A Simple Love Story Final Cut

[ansomble28]

Although I'm no real fan of love stories, I liked some of the camera shots and edits you chose. I thought the setup leading to the house was dope, and I especially liked how the emotion of the girl was conveyed through the bus ride. Good choice.

Can't wait to see it on the big screen at the film fest!

[sarahfaceFTW]

Aww. I really loved this.

(:

[TallCatsMakeGoodHats]

Excuses... Anyone can take time to make a short film. Few can make it good. Accept the criticism.

[TallCatsMakeGoodHats]

Well I'm sorry not everyone likes your movie. But there are people called critics and as a critic saying with truth. You movie is horrific, plain, same boring story line. You could have done something outside the norm. This plot is almost similar to all love movies ever made.

[dbilleaux]

Thanks for the truthful criticism, but I still think it's silly that you even spent the time to comment on it if you didn't even like it. Not only that, but to personally message me to tell me how much my movies suck. I agree the film is slow, but it's not horrific. I'm not saying this because I filmed it, but because it's really not a bad for a student film that was shot in less than 3 days and was managed all by myself.

[dbilleaux]

Not to mention that I did it for a class and did many changes to my film based on what my fellow students and professor suggested.

Like I said before, I would love to see you attempt to make a short film.

[ansomble28]

If you wanted to add worthwhile criticism, try talking about the technical elements that you feel should be improved, the script elements you were indifferent with, or the actor choices that took you out of the movie.

You aren't offering criticism by lambasting the director because the genre or story being told is something you are bored with or aren't interested in.

[TallCatsMakeGoodHats]

Wow. I no longer need sleeping pills. Thanks.

[iamnothier]

wow this was really sweet

[Lordspam0]

It is amazing to see how much your skills have improved!

[sedohr16]

yay for using the noisy orbit buses in your film (and yourself as a cameo).

enjoyed the film (perfect music and setting choices)

[KnoxsKorner1]

yaaaayyy! go dani! go dani! :)

good job again, again.

[irvideoblogger]

I really enjoyed this shortfilm. Keep it up. <3

[dataxpress]

Great job! (PS you should post the "alternate ending" version :D)

[RobertFata]

Wow. That's a really good short. Though I feel like I would have enjoyed it more if I had a vagina. You should make a parody of it.

[dataxpress]

LOL. ILY robert.