If I Died Tomorrow

[CloudingOverFaith]

I didn't cry really. (Shuns self)

[0611marty]

This made me cry.

[kerstinwernermironow]

@0611marty me too....sniffle

[nados444]

that was good have u done any more lately

[lracelleinad11]

Hey can you tell me how to put the words on the screen to make a video? I want to mak eone similar to this, but dont know how..

[jj101505]

Really Touching :)

[joshlozano102]

it's nice ! :) 

[KINGA6226]

like it very much:)

[bboysenior]

bro its really nice the video mean u really love ur friends u care about them love u

[MaeIsARobot]

this is really good(:

you should add more on to it

[jazzy991134]

ahhhhh burned my finger on a toaster really hurts but anyways really sad

[akaworrior67]

whats the name of dis song?

[kruegervouwers]

awesomeeeeeee!!!

[Rinnstwist]

Such a cute poem....

[sunbretthess]

i wonder if she would care... if she would realize how much i miss her! how sorry i am wether this is a bump in the road for us or the end i wonder if she would say goodbye i wonder if she would want to hug me one last time like i strive to hug her.... i wonder if the past would matter if a tear would shed or if she would even care....... regardless of how she feels i still care and i would still do anything for her, even if it would mean that i would die the next day.....

[prettyaislyn]

this poem means somthin in ur life that someppple mite care



[LovelyNefeli]

i still love him...i still miss him...and i hate my self for loving him! he doesn't even care about me...i seriously..think i should commit suicide...maybe then he will start caring about me..no reason why I should continue to suffer in this damn world...i suffer from depression...and all these years..i was sad...until i met him and my life changed...i stopped having suicidal thoughts or trying to hurt my self...but then.. we broke up =[ i can't be happy without him..i'm too weak...i need him...

[Jaybeat2k6]

The poem is beautiful. T_T Can't wait to see more from you.

[ABHansenWriter]

I totally get your explanation. I too write similar poetry, though I love my family to death, and would never wish my own funeral anytime soon.

Love your poem, loved the word choice!! :)

[beejay11021987]

too short but awesome..

can i use this when im planning to end my life?? thanks...

[Darktwist362]

i find this funny how i came across this vid since i wrote a song a while back called would anyone care and thye first line is "if i die today, will anyone care at all". this is cool :)

[Tallykoren]

Great video, thanks for the upload.

[devilzerone]

anyone who knows the title of the song???

[SuperSkaterchick95]

i like it. can i use this poem to tell it to my love?

[FoxDawgNate]

Cause If i died tomorrow would you feel any pain?

Would you put up your fist? And scream out in vain?

[FoxDawgNate]

If i died tomorrow would you even care?

Would you miss the way i smile? Or the smell of my hair?

If i died tomorrow would you really miss me?

Would you miss times we talked? Or every time you kissed me?

If i died tomorrow would you be to blame?

Would you come to the funeral? And hang your head in shame?

If i died tomorrow is there anything you would want to say?

Maybe that you love me? And want me to stay?

[FoxDawgNate]

i have added something to it and well its an awesome poem but i added one little thing, Hope you like

[katherinelight]

it's pretty good =)

[kongsavl]

@MyPoem4u stfu.



[rosalesstevenashjose]

nice touchy poem

[kongsavl]

you suck.

[bj4499]

@kongsavl True.

[TheLiamtomo]

shit

[crisarg13]

kool poem!!!!! hey can u tell me what you think about my poem? just go 2 my channel or type (My Dark Twisted poem) i want to know if i could improve my poem thanks

[TheLollybloom]

whats the song that goes with it? and well done, its a great poem !! <3

[Bieberluver8763]

Cool but the smell of ur hair?!?! But it's not like I could have done any better

[EstherVeence]

this is great !

[MsYouareadopted]

What is the song to this video. Your poem was amazing. But it made me feel so lonely and empty. Must be the truth.

Anyway, what is the track that is playing. I like the song! <3

[dolanz26]

over grabe

[AlanaOkeeffe945]

You Should Hear Mine ;)

[TheScorpionPryncess]

if i died tomorrow my ex wouldnt giv a shit!

[841darkwolf1]

I watched Definition of love-Andrew Landon right before this i feel like idk...crying...

[lexza3sotagurl]

there real questions tht go though my head now i wonder

[Belovenangel]

What song is this?

[Lollypop2196]

That was amazing xx

[mar0kel]

that was beautiful

[bmxintheBLOOD10]

me ex wouldnt care

[magnifly4111997]

This poem was horrendous. You don't have any talent in poems.

[yasmonish]

@magnifly4111997

shut up idi-ot, if you think that she has no talent in poems let me see yours!!!

[pmgintheflesh]

I really liked it...iacually do poetry nd music nd stuff like that myself...nd also ihav a song called "if i died tonorrow" its my latest one on youtube...if u get da chance ill appreciate it if u check it out n tell me what u think...but really i lived this you should keep doing poetry maybe youll get somewhere great with it:)

[haider2662]

gr8 poem... i luved it. u r born to b a writer

[Seebu]

Spellcheck your poem before you post it on a video.

[LaMeS196]

I loved this, it really translated my thoughts into words. I just wanna show this to my ex, and see how she reacts, but I know thats selfish of me :(

[mechie28]

That was wonderfuly great and touching I'll admit I cried a lil:))

[21elia]

The song is by Secondhand Serenade- Awake :/

[21elia]

I love the song. And great poem

[xXFoolOfThousandsXx]

That was extremely gorgeous, I felt like crying my heart out. Great job :)

[1MISTRESSKAJUN]

If you died tomorrow, you would be missed.

God Bless..

[BoozaslashSoaad]

I kinda cried ... this is so touching ... will he ever notice even if i die? )':

[BOTDFobbsessed]

e-e...

Hm,. I guessits okay x-x

[unique134441]

i wanna cry

[frederiqueizzle]

i love this its really good :)

[lheene72]

i miss you.......

[lheene72]

miss you.....

[ifraq26]

I will miSs u a Lot my Ever best Friend........Eleyn Linag....... Thanks......U made me Live Again...

[ifraq26]

Live liKe , that this is ur last day of life . nd one u will right....Thanks....my best Friend eVer i made...........Elevn Linag

[CyndiRodriguez95]

WHAT IS THE SONG CALLD..???

[Swim2him]

@CyndiRodriguez95 Awake

[lovelydeath24]

I love thisss<3

[68candylover]

i have writed 11 poems!!! im proud of each and every one of them :D keep writing!!!!

[chrissybooxoxoxo]

what is this song??

[xXKirstenTheKookieXx]

i love this poem ^.^

[TOMAN4EVER]

I woud miss your beauty, and I don't even know you!

[chedder122]

thats was good, but sadd. :D i like it.

[Desirox98]

your amazing!!! u need to make more vids ^.^

[AJTHEAWSOMEGOTH]

This is beautiful :')

[renakigirl]

sometimes i think the same as u..

many bad days.. :(

[gioloffcool33]

i like this i wrote a poem i miss you about a girl i met in a summer resort

wow funnny i got a book how to publish ,funy i saw romantic poem saw a diner event

was in berkley california ironic is where she is now

does that mean anything this is a touching poem you should be a proffesional.

[cOuntryx3]

:) i love it <3 .. i'm a poet too, but i think you might be better than me :) xo

[luckystar8247]

it was just of 28 secs story but it had said the story which is not been said in those storys which is as longer as hours and hours....

and this story is pretty emotional, people who r hurt by someone should say this emotional words to their love.... i bet if they do have some feelings then they will come back to u....

[stephanieistink]

awesome poem

[SuperNutty23]

lovely

[theankitgrover]

5 star poem !!! made me cry !!

[AshleyMuffin90]

adorable!! :')

[Christiansgal13579]

pruki what is it ur speeking

[oxBestDamnThingxo]

whatss the song>

[DinoGoeswatata]

I just had a loved one go away :[

[pruki]

mganda... kya lng dba dpat "if i die tomorrow"

died kasi past tense....eh bukas k p nga mamamatay....

i

[IanTVtube]

great! 4 stars <3 it

[TheBlackDahliaTwins]

that's cute

[berisha246]

all people wriitn ooh amazing comment it was a tiny bit of writing that any one can write!

about 15-20 lines wow amazing huh... no..

[xxEMOxxRANT0RSxx]

i dedicate this song to austin james.. </3

[smlovegnr]

Cool Poem!

[SARAH0869222700]

im sure one day everything its going to be ok. god cant forgive you.

[phanjonathanm]

@SARAH0869222700 god cant?you just said god cant yes he could...he is very forgiving!

[yknilp]

this poem is not originally made by you?! right?! you just made an edit with it!! because i know this poem..=) words maybe different but still the content is the same!!!!

[psplad2006]

wow this is amazing ur good XD 5-5 * XD

[14aframe]

love is. you are amazing poet

[ohedgehogs123]

im a poet too i think mine r good but u definetly have a gift 4 it ure awesome :)

[MrMills01397]

Ive heard this somewhere else, Im not saying you stole it, Im just saying Ive heard to somewhere else then here...If this is yours then good job <3

[johnnyuss]

@MrMills01397 hey didnt write this poem ...i have read it online and its a kinda a long poem ..this person just took the good part of the poem and make his video ...again he didnt come up with thissssssssssssssss

[MsRapunzal]

This is absolutly amazing! Great job on the video and I love the poem so much!!

[emarkjoelemo16]

the title is wromg grammar

[MZMATH3RS]

your dumber lol u put "wromg"

[piponio13]

I like it. So good and so happy.

[RulzR4]

well done! keep it going!

[ayam1SOMEONE]

very nice

[4evaSakura]

wow thts strange i think the exact same way i even have a peom like tht...and its really great i loved it :)

[macedonian8girl]

omg, this is so good! well done :))

[dolphinhero9000]

This poem equals my thoughts sometimes.

[SaxPlayaJo]

I don't cut myself. To me it seems all you're trying to do is create controversy. If you comment on my video again I'll delete your comment.

[DeidaraFangirl2120]

@SaxPlayaJo Oh this is the sadest i saw this and i cried and cried and cried I wanted to dy I couldnt take the pain from crying but my subject is far off behind this is sad and i came to tears so much i choked on breath This is sad

[nobutada1222]

@SaxPlayaJo you tell 'em ^~^

[841darkwolf1]

@SaxPlayaJo dont let the sterotypes bother u i feel for u though

[TowriteL]

You are so hard headed. Maybe trying being the person who is the one cutting, how they feel.

I know what it feels like and you have no idea what I had to go through to stop.

So shut the fuck up. You don't know anything. You couldn't even try to be understanding about it. If you don't like it, why are you watching it? Do you really have nothing in your life to do but watch things you don't like?

Wow. Get a fucking life bitch!

[zulqarnainrufi]

i pray for you. God Bless you and live long life take care Always.

[jazzy1875]

that was a really wonderful poem. wow! sad thing is i think about that same thing about my own life:( hope to see more poems

[sou90]

sounds like my freaken ex!! he use to call for about 78 times every 3hours or so..he was a creep!

[1337skiller5]

The answer is NO! (Sorry couldn't resist)

[rankovik]

nice1 :)

[PinksHugeFan1]

Aww, that was so sad. I really like that poem! I write too but I'd never have the guts to put mine up! Well done :)

[devilzgirlishere]

i got a poem...idr it its in my phone..i wrote it in my phone when i fell asleep textin my ex.

[xAmbix11]

That was amazing how old r u

[lilmusicqueen]

Awake- secondhand seread3.... i write alot of poems, i never thought of putting one on youtube lolz thanks for sharing :)

[hannahjane211]

That was amazing (:

[1crochfesent2]

loved it oh whats the name of that song?

[XxbarniclesxX]

woo my name's caitlin

haha

[welovemars123456789]

wow that is really good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, its deep you should be a poet

[bobbie2510]

whats the song playing please? x

[XxeatXtheXchildrenxX]

awsome poem man..

[edwardiloveyou1]

omg that was really sad i like it nice

[metrokitty911]

it was a really amazing poem-add me as a friend :)

XOXO, hotmess911

[stephiemunster]

i loved it.

[sbutler666]

he would probly dance on my grave.....

[phanjonathanm]

@sbutler666 O.o

[LucyProductiions]

ily

[13acko13]

cool poem :)

[TeaganBoob]

heyy thats really good (Y)

would you be able too tell me the singer and name of the song ???

thanks XX

[guitarplayinguru]

hmm... =]

[ASHLEYBABIEXX]

EXTREMELY TOUCHING .. GOOD STUFF

[retardedfreak123]

i love the poem

peace and love, violet

[xxSourxPatchxKidsxx]

thats a really good poem, like no joke.

[misslizzy09]

wow i really liked it...u r so good at this...so try to do more. God bless u

[GirlGamer234]

opps i said "if u died" i men't "if i died"

[GirlGamer234]

if u died tomorrow

Will u get every moment to be with me? Never talk to me and walk past me without looking?

Will you kiss me one last time?

[xxMaxyxxMassacrexx]

I really like it

[SooetMiichiii]

what 's the singer? :)

[XxLizaayXx]

Heyy Thats Relli Gwdd.

[Andy1Daniela1willy]

u suld extend it more like into a song ur good like a pro

[misscutielizette]

OMG U WER REALLY GOOD IT ROCKS

[zulliew]

If i die tomorow..wud u regret for not making out wit me for the last time...??

[phanjonathanm]

@zulliew ....

[cheekysaphia]

If i died tomorrow would you visit my grave? would you act like you care? or laugh at the of me down under ground?

[vetsgogreen]

Jordan! This is so good! :)

[ImAqT1995]

I LOVEit i felt like this today.... but every1 does every now and then

[emmagirl567]

i tottaly understand...we allhave bad days....nd we just have to write or do something to let the feelings out somehow

[Marqz90]

If i died tomorrow would you even know?

How would u feel and where would u go? If i died tomorrow how will u act and what will u say? who would u follow and what will you pray? If i died tomorrow with my unbearable love, would you send me to hell or to the heavens above?

[SaxPlayaJo]

That's a really awesome finish. :)

[Marqz90]

haha thnx it just came to my head naturally at that time

[ImAqT1995]

Thats realllllllllly good poem your good at it

[phanjonathanm]

@Marqz90 that is so awsome...and nice poem..

[eatsyourheartout]

The song is awake secondhand serenade x

[KMICchannel]

its amazing but wats the song called again

[myspeciallover]

you peom was awesome

[shexibiotch]

i love ur poem =]

[PresheyLove]

its kinda short but still good. good job =)