My humble analysis to improve this wonderful work: Audio and voice are superb. I feel that camera movements and shot composition, framing and blocking need to be improved. Even though short DOF is desirable, here is too short, and fails to proper focus on time. Finally, edition needs to improve timing, to have a tick to follow.
I think it gets the point across. I won't change it. The wide shot are missing substance. So keep it as is and move on. Why is it so long? 30 sec for TV?
this guys voice scared the shit out of me...volume was cranked up haha
jrummer221 1 year ago
My humble analysis to improve this wonderful work: Audio and voice are superb. I feel that camera movements and shot composition, framing and blocking need to be improved. Even though short DOF is desirable, here is too short, and fails to proper focus on time. Finally, edition needs to improve timing, to have a tick to follow.
debroyfilms 1 year ago
There is no right way to color correct, depends on what feel you want. This is very good.
Tekedon 2 years ago
I think it gets the point across. I won't change it. The wide shot are missing substance. So keep it as is and move on. Why is it so long? 30 sec for TV?
ThingsThatVexMe 2 years ago
too many close ups on the faces of the actors
silverstaralchemist 3 years ago
Interesting, you definitely found the right guy to do the voice over. The only thing is I wouldn't keep going back to those wide shots.
BreakthroughFilms 3 years ago
how do you know they didn't want it to be reddish.
andrewjsilke 3 years ago
It's a decent try...but nothing special
Langfordc 3 years ago
Well shot! Needs color correction though... (less red for starters)
Pixelman101 3 years ago 2