I run you over with my car or worse, I'll flatten you/
Like an iron board this is the war you wish you never endorsed.
Your timing's off. Your 1st bar should end with worse(unlessU intended to lag your bars..then its okay). U should add more internals too. You've got a few here or there (board & war for example..slant rhymes), but most of yours are basic. I give you props though...at least your not doing that garbage
how dare u rap on big l and jay z beat smfh
mr4ston 1 year ago
YOU FUCKING SUCK LOL......
diminic187inc 1 year ago
nigga wack for real.
ether150 2 years ago
LMFAO!!!!!!
jlskura 2 years ago
You need to
I run you over with my car or worse, I'll flatten you/
Like an iron board this is the war you wish you never endorsed.
Your timing's off. Your 1st bar should end with worse(unlessU intended to lag your bars..then its okay). U should add more internals too. You've got a few here or there (board & war for example..slant rhymes), but most of yours are basic. I give you props though...at least your not doing that garbage
with my iron board, this
soundsfromnothing 2 years ago
(cont.) Sorry my 1st comment didn't come out right.
I meant to say that you need to work on your rhymes (1st line)
My last comment was "at least your not doing that garbage 4 bar raps that modern rappers use."
Anyway, keep at it bro. You've got some good metaphors in there too.
soundsfromnothing 2 years ago
when is your album going to be released?
wtf - shitty quality is this... lol man just record your rap, wear earphones for the instrumental and use som frikkin shareware to mix ist together.
spezzlk 3 years ago
GET RID OF THEM CHRIS!!! lol thats one fucked up pic of shawn
wtfitzjimmyz 3 years ago
boiled eggs arent hard.
THAT IS FALSE INFORMATION!
khaosgate 3 years ago
NO!!!! ur wrong !!!!! lol
bigoverpac666 3 years ago