@headfphones Oh.. Well, in my opion. You should have less character's, so can spend time on details with less character's. Also, don't have children. Make them teenager's, it'll be more interesting to young reader's and probably most young adults. Lastly, don't be cheap on the swear words and probably throw in a few sex scenes or atleast sex related scenes. :)
@39hige1 lol ok. i'll try and start typing tonight or tomorrow! lol i would love to hear something to make it better or just some comments. i read it to my friends and they said it was really good lol
O.o What's this about?..
8OMGWTFBBQXD 1 month ago
@8OMGWTFBBQXD what do u mean?
headfphones 1 month ago
@headfphones I don't understand your meaning for this video...
8OMGWTFBBQXD 1 month ago
@8OMGWTFBBQXD its a video to see if i should write a book on it or not.
headfphones 1 month ago
@headfphones Oh.. Well, in my opion. You should have less character's, so can spend time on details with less character's. Also, don't have children. Make them teenager's, it'll be more interesting to young reader's and probably most young adults. Lastly, don't be cheap on the swear words and probably throw in a few sex scenes or atleast sex related scenes. :)
8OMGWTFBBQXD 1 month ago
@8OMGWTFBBQXD ummm ok but no thanks on tho's ideas. this is how i wanted it and the last 2 ideas r just sick!!!
headfphones 1 month ago
@8OMGWTFBBQXD umm also they r teenager's. most of them. a few r 20
headfphones 1 month ago
@headfphones LOL. How are they sick? And whatever I guess, it's your book.
8OMGWTFBBQXD 1 month ago
@8OMGWTFBBQXD i have already started writing anyway
headfphones 1 month ago
First
39hige1 1 month ago
@39hige1 ??? ok??
headfphones 1 month ago
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39hige1 1 month ago
@headfphones Liked :)
39hige1 1 month ago
@39hige1 thanks :D
headfphones 1 month ago
@headfphones Your welcome, :) And yeah you should make a book about this! It would be awesome. :D
39hige1 1 month ago
@39hige1 Wow really! thnx :) i am writing it alittle. im on chapter 3. i will type it and send it to u as a message if u want
headfphones 1 month ago
@headfphones Ooohh yeah, Yes yes i would love it! Thanks soooo much! :D
39hige1 1 month ago
@39hige1 lol ok. i'll try and start typing tonight or tomorrow! lol i would love to hear something to make it better or just some comments. i read it to my friends and they said it was really good lol
headfphones 1 month ago