Definitely a 5! Deep lyrics, great guitar and vocal, like the ´beat also. For some reason it reminds me once more of prince, thou sometimes you sound like neil young! Best wishes,
thanks Barbette i know the beats are a little ruff at times these are only draft versions i have all masters to come back to soft spots. i can hear some in this song also. this is a sad song. There are some volume issues on some of the vocals. this could be a real great song i have the video already in my mind. But i am focusing on music right now i will get to videos latter. thanks for your feed back i follow your advice. and tips about drum beats and stuff i back off the drum volume on this
i want to redo the lyrics now that i am getting more comfortable with the lyrics. Its a sad song but its life. Thanks for your compliments. I will seek to do a video depicting the images of the lyrics
Definitely a 5! Deep lyrics, great guitar and vocal, like the ´beat also. For some reason it reminds me once more of prince, thou sometimes you sound like neil young! Best wishes,
Barbette
barbettemroe 2 years ago
thanks Barbette i know the beats are a little ruff at times these are only draft versions i have all masters to come back to soft spots. i can hear some in this song also. this is a sad song. There are some volume issues on some of the vocals. this could be a real great song i have the video already in my mind. But i am focusing on music right now i will get to videos latter. thanks for your feed back i follow your advice. and tips about drum beats and stuff i back off the drum volume on this
wolfgang8u 2 years ago
A vague feeling of sadness crept over me.
its great that you can make stories or lyrics.
because I can't have no idea about words of songs.
so I sing songs in random words, peace*****
oiooioo000 2 years ago
i was very deaply saddend writing the song since im the broken arrow
wolfgang8u 2 years ago
really, really great song. your lyrics paint a very vivid picture, and the music compliments them perfectly.
BacksideGorilla 2 years ago
i want to redo the lyrics now that i am getting more comfortable with the lyrics. Its a sad song but its life. Thanks for your compliments. I will seek to do a video depicting the images of the lyrics
wolfgang8u 2 years ago