Honey for any of the critics out there The (ignorant) one's pay them no attention. At least you have the nerve to even try this. I thought it was fine. Don't ever let someone say you can't :)
oh wow your nice, very suportive, asshole. dont be mean to her, like you could do any better, all of you! She has an amazing voice, and is absolutly AMAZING!
Hey this song is awesome, i listened thru the whole song while i read thru your lyrics. u wrote this song yourself? Very smokey voice. it haunts my soul - lyrics and voice. its very very haunting. I like it.
Just a little fine tuning is all you need - the mood you set is perfect, the lyrics haunting and troublesome. I hope you don't actually feel that way!
you got a good vibe girl but you need to tighten it up. get a metronome just for practicing nthough and worck on your consonants vocally. but nice raw tallent and you look ok as well
You put this up cuz the shadows from the blinds were awesome? I love it! :D
I don't think there are near enough girl guitar players, at least not on here. You sound alot like Jewel (that being a compliment, regardles if you like her or not ;) ). Great job, keep it up!
okay your voice is fucking awesome...i really lik the way you sing as well...only thing is you have to make the words hearable...try enunciating you words....by the way cool lyrics, i like!!!
...those guys, givin out them comments here are a bunch o ass whipes. lady you outta try frailin... ''pick strum n pick''... i don't know how it works for the guitar but it sure as hell works for the banjo
The voice is great you turkeys. She doesn't even have a freaking proper mic to hear her voice. Better strumming technique would help out a lot though. Try plucking the strings with your fingers instead of your thumb. Try plucking 3 strings at the same time with your pinkie and middle fingers, and mix that with strumming. Other than that, I think there's a lot of talent here, and I hate singers who scream and strain their voices, which is about 99% of novices. Sultry is the way to go.
You'd probably feel more comfortable singing if your guitar was in tune. It's almost 1/2 tone out of tune. It's very important to be IN, also the tempo. You've got your style, feeling and sweetness, now work on Tempo and Tune and you got it. Stay cool cutie!
I agree with the other comments, everything is there, but you're not committing. You must commit to the song, it sounds like you're self conscious - and people will notice that. Otherwise, awesome.
I don't want to be mean, but other than sitting there and looking at your cute self, not terribly entertaining. I have the same problem with my guitar, it sounds great to me, but looks/sounds like crap on video. And you're mumbling again. You need to just SHOUT for about an hour straight to learn to gut out your songs. Don't be timid. :D
I really like the effort gone into your lyrics. I seemed to have shied away as os late writing long lyrics, maybe I should go back to it. Anyway, yeah it would be nice to a better quality but you got to go with what you got. Hope to hear more in the future.
Thats cool to bad you dont live near me I have a pretty nice studio. I live near Lockport NY, not sure how far away you are from there. Well keep writing and I hope you can get in the studio someday.
I would like to hear what that song would sound like if you recorded it in a studio. It would be nice to get your voice a little louder in the mix. By the way how long does it take you to come up with all those words?
Haha, thanks... unfortunately I don't really have access to a studio, maybe someday.
And the words...I start thinking of random lines over a period of time, and a theme... and then when I finally sit down and write maybe like and hour or so... I added the last stanza on a few weeks later actually.
why, what happened i dont get it???
leomak1974 1 year ago
good job
Alliswelcome91 1 year ago
girl i dont listen you i only watch you, you are sexy
SuperBlueherb 1 year ago
good words, and i like the heart of the song.
jdmarcus59 1 year ago
I dont care if i can understand your lyrics or not bc ur voice is as beutiful as ur appearance, nice work!
bstewy33 1 year ago
Oh sister!
jonnebanan 1 year ago
i don't understand a thing she is trying to sing
BLDMLN1007 2 years ago
c grav bidon !!
LittleDidiHendrix 2 years ago
you look loike my freind lyndsey
chamndu 2 years ago
Honey for any of the critics out there The (ignorant) one's pay them no attention. At least you have the nerve to even try this. I thought it was fine. Don't ever let someone say you can't :)
newfielad47 3 years ago
Keep practicing!
pudley58 3 years ago
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you suck.....
joeychop 3 years ago
oh wow your nice, very suportive, asshole. dont be mean to her, like you could do any better, all of you! She has an amazing voice, and is absolutly AMAZING!
DazzledNessieCullen 3 years ago
You know, you can't get laid over the internet.
Imm0ralMin0rity 3 years ago 4
what?
DazzledNessieCullen 3 years ago
Stop kissing ass.
Imm0ralMin0rity 3 years ago 3
i didn't hear a word you where singing i'm sorry
Suusguitar 3 years ago 2
please shoot the dog!!!! its barking to loud!!!
blkyukon04 3 years ago 2
Hey this song is awesome, i listened thru the whole song while i read thru your lyrics. u wrote this song yourself? Very smokey voice. it haunts my soul - lyrics and voice. its very very haunting. I like it.
maleaddict 3 years ago
The playings alright....but honey you have to sing "words" not "babble."
Poopsie25 3 years ago
I'm playing guitar
koksal41 3 years ago
i think shes singing in french...
queeralert 3 years ago
Fingerpicking, do you speak it motherfucker?
liestol 3 years ago 2
hey u got sum skillz on da guitar. u should give me s tudor sumtime. seriously i need help learnin how 2play da guitar. get back @ me.
Mandella06 3 years ago
lol... Nice try.
mithran0505 3 years ago
u r a beautiful girl
coletrain116 3 years ago 2
süper söylemişsin tebrik ediyor gözlerinden öpüyorum canım benim...
mikerinos123 3 years ago
yeah.....whats she saying????
mudpieinthesky 3 years ago
Tune Your D-string... But nice work
pollebjarke 4 years ago 2
am I the only one who doesn't understand a SINGLE word she's singing, apart from "O, brother" and "o, father"... ?!?!?
Anyways, U're cute ^^
Ochausis 4 years ago
After reading your comment about not being able to understand her..... I just kept laughing... its like sat nite live skit.
mudpieinthesky 3 years ago
I certaintly does not hope she becomes big like this, if she does, I'm gonna start playing the guitar and hit the stages world-wide!
Ochausis 3 years ago
holy mother fuckiing god u r hot as shit.
ps. u got skillz. lol
screwemos135 4 years ago
wat een kutgeluid
DutchKell 4 years ago
What's more sexy than a girl with a guitar :)
dacrowster 4 years ago
Agirl that Skateboards =]
Redheadsrule2406 4 years ago
dam strait..as long as shes hot.
bobknepp20 4 years ago
heyyy very nice song.. upppssss :) I like it.. do you have an album? I want to listen this song everytime lady...
thedoctoronbike 4 years ago
sounds GR8:) nice song !
all the best !
jesse
mpos99 4 years ago
this is hot. did you write it?
jonsan32 4 years ago
cool shadowing very nice sound........
usernamesimpleflame 4 years ago
shadows from the blinds are great. Very refreshing voice, please post more! Where are you?!
Nefertiti375 4 years ago
Just a little fine tuning is all you need - the mood you set is perfect, the lyrics haunting and troublesome. I hope you don't actually feel that way!
Zboots 4 years ago
you got a good vibe girl but you need to tighten it up. get a metronome just for practicing nthough and worck on your consonants vocally. but nice raw tallent and you look ok as well
ooglebydoogleby 4 years ago
bia 124 boah you are an a**h***
AnsemTheDark 4 years ago
You put this up cuz the shadows from the blinds were awesome? I love it! :D
I don't think there are near enough girl guitar players, at least not on here. You sound alot like Jewel (that being a compliment, regardles if you like her or not ;) ). Great job, keep it up!
g4d4j5 4 years ago
Great lighting!
peanarchist 4 years ago
i see you love music its nice you can be better day by day dont leave music and good luck
canguder 4 years ago
sweet jesus! i am in love with you baby
skinnysim 4 years ago
YOU have one more fan in Poland, very nice, give my more
that songs, gorące pozdrowienia z polski jesteś świetna :)
prezes19 4 years ago
va te pennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnndre
pthomas9 4 years ago
NICE, are latin?
theend333 4 years ago
okay your voice is fucking awesome...i really lik the way you sing as well...only thing is you have to make the words hearable...try enunciating you words....by the way cool lyrics, i like!!!
funnyself2 4 years ago
ohjeah... liked the voice, gives a real mellow touch to that song. a little more polishing here and there, but he i don't think i could do it better.
murphykaas 4 years ago
...those guys, givin out them comments here are a bunch o ass whipes. lady you outta try frailin... ''pick strum n pick''... i don't know how it works for the guitar but it sure as hell works for the banjo
murphykaas 4 years ago
your try get a pick tho and speak up your being to shy
dont worrie you will get the hang of it took me a while to
smith844 4 years ago
I'll bet she's a good kisser!
tgpartist 4 years ago
You most definitely shouldn't have posted this. You need practice, lots of practice. I can't understand a frickin word your saying.
StraightUpBitch 4 years ago
The voice is great you turkeys. She doesn't even have a freaking proper mic to hear her voice. Better strumming technique would help out a lot though. Try plucking the strings with your fingers instead of your thumb. Try plucking 3 strings at the same time with your pinkie and middle fingers, and mix that with strumming. Other than that, I think there's a lot of talent here, and I hate singers who scream and strain their voices, which is about 99% of novices. Sultry is the way to go.
nanobooo 4 years ago
That was sooooo good!! ...minus the guitar and singing, that is.
bja214 4 years ago
Your too concerned with looking super cool and sexy, you'd be 100% all that if you concentrated on singing and playing guitar well.
chatregalia 4 years ago
hey if it makes you happy keep it up girl! follow your bliss
dJonesdavies 4 years ago
work on your voice, sounds like you're singing from your throat. otherwise it might be a good song. good attempt i guess.
dbzgtfan4ever 4 years ago
wht was tht i didnt understarnd all i heard was uhhhahhuhuwuhahauhhdahahh. ok u dont sing in a musical but i want to know wht ur sayin!!!
simbakitten 4 years ago
i dont know u play guitar well or not but ur so beutifull
deltacharli100 4 years ago
give it up yer voice sucks
joecobra1234 4 years ago
whoa!
firesaidbybeavis 4 years ago
Just become a model and you can sing your husky songs all you want.
steveconn 4 years ago
hey what's up, u should prolly repost this vid with u playing naked or something bc u r SUPER HOT!!!
lbisthebestband 4 years ago
WILL YOU MARRY ME?
johnnykyr 4 years ago
great song and voice! did you write it yourself? i really like it
southernpride99 4 years ago
ur hot....cant say any thing more im only a beginer in guitar playing so i dont realy now so much but i thought it was good=P
lamx12345 4 years ago
oh dear, you are shite and total fuckin dog too. i wouldnt pump u with my mates cock.
alandodds123 4 years ago
You'd probably feel more comfortable singing if your guitar was in tune. It's almost 1/2 tone out of tune. It's very important to be IN, also the tempo. You've got your style, feeling and sweetness, now work on Tempo and Tune and you got it. Stay cool cutie!
funkjazztic 4 years ago
Open your mouth and sing..and be yourself.not someone else.
azzie65 4 years ago
very sweet. bye
secondclarinet 4 years ago
I agree with the other comments, everything is there, but you're not committing. You must commit to the song, it sounds like you're self conscious - and people will notice that. Otherwise, awesome.
fox220 4 years ago
omg you are hot...
drpepper4413 4 years ago
Perfect!!
Fraliu 5 years ago
You have a nice voice, but you need to articulate a little bit better. It's a wonderful song, though. Keep up the good work =)
arenabrains 5 years ago
nice voice
well, the guitar needs to get tuned:)
anyway.
the look on your face is much better:)
felsberg36 5 years ago
<trina-> and she makes me think of obscure artists and singers
* kultur slowly carasses pd's face and neck.
<rigel> dyz: veru is a void of chatsuck
<yobin> is that analogous to one night stands? -- informally speaking, that is . . .
<pd> I don't know if I like being carassed.
<trina-> thats not nice, rigel
<softcloud> why do i make u think of obscure artists
<dyz> seriously i want to see this girl.
zuckling 5 years ago
<softcloud> really if anyone thinks i look like this girl a bit, its the biggest compliment alive, cause she has the best face i ever saw
<truth> i'm hoping we're not comparing verushka to this girl.
<truth> that would be laughable
<trina-> verushka is hottttt
<pd> dyz, she creates her own hype.
<kultur> Romantic love is my favorite fallacy.
<softcloud> many people feel attack me and find me gross
<yobin> informal fallacies are hot
zuckling 5 years ago
I cant understand what your saying at all
pufferfish87 5 years ago
very nice very nice ure good bravo bravo
morrisonkurtlennon 5 years ago
good looking ! But can't sing and not enough ear to tune a guitar
hildegardvon 5 years ago
nice voix =.
Yes you like Michelle Rodrigez ^^
and you are splendid
shane240 5 years ago
you should be a model or somethin, god your hot
tightvideos 5 years ago
You look like Michelle Rodriguez
Myk44 5 years ago
you seem to have a good voice. : ) you need to be louder though. And i really like the lyric.
holymotherofgod2 5 years ago
I don't want to be mean, but other than sitting there and looking at your cute self, not terribly entertaining. I have the same problem with my guitar, it sounds great to me, but looks/sounds like crap on video. And you're mumbling again. You need to just SHOUT for about an hour straight to learn to gut out your songs. Don't be timid. :D
theMello99 5 years ago
I really like the effort gone into your lyrics. I seemed to have shied away as os late writing long lyrics, maybe I should go back to it. Anyway, yeah it would be nice to a better quality but you got to go with what you got. Hope to hear more in the future.
darthsane 5 years ago
Thats cool to bad you dont live near me I have a pretty nice studio. I live near Lockport NY, not sure how far away you are from there. Well keep writing and I hope you can get in the studio someday.
Markmusicman
markmusicman 5 years ago
I would like to hear what that song would sound like if you recorded it in a studio. It would be nice to get your voice a little louder in the mix. By the way how long does it take you to come up with all those words?
markmusicman 5 years ago
Haha, thanks... unfortunately I don't really have access to a studio, maybe someday.
And the words...I start thinking of random lines over a period of time, and a theme... and then when I finally sit down and write maybe like and hour or so... I added the last stanza on a few weeks later actually.
amcalonder 5 years ago