I really like it, some of the effects are well done. However, the poem chosen is way too small to carry a movie this long. It leaves the viewer hanging at certain times, as far as the reading goes. But no complaints about the video/camera work - very, very well done :)
Poetry is awesome I received it on text message some time back in Pakistan and when we got an assignment to make a short film based on a poem this one was the first which came to my mind. But it was too short so I had to add a couple of verses. I really enjoyed writing the script and executing it into a film with my brilliant team. I think its quite near to the original idea.
Very impressive! Loved the poetry (thanks for the subtitles, I needed them!)....
Also the music was very fitting to the atmosphere...and I liked the way it kept changing from colour to black and white to emphasise the memories and the present, that was a nice touch and also very clever...Good work! X
Awesome..
sambitahmed 1 year ago
I really like it, some of the effects are well done. However, the poem chosen is way too small to carry a movie this long. It leaves the viewer hanging at certain times, as far as the reading goes. But no complaints about the video/camera work - very, very well done :)
burneymh 2 years ago
Awesome !
Keeping the fact in mind that its ur first ever effort plus a zero budget film its really awesome :)
Well shot n well narrated !
AijNav 2 years ago
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AijNav 2 years ago
Wonderful video and poem
Thanx for your great response
Love:))
Draccun 2 years ago
Poetry is awesome I received it on text message some time back in Pakistan and when we got an assignment to make a short film based on a poem this one was the first which came to my mind. But it was too short so I had to add a couple of verses. I really enjoyed writing the script and executing it into a film with my brilliant team. I think its quite near to the original idea.
PS: It is a zero budget film except taxi fare :)
NaveedAasim 2 years ago
Very impressive! Loved the poetry (thanks for the subtitles, I needed them!)....
Also the music was very fitting to the atmosphere...and I liked the way it kept changing from colour to black and white to emphasise the memories and the present, that was a nice touch and also very clever...Good work! X
TheMuzzyUK 2 years ago
@TheMuzzyUK
Thanks so much for your kind words.
Best regards,
NaveedAasim 2 years ago
great poetry
sugimura135 2 years ago