that in a good way)

so keep up the good work i really like your videos

[mikeysgirl314]

it was pretty amusing...i liked it alot actually! good job!

[tzipporahcook]

It was good... but don't rely so much on narration. If you hadn't had any of it at all, the meaning would've still come across. (Watch it on mute and you'll see what I mean.) Now, if this had been on stage, the monolouge would've been great.. in fact you might consider playwriting....

[sidecar23]

@tzipporahcook Ohmygosh, the video had an audio narration??? My earphones are f*cked up sometimes so I just heard the background music but not the voice over when I first watched it. After reading your comment I watched it again, not using my earphones so I can hear the narration. To be honest, I agree with you. I liked it more the first time I watched it, without the dialogue. :)

[GrandmasterBambaataa]

no sound effects, no direct sound recording... just a narrator and music... good job...

[Lady1717]

really good work! but i don't like the end, it's too open ;)

[koinz04]

too bad the girl is gonna go get railed at college now...he lost his only chance

[woreditsamber]

great job btw!

[woreditsamber]

Wow, that was pretty inspiring. I'm 16..i feel the same way sometimes :)

[funfabmegan]

This was well written and put together,,really enjoyed It!! I like to write but sometimes its hard to visulize just how it would translate on to screen. Things like this give me a bit of hope.. so thanks.. keep up the good work..

[damnatium]

right, so all i have to do is get hit by a car, ill start tomorrow

[crazyrat909]

Lol

[BrokenGlass78]

@damnatium hahahhahahahahahahhahaha your comment made me laugh so hard!!!

[carlosc3d]

nice very nice jeje

[cherisma093]

well done..

simple yet so meaningful :D

[cherisma093]

well done..

simple yet so meaningful :D

[ByNica]

so cute

[lilit7]

good job (y)

[NepalmyPride]

wow! great movie. better than hollywood crap.

[midgegget210]

great job

[hgdhfbv]

*clap,clap,clap*

[100dollarproductions]

What was the budget and time frame for this film

[ILTERZOSOLE]

Bravo! :)

[rebelkillers2534]

wow this is really good great job

[highvoltage24]

i liked this video. it made me smile. i'd love to see more from you.

:)

[originiel]

this was really good! appreciate watching it

[xXBoxRocksXx]

good story

[MaxGad]

great!

[MaxGad]

was 3x lenses used for shooting this??

[Marinecorp812]

pretty good, sounds alot like my life story for the last couple of years

[mushizOmbies]

I love this :D your videos are great!

i guess it's kinda my story as well xD

keep on with the good work :)!

[QtheGuitarist]

and playing the part of Ryan... James Hettfield

[evilstitchy]

Love it!!!!

<3

[frankeachi]

great story ^^

[Chazorvigg]

LOL this is also awesome.

[SilverSormus]

I luv the story awesum

[Ospinhioo]

Awesome video, loved it. Great story! =D

[shinichi115]

MAKE A SEQUAL PLEASE! Lol.

[kateyed]

I've seen a few of your videos before, and out of nowhere was looking for something on youtube and ran into this one that i've never seen. I loved it.. really has a good message. 5/5

[ilovemovies2092]

that was awesome! i hope there's a sequel.

[Maximumdistance]

Absolutely fantastic, you're an excellent director! The narration fit right in with the classic feeling of this movie. Really good shorty, enjoyed it very much! =)

[pattinha]

loved it!

i hope there's a sequel, he deserves it ;p

[LoveAtTwilight]

Great ending ^^

[creativeplayground]

from the bottom of my heart and my career as a director, man you are good! i enjoyed your story

[bogpat]

I love this fscking video, one of the best in whole youtube ^^

[AndyLandwersiek]

Great!

[remnantlacroix]

Fantastic work once again cook. All thought the narration may have been a been nerdy. Good job =]

[DaysDarls]

is there going to be a sequal???????

[matoisy]

nice video!

[animeworldchick]

wow that was amazing! Is there a part 2? gosh u're so good!

[moppishmop]

Aw this is so cute! ^.^ I hope they make a sequal

[DancingAngelicR]

Sweet, although the part with him being hit by a car was icky.

[animeworldchick]

i know right? who would've expected that? lol! Well I did thought of it by the beginning lol

[TheSnickerdoodles]

wow I didn't think I would watch the whole thing, that was really good

[NeverShoutForever]

is there going to be like a sequal to this :D

[MyDamnDesign]

oh i loved this

[lonerchyld]

love how theres the glare off his aviators from the sun.... not sure if that was on purpose or not but it sure added to it

[XOwlsSayHootX]

waaaaaaaooow , I like the part where the cup blew up in his face xD, but its nice, *clap clapity clap* and I knew he was gonna get hit lmao! I was like "hes gonna get hit, hes gonna get his, hes gonna get hit, AHHA! I knew he was gonna get hit!" lmao

[beleted409]

i know every time he would act like he was going to cross the street i'm like "oh man he's going to get hit by a car"

[bigvinn117]

dnt read this(cuz it really wrks). u will gt kissd on the nearest frieday by the love of ur life. 2mara wll b the bst day of ur life hwever if you dnt post ths comment 2 at least 3 vids u will die withn 2 days nw uv startd readn this dnt stp this is so scary snd ths ovr 2 5 vids in 143 mins when ur done press f6 nd ur crush's name wll appear on the screen n big letters ths is so scary cuz it actully wrks ths really wrks

[gautisk8]

great video nice job travis

[paulkay]

AWESOME MAN!

It is so true :/ I managed to get the girl i loved last year when I was 16, this sunday I will be 17 and we are no longer together, rushing a relationship is bad :D Awesome movie I loved it and how true it is!

[bmxallthetime]

fuckin awesome

[IndyCreations]

Good job :)

[ShawnAndShane]

Travis I loved this man, So great! So well done. You've come a long way man.

[thundercat1493]

yeah good effort, nice contrast from the music videos youv dun 10/10

[outofilm]

Great work Travis!! I really liked it!

[ChrisRockPunkLife]

co0ol nice job

[FinnishMCRLover92]

This was great, i loved it :)

[tomformegz]

mint

[mshaddowz]

no other words 4 it MINT

[Orchid89706]

Definately Voted for it!!!! Everyone make sure you vote too!!! Follow the link.

[Dudeman2k]

Make sure to vote for him i want too see more videos like this. (Link in description)

[ChrisRockPunkLife]

go0od jop and nice story

[salamani]

Wow, that was probably the best short story I've ever seen. It was artistic and down to earth and... wow I don't know what to say, I just love it in every way.

Well, except one. I think it's strange how people always say they're in love with someone even though they've never talked to them. I don't know it seems so shallow.

It's like I saw written somewhere, people say that hate is a strong word. But so is love, and yet we throw it around like it doesn't matter

[cxzccscacas]

very very very very well done . I love it !

[evilbettie]

Truly adorable short film! I had fun giggling through it at the poor lovesick boy; and the Bug that hit him honestly made me jump! Really sweet, though. Not many boys at that age actually think those kinds of things through nowadays, however.

[thsunshine]

that was really nice... i liked it^^ good job!

[r0ckstarkizz]

amazing shit. its really nice and great done (:

do more <3