interactive sci-fi movie, IP: scene 1-2

[AmauryPenseur]

Hahahahahahahaha

[NavDrood]

Good Luck.

The 1337 King shall return.

[Spotu2day]

keep the tension...awesome job!!canon hv20 think they r shooting with..

[isnanesavant]

i think each scene deals with diffrent characters right?1 is with dean,2 is with chiren...

[Speedifist]

"Chiren, there are no ghosts in the garden!GOSH!"

[Aluvie]

i propose they all have an orgy. kick booty, nice filming.

[sadie71]

I can't wait to see the next one!!! This is the most mind-trippen, excellently done movie! You guys should be in Hollywood! MUCH better than the stuff out today. A kick ass breath of fresh air. Cool effects, too! Hurry up with the next!

[harpsnloris]

Totally Agree !!!

[sussaman]

That was fucking awesome !!!

[managiorgou]

well, i loved it! i would gladly pay to see the movie. great job

[orionblacksapostasy]

The quality is really good for a low budget film.

[qwertdfsf]

BORING !!!!

And that nudity shit is so cliche

That Tania Derveaux has fuck and sex in her head all the time

[orionblacksapostasy]

Hey, why don't you go and start making videos for I can go post comments on each one telling you how much your work sucks.

[JUKIO01]

hey got one more question, what kind of camerca did you use?? or did you use some special prgram to amek the video legitament.

[veeganboy]

I found this on IP mainsite . Thought it might help. "We are a group of only 5 people and we are making IP with a consumer HDV camcorder and our own computers for visual effects."

[JUKIO01]

i always want to make my own sci fi movie, like the ones always on the sci fi channel. anyone have any clue like the average amount of money that they use to make it??

[warcraftTedzz]

kinda cheezy

[Olio89]

You should really make Furious wear the hat, it just ain't the same.

[Sunguardcz]

You really have actor talent...

[virginiabarros]

she's falling in love for him

[Unttitled]

The women looksat the tv and suddenly says some strange phrase. Then the guy inthe glasses has someting like a dream thats shows

That he is not who he seems. Then the Crazy guy suddenly tries to kill the chick with a cleaver.

[Scix]

...Autistic guy sees/hears things, and gradually we come to believe they are real in some way. mute girl reacts in fear or yearning to some object or sign that gives a clue as to where they should look for her identity. Perhaps a hospital or institution? Or a school, even.

[Scix]

Let's see ... keep the "nothing works" motif, I really like it. What it means remains to be seen. I'd like the girl to remain mute, at least for now, and the two guys must solve her mystery. We should get them out of the house, and the whole city is dead-empty and silent.

[BBZZZZZ]

Then u need to get the girl to do some weird sounds ghost-like sounds and then the bearded man wakes up in that same bedroom but the other guy is missing

[Hawke301]

Can the Autisic guy hear the voices in the background? You could have him respond to them, and the bearded guy would likely dismiss it as part of the disorder.

So many possibilities. Keep the tension building though, you seem to be off to a good start.

[ESEfilms]

300 POSTER!!!

[bufforddragonborn]

The grays beam in and ass probe the wigged out chick. Mr bearded freak is mind fucked and ends up as much a vegtable as the other idiot in the scene. For gods sakes get a job. This is obviously NOT your calling. Speilberg your not.

[SgtHydra]

Everyone dies in scene 3.

[pqboi]

a man eats eggs for 5 minutes and then sleeps.

[GeniusAspie]

Great Start... you've got me interested! That's step one... keep up the good work! Make is somewhat still believable and you'll have a huge audience. And if you need an actress...here I am lol!!

[timecap321]

John Lennon appears and sings a song, the girl looks over and asks him to sing a little louder. The gimp runs over, grabs Johns guitar and plays his own rendition of get back! get back!

[michelpougnou]

Chuck Norris appears and kill the hero.

[nazgulius]

omg....

[NeccoWecco]

They notice an awkward silence in the room, they turn to the girl, her eyes are rolled to the back of her head (close up) it appears to be worms brrowing through the under surface of her eyes. the younger boy screams, but nothing is heard... it is silent, as if they have gone deaf. they hear a click, it is the tv, the noise returns, but it is the static of the tv, it grows louder, and voices can be heard crying in terror from the tv

[NeccoWecco]

(to add to it) the channel changes. a man, in a bizarre setting appears, wearing a full suit, a strange facial hair, and large, round glasses. His eyes are pale and opaque, his skin is grotesque with strange lumps and rases, discoloration. he begins to speak to them, but only certain parts of his senteces echo through the room. "(not thought of yet)" in a myraid of tones and pitches, it flickers, and it is silent again.

[TheLifeWeLiveEh]

adding on to what yoshis egg said.

he eventually finds the aut. guy and the black haired guy on the street and the two (duplicate) woman look at each other start screaming crying.

the girl wakes up in her normal life...

[Hawke301]

The voices in the bg audio track come up a little more and the guy carrying the dialogue turns back & hangs up the phone. When the phone clicks down, the voices stop, and the roomate (Chirin?) drops the clothes, and the girl is gone. Maybe the phone rings & he hears the voices that were in the bg audio track through the phone? When Dreamer #1 said "Hello" he locked eyes with her & he was screwed. How does this guy answer the phone?

[gpeddino]

That was scary. You guys are doing great, keep it up. I have no consistent ideas to share, but I'll definitely keep an eye on this project. Congrats.

[alexisnum1]

The static on the Tv appears to become more agitated an louder. then rising out of the white noise comes a deep, eerie voice calling the girls name. THe woman is intensly frightened, and pushes herself agsinst the wall, covering her eyes, a childish attempt at trying to hide herself.

curly hairunplugs the tv, and it stops.

autisitc guy mumbles (seemingly to himself) "...ghosts". Just as the tension is at a maximum, suddenly, there is a knock at the front door...

[twisted709]

she was abducted by aliens!

[YoshiEggs]

Hmm...Maybe she would just zone out of everything and take a look what's happening inside her mind. For the blonde guy, he finds her and brings her in, but has no way to contact anyone so he leaves her at the house and starts to run around looking for people. His neighborhood is deserted though, no one and home just him and the girl.

[wolfdragon1972]

The autistic guy drops the clothes he is carrying for the girl. Revealing a knife he is holding runs accross the room to stab her. She doesn't scream. The Brother Jumps in the way. He gets stabbed, dies dead. The autistic guy looks up to the girl. But she is not there. The Autistic guy looks down at his chest and notices blood soaking the shirt. Looking to the floor for the body. there is nothing but blood. He stabbed himself. ;)

[energetic82]

thats the handsomest autistic dude ever

[saglek]

Great idea and, this episode, well done!

Hmmmmm... what to do, what to do?

No TV reception. No phone. Radio? Internet?

Made the decision to seek authorities... go with instinct. Bundle autistic brother and girl in car and head for department - large city or small makes a difference. Neighbours also affected, greatly or minimally, but we don't know how long the problem has manifested.

End result: trio downtown and encounter blonde with his avatar.

[cenarsystems]

Change & Experience

[Tanru2000]

Firstly, what did the autistic guy say twice at the end?

Secondly... the girl shouldn't be able to understand or speak English - will add to the confusion and won't reveal too much too quickly - cause she won't have to explain herself.

[Ultraliskojebca]

Dead. I think he said dead. But I'm polish, so... :/

[madtsunami]

you heard it right, as far as I know

[gotopkyou]

i can not speapk english

我就问你懂不，不要答非所问，我可不想鄙视你们！

[peterb1968]

Crap

[mokook]

needs more hair pie

[stubs13]

Harpie23, you're a lion freak

[jackmacninja]

The austitic boy trys to kill the girl because he knowa what she is, the glasses dude stops him she kills glasses dude and he wakes up in a surreal prison type place

[davea0511]

I don't know what happens next, but I do know that you ought to reshoot that scene where he looks out the window and zooms up on the roofline. She was totally out of focus. I know it's supposed to be amateur, but that didn't even meet amateurish standards.

[user2047]

Boring

[iesruler]

I think that the autistic guy should be a tranalator or interpreter for the weird woman. The second dreamer should somehow help the first dreamer. He met this woman in the past and as a consequence he appeared in the shattered world. The second dreamer with the help of the woman and his autistic buddy will somehow discover what actually happened and reveal the misterous connection between those two dreamers...or they'll just simply do some gangbang:)

[brathewatergame]

cool. you got cool imagination! i applause.

[gdsgstar]

ok the woman is left alone with the autistic kid for a min. the kid looks the woman in the eye and goes to that weird place where he meets the other guy who ended up there too. cuz of his autism he has become powerful in that place.

[demoniac88]

very cool idea, really well displayed too. i think the first guy in the dream should get call by the guy who had the dream and when the original guy comes in he takes one look at the woman and....does something weird, i leave that part to you ;p

[marlonswin]

Also if your working on video try this: When you finish shooting a scene go back and shoot it again with just close ups of the actors. i would do this multiple times because it would give the actors (who probably don't have alot of expirience) a chance to add some nuance to thier performances.

[gotopkyou]

中文， 有知道的吗 ？

[gotopkyou]

中文

[marlonswin]

Sorry, your browser did not translate.

[gotopkyou]

what's the meaning of your said?

[marlonswin]

This is very clever and well put together. I think you should put a shock in the next scene. Have one of the characters do something really unexpected and disturbing. Blood or fire. Then follow that with an establishing scene to try to explain more about the "rules" of the world the story is taking place in.

[golge54]

I think it needs some reviewing to actualy work out where it came from and where it is going, a little weird for my taste.

[Plasternik]

this will get you nowhere... a story should be developed with a chute in mind. Otherwise whatever you do will just be random at eventually become boring.

Sorry.

[Adudi14]

I hope my English is good enaugh....I like this idea,it`s great....so my idea for the next szene is,the authistic boy fall down and move his eyes,he begins to speak in an unknown language and after he had a symbol tattoo on his arm....it`s only the first sign we swill see in this film.

I hope you like it.

[Athiskemon]

I had a dream of something like this when I was in elementary where the sun begins to expand and swallow the earth. I and my classmates just embraced each other knowing that the end is near; everything is shaking & becoming so hot.

[SilverSerpent1]

Graet idea, it never occurred to me someone could do something like this. Very interesting...not sure where this will go, i don't have any ideas yet, but whatever happens, this should be good.

[electrorocket]

They stole the autistic gut from cube for this moviw, and made him more annoyiiing and unconvincing.

[too2easy13]

An excellent idea! It can go in so many directions...The key lies within the woman or the brother with autism....

[eppingkid]

I think it needs some reviewing to actualy work out where it came from and where it is going, a little weird for my taste.

[rtuwn]

needs a good edit. pacing problems.

[oreenx519x]

After Guy 1(messy hair & glasses)gets the clothes from Guy 2(abnormal roommate)he gives it to the girl. As soon as he touches her he wakes up again, this time even older. He then goes about his morning routine and sees the girl again, he then touches her and again wakes up even older now. This repeats until he is at his dying age. After all these waking up and such he dies. And as soon as he dies he wakes up and this whole psychological situation again starts to repeat in a never ending cycle.

[too2easy13]

That's good...it's almost as if he were insome type of hell r limbo after death..maybe stuck between here and the afterlife...hmmm...

[brathewatergame]

cool! you got the best pessimist imagination ever! it's a pity they wont adopt your idea. kuz the film is rubbish and you gave it some style!

[BillionNames]

hehe not that bad but the only good actor is the guy whit glasses and it looks to much a mix of the ring and the grudge.

[katuky]

wo..

[todd7416]

when the man leaves the room, the hand breaks out the tv screen. the woman leaves through the tv and no one knows where she went except for the autistic guy.

[brathewatergame]

no, obviously she cannot leave like this without havin caused some damage. at least a mark on somebody's skin or kill the autistic boy... hum... no... how to kill her interpreter?? well... just suck his blood for a while... or somethin else... i mean suck... kuz i think the whole thing sucks...

[fluffy912]

the girl ends up being a murderer who kills you in your dreams, and the guy in the tv is her assistant, i have no clue to hardto think of anything

[bitchyitchyoioioi]

hellz yes! its not too hard to scare me, but its working. and im diggin the whole no outside interaction thing. that its just the woman and the man, or men. no phones. no tv. zombies? pleeeez- i do so love my zombies.

[Elflovag]

Surprisingly awesome.

[eezach]

Parts of this movie remind me of the movie "The Ring".

[cenarsystems]

Change & Experience

[ARandomTeen]

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't think of anything to make this movie. :(

[BILLER1967]

nice job, keep it coming I'll be watching

[katre9139]

I can't wait to see what happens next. I think this will be a movie I will really enjoy!

I want to see what happened to the blonde man in the beginning. I noticed there was a hand in the tv. Does that mean that she can transport people from their dreams into the tv by locking eyes with them? And, where are they being kept? Or are they being held prisoner in another universe that only that one man can see in the tv?

I am very excited to see what happens next!

Thanks for posting.

[brathewatergame]

cool! your ideas are the most sophisticated. cool! parallel world prisons rulezz!!!)))

[katre9139]

Thanks. Just my imagination at work. I'm glad someone likes them.

[brathewatergame]

welcome) get wha u deserve;D cheers!

[rhondaperry04]

Either the audio track is off or it is intended, but it's hard to understand when the scene and the audio don't match.

[Lacroix1988]

Very cool

[svrubackii]

check out Wastelands prt 1and 2

[loflyh]

Is this a nightmare or dream? Is it past tense or tommorw's scream? Sci-Fi or Drama, keep the post mortuary trauma. Flip the script, time to debate, what do like, what do you hate. Collectin' souls, nah, not hardly - wrecking minds, don't discard it.

[joscator]

Mantiene la atención del espectador, que espera descubrir la trama en cualquier momento, creo que es lo necesario para mantener una atmósfera de inquietud e intriga. Tema ínquietante muy bién desarrollado.

[Flanole]

Okay I'm hooked. Is this woman collecting people? Where did the first guy go? Acting is professional. Camera work is excellent; angles, ls, close-ups, etc. Hand in TV spooky.

Is this a ghost story or some other dimension?

Fascinating.

[JudyWasAPunk]

Awesome! Do we find out what happened to the other guy? 

That hand in the television was scary as hell!

[FirePrincess6473]

Yeah!!! You're right!

[joelrav]

cool, loved it. it's weird. I can feel the tense feeling in a few parts which I love!

[sandyblonde1]

You can keep it a mystery, but at one point you will loose your audience. Can be good to link at least 2 scenes with each other, so the audience can try to solve the puzzle. Keeps them on their toes and in interest. Give a little bit of clue, but not too much. Who is the evil one and who is the hero? Would be nice to continue with the above earth scene from the start. What made the noise? Can be still quite a mystery but gives a location on which the audience can "build" their imagination.

[rota222]

funy  goood :)

[GoaBerzerk]

confusing and weird, yes(in the good way!) i love it! more...i need more! moooooore!

[ivorybow]

This is great! I really want to know what's coming next. Nice touch with the hand in the TV screen, and the fact that he doesn't notice that his roomie has lost it. Get the feeling this is a nighmare from someone else and he is in it?

[livingstones]

I loved the hand in the television, i think that if all the characters are presented you should have them do something

[IPmovie]

Thanks for your great responses thus far guys, keep them coming! We're working on the new scene as we speak and it'll be online very soon!

Tania

[cinemastah]

i loved the quentin tarantino movie posters in the background

oh and the nightmare b4 christmas and scarface ones

but theres not enough dialogue (especially in the beginning...its like 3 minutes of nothing and its boring) and the whole thing is sort of confusing and weird (in the bad way).

[h8u]

I think you should show more of what goes on in the girls head. and have it end up being that the things she perceives are what become. sorta like a hallucinating prophet. or something like that, Awesome facial hare by the way.

[mofoker]

you have to add a guy in a chewbacca suit or just hairy that observes the other characters you know and etc.

[functioner2]

im callin the police

[princessguenivere]

uh?

[dead82]

so when you gonna show more scene?