Thanks for the update! It's nice to hear what's going on.
Two comments that I hope are helpful:
If this video is about progress, then why are all the people standing still and talking at the camera? The video, to me, felt a bit stiff.
Second, your invitation at the end was unclear. If you want alum to get engaged, then tell us how. If you want us to just donate money, then tell us to do that.
Thanks for the update! It's nice to hear what's going on.
Two comments that I hope are helpful:
If this video is about progress, then why are all the people standing still and talking at the camera? The video, to me, felt a bit stiff.
Second, your invitation at the end was unclear. If you want alum to get engaged, then tell us how. If you want us to just donate money, then tell us to do that.
ryanjriehl 1 year ago
Way to go UMBC
tuberpm 1 year ago