Writers block (short film)

[Dundalkmagician1]

Thanks Tom ;)

[TomSPerkins]

But overall i have to say it was really good for first try, keep it up. Remember the hardest thing when making a film is actually coming up with the idea.

Let me know in the future if you want me to watch more of your vids. Happy to help

[TomSPerkins]

Overall not bad i like the idea your trying to get across. Firstly though when trying to convey someones emotion, you should use a few close up shots here and there. Also there was hardly any dialogue in the begininning and loads thereafter, maybe add a voiceover to depict the writer's thought process and worries. I liked when the writer got back home and was stressing over what to do. If you make the editing faster there it will push the idea of stress.

[Dundalkmagician1]

Thanks for all the comments. Really apprecited;)

[charlieslol]

Wow, very well written. Well done to you all. 5 stars easy.

[OxAmesOx]

Woo go James :P Greeaat film..u better get on to daat animation ur making :P HaaHaa this was really good

[ryankdunne]

This has to be the best piece of film making I've ever seen. 5 Stars in every department. Oscar-Bait much ?

[codylewis17]

the filming was done very well and the acting was good too. But it was a little slow.  You got to give people a reason to want to stick around.

Just my opinion...

I did enjoy it though :)