A Zanessa Story Episode 1 (Pregnant Or Not?)

[4everteamalice]

COPIER U COMPLETELY COPIED BREAKING DAWN GOD

[TheShonna1]

a lie monique is not pregnant

[TheMissallthat101]

i think she will make a good mom cuz she so sweet and caring and luv childern

[MsAsianNinja]

Um..Twilight?...

[Sexybethissexy1]

Goooddd jobb i reallly liked that carry on with this story plzz thankkss xxx

[boobee242]

why why is it takin so long huh

delete this video and make a nex one fast

[fatimaandkiara]

that was good but too much description

[DIAFB]

It was ok. The part where it said period made me laugh though. But yeah... It could've been more like understandable if you started it like when they first met or when they got married. Or like when Zac proposes to her nd stuff.But stil, it was good I guess.

[ChloeAgnew4Ever]

I loved so much

[ninaoestergaard123]

sorry, dont really like it!.

[peacelover211]

I LOVED IT!!!!!

[maximumride1100]

its almost like breaking dawn

[AnnaLIZZi]

This is my FAVORITE couple!!!!!!! Great Job!

[papaapple93]

Awesome story I hope you'll continue it, be sure to check out my series as well :)

[lilchingyz]

WhO CrEaTEd ThiS TRaiLEr?

[Zanessafan8101987]

i cant understand you sry why is that the start and not the married day or the first meeting >:(

[xozanessalovexo35]

loved it

[torrilepard]

u write 2 much one time and it passes by 2 quickly so i cant read it

[vanessamileyluver]

omg im sry i kno ull hate me but this really DOES SOUND LIKE TWILIGHT BREAKING DAWN. !!!!!!!!

[PrincessMaidah]

@vanessamileyluver : yh.. i ws thnkn the same thng :O

[conrady77]

is she really prego

[eharv123]

come watch my first zannessa story!!

[tasneem196]

i loveeeeeeeeeeeee it

[smilyface50]

AHHHHHHH! So frickin awesome!

[Jenny72055454]

love it! It's the best!!

[chhlloo]

Whyy cant he bee minee he is soooosoooosooooo sweet and caring ! ily Zac x

[OfficialTeamZanessa]

this is aesome!! ADDD MEEEE

[iluv3wheeling]

im so srry i rated it poor i clicked on it be accident!

[nicexmeangrl]

kool but it is a youtube video ...try to be less descriptve.....its not like ur writing an essay but other than that perfect !!!!!

[1melanieg200]

soo old i remember this!

[sweetestchick13]

this was to long and to many mistakes

[Josephine233]

hey let vanessa be pregnant ok if she wants to but i want the father to be zac efron bcause they are really a sweet couple you know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*********

[Lizamiza3126]

goood not bed i like it it kind of fun

[astigertz0117]

nice!

[masquerading56]

iz a little depressing...but interesting....wow...and kina gross.....but gud?......i gess... but i liked it.. il watch the next wun

[webkinzfan350]

5:36

[MissHardyx3]

i think its cool

[misscustard1]

r they married? if u say they r... any way plz tell me the truth if they r married

[niezwaagk]

u messed up on 3:03. you forgot the I in life. other than that you did a really great job

[tobythekingcharles]

um no offence but this is shit and untrue its just a made up story!

[parvasolja]

give her an chance

[msbranew]

your an idiot duh its made up stupid

[MrMeg12345]

thats cool i love it!

[cherrygurlxoxo]

where do u watch this show?????? is this the real version????? i am crazzzzzzzzzzzzy to watch after reading the story from here! i simply luv it!

[PurpleMusicLoverXXX]

U spelled Monique's surname wrongly.. Cool video.. Quite realistic, although I dun quite like Zanessa, I prefer Zashley!

[terryfairy96]

i watched all of them there so good

[alexissization]

i dont think you copied off of the twilight saga but i think you used to many of the same woeds to many times

[xoxoMissyB1xoxo]

im a huge fan too and im rewatching these and THEY ROCK  xoxoxoxo

[xxxcute4everzzz]

BRILLIANT

[julesdanser]

my birthday is tommorrow!

[sherikaselby]

koool very nice

[Jenny72055454]

i love it it was sooo good maybe u be a master of this

[Jenny72055454]

me too

[terryfairy96]

this is good

[clanaforever13]

this was a good vid.:]

[terryfairy96]

it sure was!!!!

[singingsuperstar0717]

this is amazing for a first episode. if you're this good on the first episode now that you have almost 30 eps you must be beyond amazing. i think i just might get through all of your eps in one night. i love Tears by the way it's really good.

[luvsweetheart]

I absolutely love your series!! I'm totally addicted to these and just wanted to say keep up on the amazing work, your a very talented writer. hope to see more form you! <33

[msBeckyinthemiddle]

yeah u really are good at this ur one of my fav story tellers i loved this one and the tears series

[caroooooo100]

you do to long make da lines shorter

[Lee2612]

this is such a great video and i personally think youve done great for your 1st vid but the problem is i think the couple are a bit to boring

[smileygurlify]

it was ok? but wheres da 2nd one?

[Fairysparkles123]

Question: How do I like it?

Answer: Very nice. Thanks for posting.

Fairysparkles123

[BabyGirlz54582]

luv this.

whats the last song???

[babygurlari13]

too emotional by vanessa hudgens

[babygurlari13]

i love ur vids ur really good at making these........ive already watched ur series on this one and i cant stop watching them......these vids r amazing

[MapleChic5]

awesome vids,stacey.

(ur name reminds me of the song Stacey's Mom)

[gibblegurl]

wow u r good at this

[abbyx2511]

i thing is. when she said my parents r gonna kill me. they cant. shes a married woman

[gogogirl800]

zac will understand of course and he will comfort her and be there every step of the way of course

[jjluver102]

love you videos!i can't wait for you to make more of them!!

[sexybackgul]

ew.

[Gabbygirl1021]

cool but to fast

[shan98non]

i think the story were wayyyy to long...

[tawniroessler]

i loved it!!!!!! u r great!! wen r u going to make the nextt 1?

[christine813yoo98]

y would you start when there married? but its good

[shannieclaire]

what song is this??

[nicnack94]

1- everyday

[christine813yoo98]

Which one?

[jessrocks159]

so good

[maiyaj705]

OMG like tht was really detailed and well written! You have a talent girl! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zanessa luver <3!!!!

[cdknfrh]

I luv it!

[123SelenaLover456]

how do u like make thease?

[creator140]

nice

[Squeakers38the2nd]

hi good vdeos, i think i am ur cousins friend! ill ask her at school again awesome videos check out mine

[coolgirlvannesa]

awsome ...xx :-)

[HazalSelena]

this sucks so much omg

[goldeneygirl]

ok this sounds like it was ripped off of Breaking Dawn

[jmack3333]

wat a lie faget

[dirtysoul001]

QWERTYUIOPALDO was really harsh to u so dont listen 2 her she is stupid or him watever she/he is jus jealouse cuz they cant write a story better than u do so"press on"dont let anyone get in ur way that was just a little bump in the rode

"PRESS ON!"LOLz...

[lisa33769]

I LOVE IT !!! But u need to work on ur spelling a little more sorry if I'm being mean

[cutieamber95]

it was really good!! Its like wats gonna happen!! Good vid!!

[iTotalDramaIsland]

I agree wuth fabulosityqueen...it wasnt that good..

[cantlivewithnolaugh]

i agree with missyme144

[missyme144]

great but next time could u just go straight to the story

[ThaliaFan96]

it was annoying cuz i wanted you to get to the point but it was good

[alibo123]

it's amazing 4 the first 1

[cantlivewithnolaugh]

pretty good for a first episode

[MaRyLL15]

magaLing kah!!!!!!!!hehehehehehe!!maint­indihan niO kaya 2??!!!

[tigerbeat9]

al u haterz stop being rude i know its your opion but if u cant say anything nice dont say anything at all plus i love the series

[fabulosityqueenx3]

this story was a little lame..srry..

[Mileycyruslovr91596]

Is that really ture?!

[shitwa1]

It's just a story she makes up. It's alot of them around on youtube ;)

[mizkinz8]

AWESOME! I liked the part when she was like: OMG OMG!!! I AM PREGNANT!!! NO I'M NOT!!! YES I AM!!! I AM ONLY 19 AND MY PARENTS WILL KILL ME!

[BiteMe135]

It sounds just like the plot line in breaking dawn by stephenie meyer when bella finds out she prego

[luvmylife89]

it was soo good i liked it

[SidWoo]

boring

[LeTTyC56]

i love a good zanessa stroy dat 1 waz brill!!!!

[mzjesus95]

i love it

[sakuya585]

its a cool story but im just trying to keep it real its to much text and like not much of zanessa.... U guys should look at the others its olsow cool but plzplz get more zanessa action then its perfect

[Michelle2Eric]

omg great Video! love it!

[swimgirl09allthetime]

this is great dont get discourged because i can tell this will be great

[MerisaGirl]

that was really cool

[chely541]

is she pregnet or not!!!!!!!!!!

[lec151]

it was great

[beccacool]

loved it

[alkyonice]

your so great awesome very nice..... hehehehe

[wragsy12345]

it would be great if these storys was made into a programme or even a bookk cuz normally i dont watch these or read booksss buh since iv been reading these i think iv become addicted! lol! well done :)

[alysandramadeline]

OMG! You're an awesome writer!! My dream is to become a writer and you're now officially one of my inspirations!!

[Fredlovrs]

amazing, u r a good writer... very detailed!

<333 S.

[jonasbrosaddict01]

how do u post your powerpoint? How do u make one?

[SHATTERtragic]

mean story just next time make it shorter sorry to be a critic but the writing on some photos were hard to read, but other than that it was mean as !!

[poLsKaacCiiCcaaa]

Great Story

[moniandnatii12]

this was okay

[FutureSingingStar15]

no, it was awesome!!!

[sophieematiee]

wow i lurve the zanessa series and dis one is by far dah best keep up dah gurd work bbe xx

[hotflot]

this is what i have been looking for i tried too find the best zanessa story and here is it

[clozzee]

I don't usually watch all these Zanessa stories, but nooo I think I become addicted! lol

Very good

[aznpnay59]

How do you do this please tell mee =[

[Fanaura]

nah this is great !

abit of mistakes but

i could still read !

[blanca154]

AWSOME JOB!!!=D

[angelzcutie]

not cool

[daniyah98]

good job!!! i lyk it very much!!

how did u do???

[blahblahblahgs]

I like it! BTW, how do you make your videos? do you use powerpoint or what? cuz im trying to make my own but i can't figure out how to do it.

Thanx

[cbgurl9249]

powerpoint!!!! (i do it @ my skool)

[funkygal96]

nice

[xwaddles101x]

i love it but just a little too much detail but keep up making the episodes!! i lvoe watching them say i love you and i love it when they show they care about each other!! so cute!!

[manderts]

tmi.pretty good.not bad

[Poegirl27]

to much details

[xCandyx14]

OMG you are amazing!!!!!!<3333

Keep it up!

[jonasNDcyrus]

omg this is awesome i luv it

[yogirllorri]

koolio

[IheartGRAPES]

oscar?

[helo25]

its pretty good considering that its ur first one.ill be watching the rest.

[FionaRockz]

hey its not bad for your first. great story line. Good work , keep it up. I'll be watching your epesoids!

[luvbabyv1]

omg i love it!!!!! i am starting my own and i need some more people to watch!!! i dnt mean to be rude but please help me!! go to

the disaster trailer ep2!! i hope you like it please i need your support!

zanessa4ever&ever

[essexbabe05]

luved it

[soccerluvr122]

make it more diolge becuse it makes it A LOTTTT better

but other then tht it was REALLY good

[xcrazydj]

it was good but you made it more like a fanfiction I liked the story line though

[eliza1100]

its good.. its really good!!

but....

to long to read.

make it just dialog!

plz?

[panpher5]

i liked it but i thought when i saw the title,i thought it was boring,i think ur a gd writer tho

[claireashleycarly]

too long.

[ilolweizbhir]

it's not bad for her to get pregnant since she's married.

[lovezanessa4eve]

I like it but try not to write much, just dialog. please

[xBaybeexStaceex]

Awwh I feel Sorry 4 Nessa....SheIs Way Stressed About It...I new It Wud Be Ashley ut Im Sure Zac Wount lave her And i Hope If She Is her Parents Wont fall Out Wif Her And Im Sure Zac Wouldnt Either Lol

[bloodsuckerv246]

kool

[XxelliebobxX]

heyy *zacefronfan009*

down there

you should have really kept going cos these episodes are amazing !!

[zacefronfan009]

only watched 10 seconds of this cos i dont lke it when people jump straight into things try and leave a story line!!!

[Riggsoli]

well i love zanessa and even though this was a little bit cheesy i thought that this video was great. I loved the video

[emcnary56]

this is awesome!

make more!

i got really worried at first coso i didnt no it was made up do the first slide wen i tsaid they were amrried and corbin had a son i was liek WOT!

but yeah!

keep up the good work!

i can promise you i will get addicted lol!

x

[roteKobra]

Great can´t wait for the next one

[xluverlylotix]

this is awesome!

make more!

i got really worried at first coso i didnt no it was made up do the first slide wen i tsaid they were amrried and corbin had a son i was liek WOT!

but yeah!

keep up the good work!

i can promise you i will get addicted lol!

x

[koolgurl30]

it kinda look like she's getting anorexia...

[bratznikki99]

it would be so cool if vanessa was pregant for real

[MILEYROCKS201]

omg this is so cool! keep makin em!i just started getting into them!! lol.

[xoxoMiSSsTaCeYxoxo]

i kno wot do ya think i shud do. xoxo

[jeanandscott100]

OMG tht girl well badly copied u! Noy just with the pregnancy but with the storyline so far! OMG thts low! I cnt beleive she is saying its hers! :@

[icey4s]

OMG at when how

[zanessa19871988]

that was so amazing but it was in a bit to much detail

[cinmilk9769]

can u make the words faster?

[wish1up]

i love it

[singingsuperstar0717]

This is cool but hurry. I like it alot. By the way t's pregnant not preganant. Just trying to be helpful.

[1095ccv]

I loved it!

[xdisneychannelfanx]

For an first episode this is amazing, My little bit of advice would proberly to not go in to too much detail.

But still this was amazing, I can tell people will enjoy ya series.

[123Tasha456]

Loved it <33*

:D

[zainab129]

loved it awesome for the first episode!!!!!!cant wait for the next one!!!