I'm sorry, but it sounds like you're trying way too hard to sound like an opera, but you're not breathing enough. Your vowel sounds were good and everything, but there were times where the notes were cringe-worthy. You need to use more air. I'm guessing you're in choir or something because you do know how you're supposed to sound, you just haven't gotten exactly there yet.
really good:) the only comment i have is about breathing. you need to 'breath more from your solar flexes'. I know thats not really possible because you breath out of your lungs but you need to breath lower in your chest, and hold out the breath. You seem to be running out of breath before the end of the phrase causing you to sharp.
I apologize for the strobe light-esque movement on the ceiling... I liked it.
Nice work, I was wondering how you would sing it solo but you covered everything.
Acharmye 3 months ago
Lovely job!
RegencyBookworm17 1 year ago
Awesomed Job, you sing beautifully
terrrible2 1 year ago
I'm sorry, but it sounds like you're trying way too hard to sound like an opera, but you're not breathing enough. Your vowel sounds were good and everything, but there were times where the notes were cringe-worthy. You need to use more air. I'm guessing you're in choir or something because you do know how you're supposed to sound, you just haven't gotten exactly there yet.
robinbcovers 1 year ago
really good:) the only comment i have is about breathing. you need to 'breath more from your solar flexes'. I know thats not really possible because you breath out of your lungs but you need to breath lower in your chest, and hold out the breath. You seem to be running out of breath before the end of the phrase causing you to sharp.
amandafosterj 1 year ago
@amandafosterj Thank you soo much for the critique!
victoryforthepeeps 1 year ago