1. I've been missing your writing Chels and this was amazing as usual. I really enjoyed this part not because of the rated r scene but because Carly finally told Daniel and Darly/Niley is just so darn cute. Too bad Carly left without Daniel helping her.
1.(: i loved it! as always.. :p the rated r scene was perfect..
some people go a little too detailed.. xD
2.follow carly! ...if he knows where it is she's going.. ._.
smil3ychey 1 month ago
WHERE ARE YOU ?! I NEED THE NEXT ONE ASAP :""( PLEASE .
sweetgirl141000 9 months ago
@sweetgirl141000 sorry I've been going through a lot of stuff lately :/ I'll get on it soon!!!
NileyVariety94 8 months ago
Plz post the next one really soon!!!! I loved that one!
MusicNTwilightLover 9 months ago
HOLLYYYYYYYYFRIKINCRAP. amazingg. hooottt! :)
ImForeverYoungx 9 months ago
wow this is getting intense i need to know who has her mother lol
CorinaVanessa 10 months ago
i loved it chels!your amazing at writing haha ♥
mrsjenniferJONAS1 10 months ago
@mrsjenniferJONAS1 aw thanks girly!!! :D haha
NileyVariety94 10 months ago
Love it, can't wait till the next one :D
ilovekhmerteehee 10 months ago
Carly is so brave. Chels, I honestly think your such a talented writer.
This episode was awesomee. :D
dcshoecousa101 10 months ago
@dcshoecousa101 awwww thank you Katie!! <3
NileyVariety94 10 months ago
Carly is some brave girl...
At least she told Daniel the truth and Daniel should go after her, I mean he saw the ticket, didnt he?
Madihah667966backup2 10 months ago
She is such a brave girl. I love this! He has to go after her....I just hope she doesn't die....
xNileyxBubblesx 10 months ago
Awww Carly is so brave to leave her cell fone cause I don't even go to the bathroom without mine. lmbo
1.) Loved it! I love all of your stories!
2.) I hope he will go after her... he read the ticket so.... lol
EMJBackup 10 months ago
umm from a kidnapped mother to sex ahhahaha
aubrei401127 10 months ago
:OOOOOOOOOOOO DAYYUUMMMM CHELSEA
1. THAT WAS AN AMAZING EPISODE; lol "oh dammnnnnnn" xD
2. Uhh uhhhhhh find carly! but I can't believe she left! D;
JellyBeaneez 10 months ago
She left! damn...do you realize you put Daniel in more danger Carly, you should of taken him with you :/ Love it though haha.
XxLogeJonasxX 10 months ago
Leaving right after, never the smartest thing to do :( but loved this ;D
KiTTyKrAzY013 10 months ago
i loved it!!!
1 i dnt know but im exaited to know!
mindy5279 10 months ago
CARLY!
I want a hard-core Niley sex scene.....xD
beforeifallx 10 months ago
luved it
takeerah13 10 months ago
omggggg D: loved it so much!!
lenebraes 10 months ago
loved it :)
LALover94 10 months ago
Really!!! LOVE!!!! This!!!
Cant wait for the next one :D
TheMsBrandy1 10 months ago
I can't believe she actually went, ALONE.
i Liked this one;D
ylc7 10 months ago
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1. Awe poor Daniel!! But they are so cute!!
2. Hopefully will save her if she needed to!!
It's amazing! I loved it! I can't wait for the next one! Thx!
shahilover3 10 months ago
my lordddddddddddddddd CARLY!!! O M G! WHY YOU DID THAT?!
Ps. you are ana mazing wirter!!
StephyChannel 10 months ago
@StephyChannel :o thank you!!!
NileyVariety94 10 months ago
@NileyVariety94 I JUST LOVE THE WAY U WRITE :))) and your RATED scenes ;)
StephyChannel 10 months ago
@StephyChannel lol thank you!!!!! ;D
NileyVariety94 10 months ago
1. I've been missing your writing Chels and this was amazing as usual. I really enjoyed this part not because of the rated r scene but because Carly finally told Daniel and Darly/Niley is just so darn cute. Too bad Carly left without Daniel helping her.
2. Idk, but he will probably go after her
Amazing!!!
Loved it!!!
Can't wait till the next one :)
xxiluvnileynjoejxx 10 months ago
@xxiluvnileynjoejxx aww thanks; things have just been so busy, aghhh; the next parts will be filled with dramaaaa :o
and thank you!!!! <3
NileyVariety94 10 months ago
i LOVED it
zoeygirl11 10 months ago
i've missed this so much<3 love it,
112emmydoo 10 months ago