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  • 1.(: i loved it! as always.. :p the rated r scene was perfect..

    some people go a little too detailed.. xD

    2.follow carly! ...if he knows where it is she's going.. ._.

  • WHERE ARE YOU ?! I NEED THE NEXT ONE ASAP :""( PLEASE .

  • @sweetgirl141000 sorry I've been going through a lot of stuff lately :/ I'll get on it soon!!!

  • Plz post the next one really soon!!!! I loved that one!

  • HOLLYYYYYYYYFRIKINCRAP. amazingg. hooottt! :)

  • wow this is getting intense i need to know who has her mother lol

  • i loved it chels!your amazing at writing haha ♥

  • @mrsjenniferJONAS1 aw thanks girly!!! :D haha

  • Love it, can't wait till the next one :D

  • Carly is so brave. Chels, I honestly think your such a talented writer.

    This episode was awesomee. :D

  • @dcshoecousa101 awwww thank you Katie!! <3

  • Carly is some brave girl...

    At least she told Daniel the truth and Daniel should go after her, I mean he saw the ticket, didnt he?

  • She is such a brave girl. I love this! He has to go after her....I just hope she doesn't die....

  • Awww Carly is so brave to leave her cell fone cause I don't even go to the bathroom without mine. lmbo

    1.) Loved it! I love all of your stories!

    2.) I hope he will go after her... he read the ticket so.... lol

  • umm from a kidnapped mother to sex ahhahaha

  • :OOOOOOOOOOOO DAYYUUMMMM CHELSEA

    1. THAT WAS AN AMAZING EPISODE; lol "oh dammnnnnnn" xD

    2. Uhh uhhhhhh find carly! but I can't believe she left! D;

  • She left! damn...do you realize you put Daniel in more danger Carly, you should of taken him with you :/ Love it though haha.

  • Leaving right after, never the smartest thing to do :( but loved this ;D

  • i loved it!!!

    1 i dnt know but im exaited to know!

  • CARLY!

    I want a hard-core Niley sex scene.....xD

  • luved it

  • omggggg D: loved it so much!!

  • loved it :)

  • Really!!! LOVE!!!! This!!!

    Cant wait for the next one :D

  • I can't believe she actually went, ALONE.

    i Liked this one;D

  • my lordddddddddddddddd CARLY!!! O M G! WHY YOU DID THAT?!

    Ps. you are ana mazing wirter!!

  • @StephyChannel :o thank you!!!

  • @NileyVariety94 I JUST LOVE THE WAY U WRITE :))) and your RATED scenes ;)

  • @StephyChannel lol thank you!!!!! ;D

  • 1. I've been missing your writing Chels and this was amazing as usual. I really enjoyed this part not because of the rated r scene but because Carly finally told Daniel and Darly/Niley is just so darn cute. Too bad Carly left without Daniel helping her.

    2. Idk, but he will probably go after her

    Amazing!!!

    Loved it!!!

    Can't wait till the next one :)

  • @xxiluvnileynjoejxx aww thanks; things have just been so busy, aghhh; the next parts will be filled with dramaaaa :o

    and thank you!!!! <3

  • i LOVED it

  • i've missed this so much<3 love it,

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