In The End... *Chapter 16*

[forevgirl117]

im still in the middle of it but i have to say:

OMJ! OMJ! OMJ! OMJ! OMJ! OMJ! OMJ!

[xXGiveMusicLifeXx]

aww i just got so sad =[

[jonaslovers456]

Wow! Omj!

[TheRealHeather]

Wow. That was good. Rachel got mad. I wanna see what happens next.

[hgerlicher]

plaesa have them "do it" haha that sounded kinda sick woops

[djmufasaisoffdachain]

hahahahahahahaha

[YouWish1123]

HOLY COUNTRY STYLE POTATO SALAD!! WOW! LIKE WHOA! WOW!

Ooooooo

Ahhhhhh

Hahahah

She's weird

I know

Heehee! (random and I know!) =D

[djmufasaisoffdachain]

Your Comments always make me laugh!

[YouWish1123]

Haha! I had ice cream for breakfast!!!!!! NOT THE BEST IDEA!!!!!!

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[djmufasaisoffdachain]

lol!

[nickismytwlight]

i did that too did not turn out well i was nuts at school

[jonaspiratelove]

omg omg so absolutely amazing!!!

more soon!

[canadiagrl812]

omg omg omg thats sooooooo good!!!!!

[ANCJ123]

ommgg . omgg. that was soo good pleasee postt again soon.

[boredgirl777]

When r u posting the next one?

[djmufasaisoffdachain]

i wanna c what ppl think?

[boredgirl777]

Well I think ur story is great!

Post soon please. *puppy dog eyes*

LOL!

[NickJonasBabe1316]

intense chapter write the next one and Y did u change the ending of the other chapter???

[djmufasaisoffdachain]

cause i really didnt want them to have sex!

[dazzler3]

that was really intense i loved it i cant wait for the next chapter

[MrsNickJonas0207]

wait...why did you change the ending to the other chapter?

[crazylittlerockstar]

i know wasn't it so good?

[djmufasaisoffdachain]

I know but I didnt want them to have sex!

[crazylittlerockstar]

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