I agree with BlipMasta, nice lyrics just work on your flow. This would really go live with a much better flow. Try again and repost, I'll keep listening. Next time feel your music more, tell the story like u have every person in the world attention and u want them to feel you through your art. U MUST SELL THEM INTO your WORLD!!!
Lyrically real...yet the flow of them could've been better. If this really was all freestyled, I can look past that easily. It's not easy to flow extremely well while making a completely coherent song with a constant theme. So nice job, just work on your flow a little bit. Freestyling is a part of the art that I'm still trying to master. So KEEP IT UP! Threes!
did u make this beat?? if u did would it be okay if I did a remix to this and like give u creds for the beat?
eman5195 4 months ago
I agree with BlipMasta, nice lyrics just work on your flow. This would really go live with a much better flow. Try again and repost, I'll keep listening. Next time feel your music more, tell the story like u have every person in the world attention and u want them to feel you through your art. U MUST SELL THEM INTO your WORLD!!!
I know you will do better... I'm waiting!!! ;oD
cyntubez 5 months ago
Lyrically real...yet the flow of them could've been better. If this really was all freestyled, I can look past that easily. It's not easy to flow extremely well while making a completely coherent song with a constant theme. So nice job, just work on your flow a little bit. Freestyling is a part of the art that I'm still trying to master. So KEEP IT UP! Threes!
BlipMasta5 5 months ago
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angelicakillmade 5 months ago
i like it, i make beats hmu
DAHRealTrump 5 months ago
This is nice mayn, nice feel it to it:) Subbed, check a track of mine if you have time! Peace!
channelle74 5 months ago