Songwriting Tips 1: Lyrics

[MrLandlubba]

It is not a good idea. Nobody should listen to this absolute douche. I also happen to know that he sells drugs to babies

[NuttyBass]

That's actually a really good idea. Thanks for the advice.

[somerandomassguy]

Lol put your better rhyme last, then your worse rhyme first.... hmmm why not just write 2 good lines in the first place?

[unplugged182]

@somerandomassguy they can both be good, but one will always be better than the other

[reblcheese]

You should not be allowed to give people songwriting advice, as you cannot write songs. However, while watching this steaming pile of toss I came up with some lyrics you may want to use in your next song:

"She was looking for ture love,

But he just wanted touch.

I post videos on Youtube

Cos I don't get out much."

[bajcar]

who are theese sad people asking you for songwriter tips?

people, NEVER settle with a bad rhyme, you can say the same thing a million ways. read a dictionary

[ickomusic]

thanks, again!

[fckinhawt01]

nice

[lizziedizzzie]

thanks

[livelikeyoulike]

I relly like your tips, but i only see one video of yours with tips, do you have any more?

[mrmoonbat]

thank you for a good tip young man

[SPEEDofSERVICE]

NIce! cool of you to share.

[freshasalwayz]

thanks it does help a lot.. i was writing my first song today in study hall.. look foward to more of thesse. dan

[BillyBughead]

Yeah, but what rhymes with "huh huh huh pant pant pant pant gasp gasp gasp" ?

Oh, that's right: You are my son.

*grin*

[trickofdisaster2]

haha, still the only one alive who likes that song

[jmanw480]

sweet rhyming tips, thanks for sharing!