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  • fresh to death i be/ lyrically/my lyrics flow/like anomaly/in that, i be so ahead of my time /that, the streets don't understand my rhymes/and the, english proffesors considered it a crime/ the way i utilise the English language..i compile lyrics as easy as most compile a sandwich/im so amazing even shakespeare fears me/@hyperion to a satyr was when god gave him a vision of 21st century...lil wayne in contrast to yours truly

    i can only quote Shakespeare in a rap on a Lupe instrumental :)

  • you spittin' elementary rhyme like u mentally behind, a shot of juice goes a long way clearing my mind, so much problems and issues I can't cope with it, tryna make it out the hood but it's hopeless see, they tellin' me everything's fine long as hov did it, but how i can rap about the money when i live in poverty, yo I got more to speak, I'm tryna turn my life around like a metamorphosis, white folks work in big ass offices while young blacks bleed from they orfices, this is life, course it is

  • first of all, I would say it's all about Jesus/

    you can follow him with dress shoes, I prefer my adidas/

    suits and ties are not necessary, if you ever wondered brah/

    you dont gotta put up a front, just you come as you are/

    you dont need to have your life together/

    but we have the glue to hold you, Christ the center/

  • @ServantOfJesus we dont want control, we dont want your money/

    we are not ned flanders, we are not dummies/

    we dont live in dungeons, we are not judging/

    there are times..that we dont smile/

    we have tough days too, and we do cry/

    we're not perfect, we all need forgiveness/

    christians mess up too that's why they need Jesus/

  • @ServantOfJesus we're telling you there's hope to hold on to in this broken world/

    we've sung the wrong track of life, no vocal cords/

    we have strayed from our God, the one who has made us/

    we have neglected the Savior, the one who came to save us/

    so when we say you need Jesus, please don't take it wrong/

    we're not saying we're better, we're saying hey cmon/

    there's a love, and it's absolutely endless/

    it's unconditional, it's a sea of forgiveness/

  • @ServantOfJesus you never understood why Christ died on the cross/

    because the price for our sin is our life, that's the cost/

    you gotta understand we are the property of death/

    we are his, unless someone could pay off totally our debt/

    It will cost the blood of God, that's the price tag/

    to set us free from death, thats why Jesus Christ bled/

    with His blood, He signed His name on the dotted line/

    as He died on that cross we were on His mind/

  • @ServantOfJesus and thats why you see us talk about it all the time/

    so we tell about this love like were on the grind/

    see the light, can you see Him shine/

    I was hoping to open your heart with this little rhyme/

  • this a dope ass beat. come check out the ones on my page.

  • i wrote sum nice shit to this but i aint puttin it out on here hit me up for my cd comin soon it's called "hiatus"

  • I always got an E for effort but then an F for fail/ opposite sides of da scale its hard to prevail/ laggin behind the best so i cant rest like im Tails/ catch chaos when i start to spin winds in a gale./ so i can add Ds to the letters in my armory/ so i can dash hopes and drag dollars and hardly be/ a failure anymore and be more so Def/ I follow Jay Dee to be on of the only real left

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  • And they're not bitches, they're my dark dreams/My thoughts are going crazy, no self esteem/I try to keep my head up and sometimes it works, but still i'd like to escape from this cruel word

  • My life is so fuckin miserable but i like to keep it simple/Don't care about the tiny things, care about the bigger/Everyday is a struggle but i ain't gonna lose/I ain't gonna sit there and sing my blues/I see the world going crazy, everything is fucked up/And i hear wiggers singin' bout girls and clubs/While i sit at home with so many troubles/Jay-z had 99, i have hundred

  • Yo I’m the lil kid prayin for a dolla shit, instead I get nada G, fuck it tomorrow will be another day, but why does it matter if you have no one to love or give a fuck about me shit should I end it. Fuck no I got so much on my my mind feelin insanity going crazy wanna destroy my body to feel the pain drip outa me, sleep with tears in my eyes wakin up to the sun fryin me tired of the same thoughts surrounding me its time for a change in reality! Sick of the bullshit and my parents doughting me!

  • @Rudy16L13 r u 4 real kid or is this from the song if u r 4 real remember these rappers u listen have gone throught hardship in there life 2 and they wemt 2 school and lived there life even tho they had all tht stuff on there shoulders but put it aside and became who they r now for example lil wayne i have a felling u like him he got 2 were he is now by putting aside the hatred he has read up on him i have a felling u like him

  • @xForgeHouse yo some 1 spam those last messages my brother was on here messn with my stuff i apoligize

  • It all leads back to the capitalist structure

    What is it do besides cause a rupture?

    A rupture in thought, a rupture in the world/

    A rupture in what you bigots call a third world/

    These people have rights on what they wanna be/

    Why should I take it away for my gucci

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  • 2)God is a doctor to live long and prosper. I think he'd be a therapist, just someone to talk to. But youve got one who you say is good at listening Droppin in from the sun and then grinding on yo visions. Now a Godless man who is blinded by religion. A flawless plan gone nightmare fiction. I respect a man who makes his own decisions but quit bein selfish and do it for the children. That was for Tyler, the creator for warping the minds of the ignorant

  • 1)Hey dude, gues what! I just joined a wolf gang. The Creator was so coool that when he sang he was lyrically schooled but when he was spraying... Wait im confused the big words hurt my brain. Regardless im enlightened after all of this insanity. See, Tyler blood drips on my white tee Cause my sharpness only catches literality. You say darkness will make my mommy proud of me? I have an odd future that will soon devour me. I hop on the neutral band wagon that empowers me.

  • They say , fate, is what you need to follow. It's just, I'm feeling out of place, like a penguin that has yet to waddle. Everyday, I feel alone. And every now and then, i can hear my phone. Alerting me, that someone really cares. But it's just another forward, as it declares. That i need to pass it on, to ten people. And if i don't, the result is, i become evil. But then again, wouldn't it make it better? I want to say goodbye, but don't got the balls to write the letter. -MichaelD-

  • @MichaelDBeats This is dope, i think this first verse should be your closing verse. What do you think? Its more powerful last. It hits a deeper emotional level, which is always good to end with.

  • Damn as much as I want to rap over this beat, Lupe killed it. I just can't due to the respect I have for him!! Hope he keeps his work up and revive Hiphop :]

  • I love it!!!!

  • id hate to get physical wit you but this is a critical issue. i wanna fuck but you want me to nut into tissue. so i guess im leaving then. looking for a girl to plant my seed with in. and beat while she proceeds to bend. im loving it. c'mon girl join my covenant and mmmm mmmm good on my mcmeat lick and suck the shit. you prolly think im up a bit. your right bitch im high but fuvk it reside near my fucking dick.

  • Early morning smiles If i ask polite will you stay for awhile? I got such a thing for you, Its like to long and i fein for you/ Those late nights under stars Soft hands rubbin my scars/ You were never ashamed of me and who i am/ And who i am is the right man, only if you werent so blinded/ Yea your mind is clouded/ How your day go? Bet them others dont even ask about it/ But before i unbutton your bra/ We can share a milkshake through the same straw/ So dont be hesitant, sorry this aint relevant

  • very nice...I was thinking of doing my own version but he did it so much justice. I felt like I should leave it be....check my music let me know what u think, and sub if you will....thanks....Matters of the heart 1st album I ever did

  • Thank you for this amazing beat! will do a full song with this...May post lyrics later

  • Even if I rhyme tight I get a second look cause I shine white/that aint the opposite of left people never do the opposite of theft/Robbing from Mary Jane to old man bob see we can get a gun way faster then we can get a job/tears fall as people follow ignoring the mind makes your soul hollow, just turn your back pop a pill and swallow/Whirlwind twirls microphone hurls towards auto tone but underground stills makes shit go boom/So respect never reject new ideas verses makes noise like onomatopoeia

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  • i would write a rap to this but i just cant.. the original song was not killed but rejoyced by Lupe Fiasco...

  • Every Time I look in the mirror and see my face

    It reminds me of a place that I can't erase

    A spot where people happy they ain't worried about race

    And everybody smiles even up in last place

    A perfect world is far away but we on are way

    So don't forget to pray please almost everyday

    Say it in your mind or say it out loud would you

    and don't forgot god always proud of ya.

  • Yea, its going down, right here. Attention, Now listen,

    listen to the words of the greatest, no, not these famous

    men, ambitious as they come, sell out

    they become slaves to the operation,

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  • wtf?

    

  • Hope this girl dont leave me, she heard me flow, Her name Era hair was golden, strolled by and learned me slow, Wouldnt rush myself or let em push me to the shelf, Without a album that was felt.. id rather go stealth, Illmatic, reasonable doubt nurtured a young man through his frist bout of health, & became a fuckin champ, well.. Aquired me the belt, nothin but heart required, A desire to aspire to be, somethin else, Beyond top tier, Im gone like a pop flee a moms with a baby to rear..
  • hurt my soul but ya could never hurt my spirit, we cover hours of meditation within minutes, surfing on the contrast, still do it with no contract, haters who hated now trying contact, but we ignore em put the finger up f*ck that, cuz we deserve better than that, nahmean? and if you ridin with me put your deuces up and scream.....[hurt me soul, hurt me soul, haters tear at me but ima keep it a whole]

  • Its never recommended that you diss a politician but if voting doesnt help then maybe this will make em listen, I been struggling since an infant just to prove that I was gifted, always treated like Im different cuz my pocket lacked the riches, always thought of as a spic learnin tricks on how to spit, if I learn to rock the crowd then theres no need to hit a lick, call the governor and mayor tell em we refuse to pay em this democracy is constantly provokin us to hate it....Rey (like this) :)

  • @xxReydaRapperxx Damn, that was really good

  • well im thinking way beyond/ it please pass me the chronic /shoes faster than sonic sippin/ the gin and tonic

  • spittin piff with a wish just to make/ it but most of them hatin/ upon my creation/ ill rule this nation/ this music moving just tune into the station/ moving like a moon man for verification/ smoking blunts straight to my face and/ im blazin/ i dont even know why they always complaining /with out dropping tears cause thats when it really starts raining/ and you cant explain it /looking at this planet thinking you gonna vomit/ sick to you stomach /thinking about some dumb shit/

  • / to slow you roll/ cause its a long road/ not eveythings gold you got to keep your head up when times get cold/ when haters keep growning in your life like mold/ and you still broke when your products all sold /..... this is a light year /this is me right here/ smoking chronic, drinking beers looking at lifes fears/ im so dam stressed out this is the call/ out i give it my best now/ in hopes im going to ball out/ i need a vacation/ on a beach smoking spliffs with Jamaicans/

  • we all had dreams yeah to find a way to fly away from heaven/ to stay forever young party nights started at eleven/ filling my dubie ashtray up like Devin/ can i get a lighter for my dubie sir/ im out this world like a nebula/ i pass reefer gas totally tubular/ this weed right here i think i call nuclear extra terrestrial kush tree buds that grow with my vegetables/ everything we touch turns into magic its so incredible/ life is a bitch trying to stay invincible/ 22 years old and lifes been told

  • Life is dangerous like Stray needles on the streets, Slaves didn't work hard in the heat, so you can go diss other people on a beat, Claim you religous but refuse to stay faithful, brother killing brothers like Kane and Able, Theirs only one throne at the end of table, let that be gods, Dont be a sequel, lets all be equal, Ima stay strong and keep reading my prequals, Take from the elder because their past was lethal, The people

  • boom head to the roof, my alarmclock knows no mercy

    screamin get up get up in its own simple language

    my eyelids weigh tons, the result of goin' to bed earlier

    i force myself firmly to step outta bed the hair all curly

    the system on standbymode it navigates me to the bathroom

    grope my way inside the shower switch to cold to gain new power

    dreams i had pass by, release my inner flowers and let them fade

    when i remember my bills unpayed

  • They say todays the present - but im focused - on what 2maro brings - they say that life's a bitch - but heres a weddin' ring - im gonna dedicate myself to life and livin' - and focus on the better things - they say that God is good - so im lookin' forward - to what his Heavens bring - im tired of livin' in this hell - im tired of all the drama - all the gossip - all the bickerin' - all the players actin' like theyre gentlemen - im tired of it all - im thinkin' that im feelin' sick...

  • I execute the absolute greatest altititude of actin true, to me to you to, to all who free fall from time to time on the occasion, my lyrics hit the spot these other cats just grazzin, im fine grapes and wine your prunes your raisin, im high as hell who cant tell when the L fill the room with that funky smell, wellll i guess its time to stop rollin tops with top knotch crops i topple flat out spread out on a bitches bed ready get head passed out while i fuck her in my dreams thas what im bout

  • I downloaded this beat... RIPPED it... and mixed it ...in a matter of an hour... yee l0l

  • ima 17 year old child, puffin on a black and mild, getting wild, all the while, with a smile, 314 is what you dial, dick be longer than the nile, freestyle stretch farther than a mile, got a fat cash pile. cops got me on file, now i gotta go to trial, my mom is in denial, now im ridin for a while, crusing indbergh boulevard, music louder than jouliard, you know i be super hard, you can call it super stared, spittin fire all you niggas gettin charred, and watch out bitch cuz im still at large.

  • Spent my whole life chasin the cool, for me to find out that dude was a fool, a liar, a cheapsake, a crook, a fuckin tool, but i learned one thing from that man, that to be real you must a stand, for a cause bigger than yourself, oh so grand, because im destined for bigger things than passing out grams, at the bandstand get as high as the ceiling fan, orbital functions got me lifted, my grandmother always said her baby was gifted, but nobody could ever understand how im twisted.
  • hhuuuurrrtttttt mmeeeee ssssoooouuuuuullllll ooouuuuuulllllll

  • Cont.

    and ill be waiting for the day that i can see that sunshine/ but as for now all i can do is sit back and wait while i see the destruction that all the humans create/nobody seems to understand the feelings i have towards others/ people are commonly ignorant as they kill one another/

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    all i can say is keep yourself closest to you than your friends/ cause at the end all you will ever really have is yourself/ people hurt each other in more ways that i can even tell/ and it feels like we are all living a sample of hell/ I pray to heaven to send us just the littlest light/ so we can have a bit of faith as we are living to die/so as we find our destinations let us march through these lies/

  • im tryin to do good for my health,im doing good,i do it for myself ,noone else,im tryin to stack this money up,so i got some wealth,i remember growin up an gettin tha belt,i remember,every pain that was felt,an all these dues, that ive done delt,good thing i got you baby girl you make my heart melt,you can go an eat my heart out cause it all yours,i love how we jus play on tha floor all these cute looks you give me i jus adore

  • yo its a cold world but ill rhyme while im in it/ though it feels like the mic's getting heavier by the minute/ still i chew on syllables when you hear me spittin words/ but its hard to greet the booth with a half written verse/ plus writers block is got my pen sitting pensive/ and i dont freestyle so my style gets expensive/ yo but money aint exactly what this tracks about/ cuz i aint really got the kinda money i could brag about

  • @cherg101 You will never be Called by a rap music manager, I just hate it when people say their raps on youtube, it's embarrasing as hell

  • the auto-tune and mindless ramblings /of a wanna be gangster about

    money, cars and gambling/, talkin bout handlin/ a 44

    I can’t relate it’s all random and/ if Handel and Mozart could hear the blabberins/

    of Lil wayne, Rick Ross, Minaj and em,/ Only real rappers Lupe and Charles Hamilton,

  • i bob my head n take a grip of my microphone/an i intialize the flow soon as the light is on/the mic's my mouth ,always keep the mic rite here/ come closer an u can listen to my bright ideas/come correct sorry wrong answer try again/ im by my lonesome harmonizing with some violins/cold blooded rythms almost make shiver/ the beat hurts me soul but the liquor hurts the liver/n i cant hear my thoughts over the shot while in bed/ just tryna use light bulb thats on top of my head

  • is there an instrumental for the song instrumental?

  • livin in da hood bein misunderstood caught stealin at the supermarket know they follow me at the local target drink everday although im underage dont have me on your hands wen i explode GRENADE fuckk niggas an they help cuz itz too fuckin late itz in my dna HEREDITY TRAIT icant stop, never will i think about before every pill i swallow , the effects of the consequences however it dont stop my sequences daily routine u cant intervine never gonna stop FUCK ALL COPS ipod dont judge unless u god
  • Got It its La The Dark Man i dnt kno the name but it goes liek "i rock differnt color forces cherry and mango differnt color whip collection it look likea rainbow"

  • this instrumental sounds like a really firmilair instrumental slowed down

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  • I did my own version to this instrumental called Poetry for Tought. May you please listen, rate , and give feedback. I would appreciate it, thank you.

    This is the link: watch?v=ezmCUep3d7I (after youtube.com)

  • Im realizing we aint nothing wtihout truth an lies i used to disguise my feelings inside but now hide from tha...fake reality tryna capture me actually i came prepared to see where this bullshit has to lead...hey im jus a old soul trapped inside this youthful body often i be livin lively other times im sittin quietly...gathering my thoughts tryna pick a righteuous path split in half good an bad full of cries full of laughs..if i dont make it least i was true might not forget me but i wont 4get U

  • This beat hurts me soul everytime I hear it/few tell the truth, the gov't fears this/ messages they send out is blinding/makes it hard when driving, my car when I stear it/ignorance promoted, they keep constantly reminding/pay them no mind, they won't stop us finding/the truth, this is my pursuit, of a life that's better than the 1 I've known/hard, when there's no 1 to support u, & when ur all alone/so keep a positive attitude, keep going strong/And keep ur head up, like Pac said in that song

  • @iluvutube420 see i feel u but someone is watching non-stopping, hes never passing a sin like john stockton, elite government moves his eyes locked in dropped in on the earths residents out walking, keeping commandments wit our flesh demanding, our souls to sin against the Father foolishness rebellion, free, still oppressed slaverys still in the relevance free in the physical form but mentally rejected, cuffs chains inner cells of locked brains imprisonment with our lusts lies & present shame

  • @7isObedience Yeah the bullshit's monumental/the light's eclipsed, it's not that simple/there's more, being held confidential/Racism being treated, as if it never existed, it isn't coincidental/Naive believe it's gone, it's not just continental/racist globalization, so many tears, it causes dehydration/ it's sucks life out of Earth, turning into an abandoned wasteland/I look 2 change this, with my words, hopefully they spark inspiration, spark a transformation that will make Earth, a safe haven

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  • En lo más bonito del mundo, un cartel, no tocar, no son celos, es recelo a dejar mi lugar, a otro toy, que se va enamorar, porque ya yo lo estoy, y no puedo evitar el querer proteger el sabor del placer, el tener la pasión, con una sola mujer. Que les den, yo sé cosas que ellos nunca sabrán, mis ojos ven el deseo que ellos nunca tendrán. Y en tus ojos veo la pura realidad, estar contigo es aprender la verdad. Cada día menos malo, Santa tiene piedad, seguir contigo el mejor regalo cada navidad.
  • gaining knowledge out of college,to make a postive deposit, wasnt talking bout my wallet, see alot of kids feed, but mentally they starving,and emotionally they guarded, cause they never seen they fathers, cause father was not around, staring at they shoes as if problems where on ground, or looking at backs wishing things would turn around, heard some drug talk to stupid to turn them down, now a kid with a bike is pedalling cross the town, hurts my soul how the lost or never found

  • thanks for the links bro:)

  • When I was young / Mama said I could be anything I wanted inside/ Still aint a superstar/ Starting to think Mama lied/ Still broken as fuck/ No mansion/ No new ride/ How could be famous?/ Shit I aint even signed/ this shit starting to really erk my mind/ another free show in a shit hole/ Game face on/ homie its showtime/ Same bar/ same faces/ Same rhymes/ Is fame really out there?/ Will you ever find me/ This is youtube right?/ Maybe one of you viewers can sign me!

  • you could steal all my lyrics bite every word i still be flipping verbs

    Im still really disturbed i feel like God is taking a piss on the world

    thats exactly wat i wanna do thas wat i ought 2 do thats what im off 2 do

    sixteen year olGirl, I aint got a clue i was coming on 2 u n how ya moma knew?

    what i gotta do 2 tell u im srry just relax take off your shoes

    I'm about rapping gospel good news mixed with good tunes

    I like fruit loops in da morning, n i like older women wit a litt more boob juice

  • in a, visual sense/ lyrical sentence indented/ relentless, fighting all my life but thee attempts get/brush to the side like sum hair in her eyes/ contemplating all the time/ though i often wonder why/ sittin here alone in my room, so i zone, write some tunes, time to flow, sumthin new, / feelin cold, feelin blu, feelin old, not attuned/ and what am i to do, but to enjoy the view/ kick it for a minute in this gimmick tht we call life/ until the games over and we hopin tht the scores nice/

  • Underneath these layers is a lyrical player/They dont give me a chance,I say see you later/So before I can waver this underated cater/Of two sons,two daughters,and a wife that keeps her prayers/To herself,no help needed/We just waitin for the right season/Too leave theese treason behind,from maryland to wheaton/I try to stay true while theese otha niggas cheatin/Promises they be keepin is like selfishness next to reason/So ive been beaten/To score a big chance to be record dealin...

    ---V-Bay

  • and by the way many people such as myself cant afford the equipment to record/so dont come at me when id rather express myself than be mentally poor//

  • this dont even hurt my soul when i lay down my lyrics/ if a brother steals this well...they must really feel it so only shows how good i am/ so feel free,lady liberty sends her regards as to who ever bites this rhyme but know that my talent will be with you in spirit/ yea / theres a flare up bein' stirred up while your mothers in the room callin the police over here/ theres gunnners and a street full of runners with eyes full of fear//

  • 9th wonder & Lupe would make a historical mixtape or album together,.. Ill bet my life on it!

  • this is the shit

  • youtube.com/user/EMCEEHRAS

    yo yo chek out my traks guys, young artist from west aus rompn shit

    pceeeeeeeee

  • bravo....really nice instrumental!

  • what a world we live in today, it certainly isn't easy/ everytime I turn on the TV the government tries to deceive me/ a war fighting for peace faces of the hungry and needy/ poor is to the humble what rich is to the greedy/ teenagers bumming the summers no work and we living easy while the adults in my family are struggling trying to feed me/ no morals in the world while younger girls are acting sleezy/ these young minds are getting influenced by their own TV's//

  • @dylrio24 real shit man. good stuff

  • @dylrio24 right on man

  • lupes deep music

  • i wish they had more instrumentals for this album esp. the cool, that's my favorite track on the album....

  • Light your candles or spark your lighters/ I'm star-studded like the night sky/ like you left-brained you ain't in your right mind/ I'm a loose cannon with tight rhymes/ but I type mines out and can still get the crowd moving like a hype man/ aite fam lets get the cypher going with some good kush, mic's and clear thoughts/ take aim no spared shots/ scalp, nose, ears lost/ blood, sweat, tears drop/ spark blunts, get high, then spark another 'fore it wears off/ eyes blood-shot/ no mask gloves off

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  • @d0zi7 I won't lie, I usually hate all these typed freestyles but that was actually pretty dope.

  • yes it hurts but what can i do, the only thing that help is if i finish school, they say education is the key, Education important but what about my dream, i listen and i see that the economy anit get easier, we neva study instead we watch t.v, report card come we happy to see that c or d, I pass that class that teacher anit never seeing me, on the inside im hurt i wanted that a or b, its justi dont got no one pushing, everything gon soon come back to me, it hurts but im moving on, lifes a bitch

  • -My neighbors watchin -These haters knockin -Dem boys is clockin -The streets is talkin -My son need diapers -His dads a lifer (And I got no pace to go) -I pawned my TV -Why'd you leave me -Mami feed me -They always tease me -No one believes me (And it hurts me soul)
  • ...... I got 2 different hooks for the other 16 but decided not to post it... I hope ya'll feel my posted hook... Lupe killed this song but I decided to speak about what I seen or personally experienced growing up in the hood...real talk...full song coming soon

  • every since i was pulled from the womb/ my presents has been fillin the room

    when they cut the umbilical/ i became an individual /someone tht the ppl could listen to / even tho i cldnt introduces myself/ i had thoughts tht determined my identity/ put em together like an assembly line/ from my family i didnt require to much time/ stand on my own 2 and learned to straighten up my spine/my heart beat with a rythm/ so thts y i rhyme/ and the lord said to me "son u will be jus fine"

  • now i kno im not tha onli feelin thiz beat/i cnt help but 2 bob my head nd tap my feet/sit bak relax nd let da wordz cum out/im spitin nasty lyricz lik foodz flyin outta my mouth/im so hot nd cold i got red fingers nd blu toes/im so high up i kno i dnt go low/haterz stay away frm lik i got sum type ov sikness/but im used 2 itd cuz im tha sikest /i cum up wit tha most heard rhyme itdz lik tha mic spit/i hope sum1 readz thiz nd sayz they lik itd

  • i remeba when tymes iz bad living life fuc''d up make it worse no dad so i buried my thoughts through my pen and a pad// my mom dukez try ta make it on her own itz sad'ns me// evrry time think bakk on it strirrs da badd in me//but i try fought da darkness to get a grab of me cuz lifes full ov fuc ups in catotrophies// ppl day erry thtz why i light dewbie get high every day// cuz you aint promised to see da skky every day//thtz why when i wake up i thank god fa da day//J-M

  • I say soulfully im hurt, cause im so full of the hurt, a nigga tryna find his worth, an put tha shit to work/ even my ideas of success is caught up in this recession, but im good cause wakin up this mornin was a blessin, treatin ur ears like a priest cause these rhymes to u im confessin/ over this fiasco, but its not a failure cause im collectin everytime I pass go, an this a passionate flow, cause my passion is to flow givin u knowledge to grow, an secure men shouldnt never have to say no homo!

  • let em go let her go, the thoughts and memories/

    her sweet sweet voice like thoughtfull melodies/

    her summer hot body, lips a gentle breeze/

    when im all tensed up her hands put me at ease/

    its to dam bad she was just my summer squeeze/

    i wanna relive the moments that started the end of spring/

    it was to fast to realize what was happening/

    i fell in love on july the 14th

    it hurt my soul, cuz, first of all

    this is no feeling in which i have control an she said come find me in the snow

  • i wanna date this beat

  • Not drinking liquor; no I don't drink wine, Find it kind of carzy it's a waste of time, Huntsville Al that's where I'm coming from, Use to be kind of bad; but not like it really was, Soul you have helped me, Helped me to a realization point that may seem godly, So I don't need a hater watching, Coming to a point like golly, Boxing out these haters like Muhammad Ali, Now do you see what my point is, Your contious can help; if you really listen, Rhyme is done; so ima go like this.
  • @GeeseMan4real I meant to put : find it kind of crazy it's a waste of time

  • Crack

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  • Casual, straight musical instrumental kickin in my ear

    MMM that sound is beautiful when i hear

    Hear the sound of the symphonies and read the rhymes and play the melodies

    These niggas spit it out, Yall bellow me know what I'm talkin about,

    Keep doin it, Spit till your mouth is dry, or till your fingers are sore

    Just know you are hardcore in every form you spit

    As long as you keep it real, and legit

    Remember who you are and keep it true

    You neva know some niggas might look up to you... aha yeeeah

  • @NotoriousBIG1997 real koo shit bro

  • @coke2nsw  just showin a little love to the people who leave rhymes on Instrumental videos

  • Sometimes it's hard to tell if you even have a soul

    You feel empty inside, just like a black hole

    Mr. Oz, having a heart is my only goal

    Cuz right now I feel dark inside like coal

    I want to know how it feels to have felt

    Some people say feeling love makes you melt

    I can't no emotional blows that were dealt

    Hurting my soul would be a hole in one's belt

  • Needlz produced this one he's always on point with those smooth strings! DAM!

  • weather we like or not, everything around us will change/now for the better or the worse, to that i cannot acclaim/i feel inside i got flames, ready to burn the scene up/bring ya team up, we dont give a fuck about a mean mug/never in my life have i been tryin to be a mean thug/i was always tryin to be the one that people dreamed of/catch me on the screen what? ridin in the bmw/only cause i poured my heart out into what i love/now i aint like a tupac, or biggie, imittator/

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  • Hood dreams but im neva makin it out filt wit pain i think da weed takin it out no water da poor aint escapin da drought while da rich sit n conversate on dey couch raised lower class n proverty da school system deprivin me true souljas of life probly feelin me i was kicked out of school becuz i lowered there likeability dat was just 2 real 2 me da hatred was instilled in me when i was an infant i seen niggas burn like insents i neva knew wAt it meant
  • use my pen 2 jot down my deepest thoughts take wat da hood gave me f wat da preacher taught i was always myself f wat my teacher thaught been there so much got my own custome seat in court but that aint nothin 2 joke around wit da same pistol 2 my head dat i terrirized da town went yes i know a run da town wild certified as a bad child im Live Off eXperience u can ask styles he bout 2 trigga pull i just took my last smile blawh
  • check out my freestyle to this beat..

    /watch?v=WogMxjFumKA

  • check out my freestyle to this beat..

    /watch?v=WogMxjFumKA

  • Mahogany -no surprise its not a prize to be -a plague like the bubonic be

    it hurt me soul but honestly -im proud but broken down

    now when i speak out its taken as comedy my emotions get ejected

    like Vomiting - disrespected silently oh the irony

    how things neva change except the weather whether or not it shines

    i make it all for the better -findin purpose in every endeavor

    tho it hurt me soul -i gotta find ways to be ahead n clever doin it

    so my crown is always tight fitted n neva loose wit it

  • Mahogany -no surprise its not a prize to be -a plague like the bubonic be

    it hurt me soul but honestly -im proud but broken down

    now when i speak out its taken as comedy my emotions get ejected

    like Vomiting - disrespected silently oh the irony

    how things neva change except the weather whether or not it shines

    i make it all for the better - finding purpose in every endeavor

    tho it hurt me soul -i gotta find ways to be ahead n clever doin it

    so my crown is always tight fitted n neva loose wit

  • wheres de link

  • @mychael25Jr Underneath the video click the arrows

  • Instant Classic

  • PT.1 umma start by lettin yall know that im speakin from the heart, like, yo wat i do to deserve this? is it cuz i didnt visit my grandmotha in the hospital cuz i was to nervous, and instead i said my peace at the funeral service?, or is it cuz i aint neva did that whole sunday church shiiiit, can i please have an answere, there has to be a purpose, cuz i really luv her, but hate her at the same time, i loved her mother personality all the same, but i hate the drug mentality that she later on
  • PT.2 obtained, i know she cant help it, its all up in her brain, but i want my mother back, i just wish aint nothin change, i wish i could rewind time, too wen i was 8, i luv them old days, i hope yall can relate, wen u would come home from school, mom in the crib just waitin for ur arrival, but not anymore, now im just prayin for her survival, prayin for the day that she'll wake up from the drug induced coma, prayin for the day she'll come back home, so i can remeber wat its like to holda
  • that example isnt the ebst but its all about having two rhymes in one.. people often start wtih a ryhme in a sentence then the end on the sentence they rhyme with the first word (nas does this all the time). but rap is easy its all about flow... plus fast rhymes like this " my pops wanted to name me Cane but like billy zane shania twain lil wanye im jus a lil vein" try that shit. this rap shit is easy

  • @20775046 I know but i didnt say i needed instructions i meant what i needed to work on and thats not my best rap there at all i think

  • yo shawdow step rappings pretty easy... u first think of ur topic (or u jus go witha flow) then u make ur main rhyme for a bar and ALWAYS have a mini rhyme like this

    "making rhymes is real easy dont let these faggets hate, saying shit all the time materialize from wat u imaginate, they make themsleves feel fine so they jot down some lines, that are mainly lies they all seem so fake, i can bet they wake and bake, calling honeys at clubs baby cakes"

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  • If your gonna hate constructive critisim would be nice.. plzz i really need it

  • Someday i would like to prepare for the day that i became F-Amous Why the rap game aint giving lupe no props instead giving weezy more bills talking about how much money he done earned but lupe is the best rapper alive the court has been ajourned...Someday i would like to reach his height but give much respect to the king i hope he dont go M.I.A because what would rap be without the greatest king no this aint dick ridiing this just recognititon ya dig

  • i cant wait for his lasers album to come out... i wish he got the notice he deserves though.. Lupe Fiasco, you got my favorite song right here

  • @BF2Vas It don't matter man...we know how dope Lupe is...

  • man just listen we da real jews we da hebrews fuck it history ahshow da proof so u think ima let them tell me wat to do dey must think ima fool man ill leave em food dat mean dead fa all u niggaz dat dont kno i aint playn

  • I mainly party and play anthems like 'I love college', But please listen up as I attempt to drop some knowledge, waynes got tatts on his face and his eyelids, auto tune herb tryna brainwash my kids?, No Sir, Back in the nineties you were called a poser, Im closer than before to coming to grips with the fact I might remain poor, My daughter might grow up to be a whore, I done put in my work and gave back to the planet, Help me enlighten the rest of the world god dammit

  • Haters always bitchin at a new subject, they hate cause they've learned to resent, instead of accept, talkin down is there way to vent, Someone told me I could never fly, my reply, was simple never deny, what you have not achieved dare to dream, cause one day I'll fly so far they'll lose sight of me, truely free, spirtually and physicaly but most important mentally ,cause whats dollar if you dont spend it,  resent shit, like bling 40's and crack hits, big wheels shiny whips, I don't that shit

  • thanks man, although i like the lyrics, the instrumental is dope.

  • needlz production amen.

  • I love the Food & Liquor album. Kick/Push was the initial reason why I bought it, but this song is the reason I love it.

  • @freegobbiee So true

  • @freegobbiee

    so fuggin true!!!! I LUV THIS JOINT

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  • this beat is so heavenly and no one cuda done better on this track than lupe

    fnf up

  • please put the original version of the song and take off pompins mix... tooooo slow

  • thanks for upload and thanks for download link, peace man

  • No prob.

  • lupes lyrics to this song are some of the best ever. and why isnt it on youtube???

  • I.L.L............damne

  • now i aint the greatest..i used to hate hip hop, yeah but since then my game escalated/

    ..mind stay faded..way i black on a track, stay racist../

    these dudes music taste is tasteless..and each one of my breathes seem wasted,/ but since then my soul to the heavens been traded../

    im sayin godly..god gaurd me from the ungodly/ and then soon they'll be fond of me..

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  • that nigga rafael160 go sorry..raps is lame. He right, his breathes is wasted, look how these dudes dumbin him down like some anti Lu shit.

    smh at niggas who rap period and aint Lu

  • i like it

  • Ever since the third grade i've always had a sense of fear

    The only thing that would comprehend, ma ears

    stories of killing and murders, i'd always shed a tear

    look at me now sippin on belvadere

    I never thought it would happen but i've become a killer

    to everyone out there who thought they were iller

    what have i become a teenage jack the ripper

    yeah this is legendary this the michael jack thriller