What time was supposed to take place? Hate to be a geek, but the Liberation of Shanxi was like 30 years before when the first Mass Effect took place. For that to be his daughter and that old, and him having been in command of a ship during the liberation, he has to be at least in his late 60s. Unless it's from before the first Mass Effect.
I thought this was going to be better. I know it's a machinima and that most vids aren't really professional per se, but this seemed rush and not too well done. The VA wasn't really believable and was actually annoying with the exception of the Krogan, the animations were pretty bad, they messed up at least 2 or 3 word pronunciations from the lore, and just kind of ruined it for me. I don't mean to be a negative Nick or anything. Hopefully the second part will be better.
I feel like i'm watching garry's mod films or something...could use some smoothing around the animations and making it look more realistic like the actual game
no 1 else had done a mass efffect machinimi or at least not 1 as gd as this so people shouldnt judge so quickly on its apparence, it'll get betteras it goes along
Yeah, I love that finally Somebody took on such a Complex game and tried to make it into a Machinima. It's obvious that they did their best with it. I like how Ally looks like Miranda's daughter, ha.
I liked how the voice acting was wooden and bad, but this could be reworked into a sitcom kinda how the movie "The Room" went from a serious drama to a comedy.
Hey guys (creator here), just letting you know that Episode 2 is in the works with entirely new facial animation system is in place, and while I made 90% of these animations myself, episode 2 will primarily use animations from the game.
Acting wise, this is pretty good. Story wise this is quite interesting. But the animation needs some work. It would probably help if the facial animations were more elaborate and if there were more gesticulations while they're talking. Although I understand if that's just hard to pull off.
@mitchmazda6 Probably using UDK, Unreal Development Kit, it's basically what game developers use to make games. But it can also be used to create machinima.
@DarkLexx Hey. (writer here) You are absolutely right- I intended for the light year to be understood as a measure of distance. Here's a rewording of the line in question.
"Well, Mr. Happy is waiting for me and it would absolutely ruin the next leg of my trip if I knew I tarnished his famously good mood with my lateness."
@LeShorte I agree. It isn't the best, but making machinima with UDK is not the easiest thing to do either. At least the creator made an effort to make this, and came out with a decent episode. So, great job to you MrPooshter!
not many machinimas made in mass effect, i approve. little rough around the edges but it's a new medium and it has more potential in some ways than the more popular games used for machinima. keep em coming.
@stormtrooper789 No you mistaken me from what I mean, its the way they say it lol, its said like SOL, not SUL, even though its spelt like Salarian, or even so, I do myself say SAL instead of SOL sometimes :P
i just wanna critique you honestly. im not trying to be mean. even adding some head movement during conversations would be a step up. also the audio fades out at times
@M4Nt1sP That isn't my point. I am not a filmmaker/machinamaist. But that doesn't mean I have to like everything I see. But I know what Kootra or more broadly people in general can make, so I do have a standard of quality.
@Rumige i thought the voice acting was quality - it was the animations, especially the lip-syncing, that was iffy. Anyway, this machinima is good stuff!
voice acting needs work, wasnt really impressed with any of it, but the voice acting made it hard for me to even enjoy the good parts, not bashing the video or anything, just saying it has alot of room to improve.
I don't see why there are so many dislikes. Albeit this isn't the most fantastic work ever, but it's definitely something different and I enjoyed it. Being someone who has toyed around with the UDK I can appreciate how much work had to have been put into these scenes, even if there were a few animation bugs here and there.
Not to mention the voice acting was absolutely fantastic and the cinematography was very creative. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Not too bad. Voice acting needs work of course but it was pretty cool. But one major fail, which i see mentioned in previous comments: I can't believe you guys thought a Lightyear was a measurement of time lol. It's distance; how far light can travel through space in the time of one earth year. (I beleive)
2:42 sound messed uo: He sounded louder when he was further away from the camera, and no effect on his voice? Also: It actually sounded better without the voice-effect: The natural voice was louder and clearer, and minor tweaks in voices are more recognisable.
I know I shouldn't criticize the animation because that is really difficult to do with this, but their faces all look like they're almost in a default position.... would be good to actually get deeper looks at facial expression.
There's a lot of potential but you maybe need to work on the lip-syncing and adding a bit more animation to their facial expressions and body movements, I dunno, they just feel a bit wooden if you know what I mean. I liked the camera-work and the voice acting though. Please make more :)
People dont seem to understand how tricky is to learn the insides of the Unreal Engine. This is a wonderful job, animations can be a bit clunky, but this requires a lot of job. The story can be improven, but i think this guy deserves a like
"People dont seem to understand how tricky it is to learn the insides of the Human Body. This is a wonderful job, the organs are a bit mixed up, but this requires a lot of work. There some blood still leaking out, but i think this doctor deserves a "thumbs up"."
What time was supposed to take place? Hate to be a geek, but the Liberation of Shanxi was like 30 years before when the first Mass Effect took place. For that to be his daughter and that old, and him having been in command of a ship during the liberation, he has to be at least in his late 60s. Unless it's from before the first Mass Effect.
Good vid anyway, too little action though.
gg09701 1 month ago
BLINK>>BLINK>>>>BLINNNNKKKKKKKK
Damionscool 6 months ago
ahh face animation!!!!!!
GivenForver 6 months ago
The only characters that DON'T get on my nerves are the Krogan, Asari, and the Solarian. The 2 humans are just assholes.
LordKorloros 6 months ago
I thought this was going to be better. I know it's a machinima and that most vids aren't really professional per se, but this seemed rush and not too well done. The VA wasn't really believable and was actually annoying with the exception of the Krogan, the animations were pretty bad, they messed up at least 2 or 3 word pronunciations from the lore, and just kind of ruined it for me. I don't mean to be a negative Nick or anything. Hopefully the second part will be better.
NickMaloney92 6 months ago
lol it's a young miranda.
bddblade 6 months ago
I feel like i'm watching garry's mod films or something...could use some smoothing around the animations and making it look more realistic like the actual game
269cypher 6 months ago
I love the song at the end so much
JHERO317 6 months ago
It was nice work. It definitely defines a Mass Effect title. but it needs a lot of polishing.
kendu504 7 months ago
he was thinking: how could i forget the medigel!!!!!!
blackboy55465 7 months ago
Would be cool to have a Halo-Mass Effect Crossover using this style of Machinima.
Motion63O 7 months ago
@Motion63O I would so watch that.
spiderboy43 6 months ago
The way the characters act and move in this is pretty sucky
irishcrixus 7 months ago
@Arcadia My exact thoughts...
CadyMoriarty 7 months ago
i tried to like it but it failed :/ put more effort in in
Arcadia117 7 months ago
I love the video but the one problem I had was the asari's eyes they were to big for my liking but other than that it was great
storey981 7 months ago
I'm commander Shepard and this is my favorite Machinima on Youtube
OxYcOd0n3 7 months ago
no 1 else had done a mass efffect machinimi or at least not 1 as gd as this so people shouldnt judge so quickly on its apparence, it'll get betteras it goes along
holty1234567890 7 months ago
I really liked it, but it just felt unfinished toe, with the audio skips and animation problems. Hopefully episode 2 fixes these.
GOGTOXIC 7 months ago
Intresting story but it was just painful to watch sorry
MustangGT691 7 months ago
might get better
ziharkthehated 7 months ago
Yeah, I love that finally Somebody took on such a Complex game and tried to make it into a Machinima. It's obvious that they did their best with it. I like how Ally looks like Miranda's daughter, ha.
xKaiLua 7 months ago
I liked how the voice acting was wooden and bad, but this could be reworked into a sitcom kinda how the movie "The Room" went from a serious drama to a comedy.
jtmcbath 7 months ago
@jtmcbath I disagree. There are far too many comedies on you tube. I want to see a serious story that stays that way to the end.
SonOfCallaugh 7 months ago
How was this made?
MrRudiMentary 7 months ago
just hope it doesnt end for no reason in the middle of the story like "wardens fall" did
Schism704 7 months ago
Hey guys (creator here), just letting you know that Episode 2 is in the works with entirely new facial animation system is in place, and while I made 90% of these animations myself, episode 2 will primarily use animations from the game.
MrPooshter 7 months ago 18
@MrPooshter when will the episode come out
BeefSupreme101 7 months ago
@MrPooshter Looking forward to see what comes next.
SonOfCallaugh 7 months ago
@MrPooshter Great to hear. The story is quite interesting.
stonedfilmer 7 months ago
@MrPooshter Well done! Sad it's so buried under garbage. I know the feeling...
Anarchist86ed 2 months ago
@MrPooshter i wish kooterz(Kootra) would finish reprisal
HaZZmatDefender 2 months ago
Acting wise, this is pretty good. Story wise this is quite interesting. But the animation needs some work. It would probably help if the facial animations were more elaborate and if there were more gesticulations while they're talking. Although I understand if that's just hard to pull off.
udaho456 7 months ago
This is still good I don't care about the animations anymore
because the dialogues and the script itself is well made
good job
and don't listen to these haters keep making this series.
Rinaldimanc 7 months ago
I can tell that the people in this took so many acting lessons. They are the perfect actors. They sucked me into the illusion!
Ghats212 7 months ago
I love the piano music at the beginning
awesomegamedude8 7 months ago
The bland VA's are more noticeable to me than the PS2 animation.
Silverthumb 7 months ago
Wow. This was pretty good.
sebob123 7 months ago
oh. a video on the machinima channel that isn't a gameplay video! NICE JOB MACHINIMA!
Dune1884 7 months ago
Uhh just stick to Halo machinima's if you even think about making another episode. THIS SUCKS!! Only good thing is that its ME.
hattrickster33 7 months ago
Well that...sucked. I wish there was some decent ME machinima.
HarmlessCRUNCH 7 months ago
How is this made?
mitchmazda6 7 months ago
@mitchmazda6 Probably using UDK, Unreal Development Kit, it's basically what game developers use to make games. But it can also be used to create machinima.
TheJpape 7 months ago
@TheJpape Thank you, that is helpful =)
mitchmazda6 7 months ago
a light year is a measure of distance not time good sir! sorry but thats the nerd in me poking out XD
DarkLexx 7 months ago
@DarkLexx Hey. (writer here) You are absolutely right- I intended for the light year to be understood as a measure of distance. Here's a rewording of the line in question.
"Well, Mr. Happy is waiting for me and it would absolutely ruin the next leg of my trip if I knew I tarnished his famously good mood with my lateness."
FirstLineIn 7 months ago
well done i really enjoyed it
loverofcookies117 7 months ago
What can i say?
blootoon4 7 months ago
Yeah, the animation isn't the best... nor the voice acting, but... it's far better than the CoD machinimas we get...
LeShorte 7 months ago 17
@LeShorte I agree. It isn't the best, but making machinima with UDK is not the easiest thing to do either. At least the creator made an effort to make this, and came out with a decent episode. So, great job to you MrPooshter!
Kronosphere100 6 months ago
@stormtrooper789 Thats alright :D
SirRevso 7 months ago
faces need work
digunder14 7 months ago
Almost sounds like the 2 girls 1 cup piano in the beginning
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TopsyTurve 7 months ago
not many machinimas made in mass effect, i approve. little rough around the edges but it's a new medium and it has more potential in some ways than the more popular games used for machinima. keep em coming.
thuzan117 7 months ago
My main issue is the voice acting. Im no professional but I think it could be betyer.
Merrik11 7 months ago
thats impressive
benxr2006 7 months ago
Good editing
Trials77546 7 months ago
That could be an interesting premise for a new Mass Effect game once the trilogy is done.
liberate29 7 months ago
Lol, i've seen Kootra done way better machinima's with less story and less props.
Hobbittio 7 months ago
This is good. A little stiff at times, but really good. Far better than what I could possibly do
MrLAG95 7 months ago
it wasnt bad, though i think most of the animations are done by the person
thedeadsexyedge 7 months ago
Sooo another series you wont finish ?..?
randomonium5 7 months ago
fix the animations and i think this would be set
RavenousSpectre 7 months ago
Where did that "space-stick" come from?
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this is... kinda shit isn't it?
HopelessHarveee 7 months ago
Please tell me this was not made with UDK. Cos bad animation.
SONRAIHBOY 7 months ago
if someone would do something about fixing sine human face movement other then lip flaps this could be a lot better
WilliamBandet 7 months ago
How could they mis-pronounce so many names... but other than that this was decent
PREPLIN2productions 7 months ago
is it so hard to get a good voice actress
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Wolfster7 7 months ago
"Realy, i get the stick?"
Thats what my gf said after hours of begging me for.. you know what :p
TheDarklord0211 7 months ago
what happen to the video's what is that reproductor
santillica 7 months ago
@stormtrooper789 No you mistaken me from what I mean, its the way they say it lol, its said like SOL, not SUL, even though its spelt like Salarian, or even so, I do myself say SAL instead of SOL sometimes :P
SirRevso 7 months ago
I bet they were inspired to do this by xcalizorz' playthrough.
ItsChris692 7 months ago
I wince everytime you guys say "Sal-larian"
Frooglar 7 months ago
wonder how they missed that? The whole light year thing
XyleJKH 7 months ago
This is a great Machinima good job!!
ralphanator4 7 months ago
New video player?!?
babtothebone 7 months ago
I clicked on video thinking it was made my Kootra :(
ralphanator4 7 months ago
also, there's no sound in space ¬¬ like to they can see :)
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Midkupz 7 months ago
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TheBlueMarth 7 months ago
im not a troll but this sucks....
RomanticGames94 7 months ago
love to see more
deathdragonsoul 7 months ago
i just wanna critique you honestly. im not trying to be mean. even adding some head movement during conversations would be a step up. also the audio fades out at times
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MrTheCODbeast 7 months ago
Not a bad effort for a Machinima. Plus its not COD :D
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MrTheCODbeast 7 months ago
Serious captain is serious....2:36 - 2:50 that face...
zark474 7 months ago
I really do want to like it, cause I like everything mass effect-related.
But the stiff animations and strangeness like the arm at 5min in. is totally what throws me off the enjoyment.
I get the feeling that this could be done better or worked around the issues.
Interesting story, but it just looks aweful.
Shalassaska 7 months ago 38
@Shalassaska You can do better?
M4Nt1sP 7 months ago
@M4Nt1sP That isn't my point. I am not a filmmaker/machinamaist. But that doesn't mean I have to like everything I see. But I know what Kootra or more broadly people in general can make, so I do have a standard of quality.
Shalassaska 7 months ago
voice acting isnt the best. characters are too rigid. and im not sure about the idea of a salarian cult. but this is a good attempt. i just
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Shalassaska 7 months ago
Why do they say SULarian, its SOLarian, god damnit lol
SirRevso 7 months ago
if the animations and the voice acting improve i think it could be interesting down the line
decusq 7 months ago
Seriously, don't care about the little problems, making THIS with ME2 must be torture!
MAXIMUMamac 7 months ago
Jacobs now white!
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luigui003 7 months ago
There are problems with this, admittedly, but it's still a damn good effort.
Fairfieldfencer 7 months ago 35
That's some stiff animations.
HelloChief117 7 months ago 3
ppl is machinima not Bioware so stop ! crying !
Malkion009 7 months ago
the voice acting isnt the greatest but it is the first ep. i guess i can let it slide.
Rumige 7 months ago
@Rumige i thought the voice acting was quality - it was the animations, especially the lip-syncing, that was iffy. Anyway, this machinima is good stuff!
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ARMENIAKB24 7 months ago
a solarian is a solarian is a solarian is a solarian there does that help!!:???!!!??!
RogueCrockett 7 months ago
@RogueCrockett its salarian
MrCole121 7 months ago
@MrCole121 I don't care lol but thanks for the spell check is this better a salarian is a salarian is a salarian is a salarian are we good now?? XD
RogueCrockett 7 months ago
the voice acting in this is worse than Keanu reeves in speed
omnomJAZZPAH 7 months ago
Not bad I guess but not so good either.
phoenixwarrior100 7 months ago
i wonder if they ever think of buying one of those suits for motion capture to make this shit look a little better.
takoon513 7 months ago
@takoon513 You blame the machinima maker for the animations, not the game?
TheKrwlng 7 months ago
lol they don't blink. But it's good. Does anyone know what program is used? The unreal engine or?
Christmasproductions 7 months ago
5:44 what is wrong with his arm?
briaproductions 7 months ago
Nice! Ignore the dislikes they're just butthurt because it's not CoD.
MrHazer94 7 months ago 2
I liked it. Better than most of the other shit Machinima puts up.
CliffDiverBOA 7 months ago
this is complete shit, give me mass effect 3 and we will call it good
JOHNin3D 7 months ago
Animations are horrible. Does Machinima have quality-control?
StarFleetCommand3 7 months ago
1:32 in, about the time the started talking ..... WTF?! awful
kittyballz 7 months ago
i thought this was reprisal
:(
nobodyhardyz619 7 months ago
Was ALRIGHT. Nothing more.
RpgExposition 7 months ago
7:46 scary !
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StramGamingHD 7 months ago
Mass effect sucks
WOOHOJEHA 7 months ago
@WOOHOJEHA
I hate Mass Effect.
AM I COOL NOW GUYS?
TheKrwlng 7 months ago
@WOOHOJEHA Fuck you hater...
acsessive11 7 months ago
@WOOHOJEHA fail
blackbounty80 7 months ago
@WOOHOJEHA Heh, troll fail. :P
RinstarElite 7 months ago
@RinstarElite hehe, I already made somebody else angry so I was successful
WOOHOJEHA 7 months ago
@WOOHOJEHA MMM sure is troll up in here
TheKrwlng 7 months ago
voice acting needs work, wasnt really impressed with any of it, but the voice acting made it hard for me to even enjoy the good parts, not bashing the video or anything, just saying it has alot of room to improve.
snakeeyes119 7 months ago
A light year is the distance light travels in a year, this was used as a joke in the actual episode
GOODBADNAUGHTYWOLF 7 months ago
I love mass effect sooo much but this was stupid
Finalrellik99 7 months ago
SHIT
kietasss 7 months ago
Crap should of been a screenshot of miranda
Alexpro680 7 months ago
Whahat dislikes :/
IFracturedCinema 7 months ago
I thought it was Kootra actually doing a Machinima
TheVitaltundra 7 months ago
@TheVitaltundra So did I :(
I mean, who else does Mass Effect machinimas other than koots?
At least he does them well, ya know?
TheKrwlng 7 months ago
shes got his stick
TheMATA1a 7 months ago
At first I thought it was a return of the kootra machinimas...but I was wrong :(
tisroc100 7 months ago 17
O, I'm so sorey
lastmanon 7 months ago
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lastmanon 7 months ago
I don't see why there are so many dislikes. Albeit this isn't the most fantastic work ever, but it's definitely something different and I enjoyed it. Being someone who has toyed around with the UDK I can appreciate how much work had to have been put into these scenes, even if there were a few animation bugs here and there.
Not to mention the voice acting was absolutely fantastic and the cinematography was very creative. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
TheStormPow 7 months ago
Not too bad. Voice acting needs work of course but it was pretty cool. But one major fail, which i see mentioned in previous comments: I can't believe you guys thought a Lightyear was a measurement of time lol. It's distance; how far light can travel through space in the time of one earth year. (I beleive)
Canadarules99 7 months ago
I think that Roosterteeth could do a better job.
ScubaS00 7 months ago
wtf have they been smoking? their eyes are crazy dude
TheJPR91 7 months ago
2:42 sound messed uo: He sounded louder when he was further away from the camera, and no effect on his voice? Also: It actually sounded better without the voice-effect: The natural voice was louder and clearer, and minor tweaks in voices are more recognisable.
I know I shouldn't criticize the animation because that is really difficult to do with this, but their faces all look like they're almost in a default position.... would be good to actually get deeper looks at facial expression.
kingt34 7 months ago
FAKE AND GAY.
GiaVenturini 7 months ago
@GiaVenturini lke you are
StraitHalo 7 months ago
that was horrible, specially the voice acting
gamevidsproductions 7 months ago
Damn koots, what is this, like your 9th machinima series? If u can please finish this one
logbul 7 months ago
There's a lot of potential but you maybe need to work on the lip-syncing and adding a bit more animation to their facial expressions and body movements, I dunno, they just feel a bit wooden if you know what I mean. I liked the camera-work and the voice acting though. Please make more :)
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baki961 7 months ago
light year is a measure of distance not time ¬¬ like so they can see :)
nerdVmuffin 7 months ago 100
@nerdVmuffin I agree, but havn't you heard "It will take lightyears to get there"?
AwesomePeow 7 months ago
@nerdVmuffin
i'm sure they did that on purpose as a joke.
JeDiSpartaN300 7 months ago
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maybe :) but if not they still get to see right?
nerdVmuffin 7 months ago
@nerdVmuffin
REALLY? People don't know that? God,this makes me feel good about myself,and sorry for the world!!
Th3GoldenGam3r 7 months ago
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you know can be hard to tell if your being sarcastic or sincere, please enlighten me? :)
nerdVmuffin 7 months ago
Interesting idea. Things that you could improve on is the dialogue: it's a Mass Effect machinima, so you need to make the speech sound realistic
The7guys 7 months ago
They look creepy...
MissingMandible 7 months ago
good show, but the starting is a little bit boring... please more action
DaZerberus 7 months ago
Mouth animations need work other than that nice....
yoda56789 7 months ago
People dont seem to understand how tricky is to learn the insides of the Unreal Engine. This is a wonderful job, animations can be a bit clunky, but this requires a lot of job. The story can be improven, but i think this guy deserves a like
*likes*
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kungisans 7 months ago
A good effort. Try try again!
tsujen 7 months ago
KOOTRA? IS THAT YOU!?
TheKrwlng 7 months ago 49
@TheKrwlng nope jordan wasn't in this
FamousYasserX 7 months ago