MJ Fantasy: " The Man Next Door " Part 24

[MsRoneagle]

shit bout to go down michael is going top whipp cameron's ass

[MsChemicalEngineer]

@MsRoneagle no lie. I think Michek would have dine anything to protect his real relationship. He is so hot, what could Cameron have over him?

[msdogooder]

I think I went w/o breathing for the last 6 -7 minutes of the video. The ending with Michael was intense. Ana sure is a strong woman because after Michael sincere hurt and pleading, I probably wouldn't gotten weak and forgave him. Awww my poor Michael, I know it had to hurt him so much to see Cameron there :-(. These are some very raw emotions presented here. I'm almost speechless….almost!! I just have to say again BRAVO!! I am so happy I can head right on over to the next part, part 25 :-).

[snickerz345]

OMG I cant what for the mext part. You are such an great writer.... keep up the great work!!! :D

[amaloveable]

like i said before, you are such a good writer but i didnt mention this

you made me invision EVERYTHING!

you really should be a author!!!!! :D

[makenart]

Girl this is too damn good!! Please, please hurry up with next part, cuz it's really starting to get JUICY hunny. Here comes the DRAMA, and I luv it!!

[virgomoonbeam]

I loved this part so much,i had butterflies when Ana saw Michael outside.I hope they can work things out and i don't want a fight incase Michael gets hurt but sometimes you need to fight for the ones you love x x

[WifeofJackson]

Oh shiiiit. I hope it's not a fight. Well, Next part here I come.

[xxxangel777]

oh my god!!!!!! honey, this was amazing but you can´t stop here! ;-))) my heart stopped beating!

this was definitly one of your best chapters you´ve ever written ... maybe it was your best! you wrote about ana and michael sooo amazingly perfect! i was melting since the very first time michael appeared in the restaurant!!! omg....i hope the next part will be out soon! love it love it love it!!!

[DaizyfreeAG]

Wooo... THis makes me wanna cuss...

Like DAMN, SHIT, FUCK!!

(Sorry. I know I curse allot, I just need to get it all out... XD)

[DaizyfreeAG]

WHEN I SAW THAT IS WAS MICHAEL.... I WAS LIKE "OOHHH SHIT!!!" With my hand over my mouth, no lie...

OHHHH!!!! LETS GET IT ON!! WOO!

Damn... THis shit's like a fucking orgasam, I aint lyin'...

[XxPassionForMikeyxX]

Omg...im think im crying! Lol. Every emotion in this part i felt! Everything! I had butterflies in my stomach, and...well everything! Girl this is soooooo amazingly great!!! I sooo cant wait untill the next part, Ana needs Michael, and Michael needs Ana. :D I hope Mikey and Cameron dont start fist fighting :0 :L Draaama!! xD <3

[PAIDIA1]

I think im going to explore put im trying to be cool and im gona wait the next part before i DIE...this story is SO GOOD FOR WORDS...Johanna you make an amazing jop with this part...

[1mjjloverforever38]

Bless you for this gurl....This is tooo good for words!!!!!!! I need to know what happens next...so here's the thing, umma need you to get the next part out like NOW cuz somebody finna go to jail and or court up in this next one...MIKE. FINNA. GO. OFF!!!!! Then karen and her dad gone jump in it...aw hell yeah NEXT PART PLZ!!!!!!!

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@1mjjloverforever38 hahaha girl you got me hyped!!! lol I should have the next part in the next two days ;)

[cutup4488]

Brava chica! Ana has to be most hard-headed woman I've ever read about! :0 I know she has every right to be angry but Miss Thang needs to give it UP! Grease-ball Cameron has served his purpose and it's time to vamoose! I wanted Michael to smear the counter top with his face. Okay, rant over. I <3 U! L-O-V-E! xx Sara

[MONIELUVSMJ]

whoooooooooooo i did not see this one coming, but GREAT JOB girl!!! O___O

[NunuxoxoAngel]

So amazing baby! blaaah! everything is so complicated between them! this is so sad! but i know everything will work out some way! i will be definetely following this fantasy! this is absolutely fantastic! you put so much depth in this story! take your time tellin this story girl! forget the people who want you to rush it. that's not a good stry, or writer. take your time! your definetely doing that![: it makes it so much better! now i know what you mean![:

[jkool20]

I HATE CAMERON!! THE LIL SLIMEBALL COMING BETWEEN ANA AND MICHAEL!! :P

[iEsHaNjAyDeN09]

Aww ...I hope Ana gives him another chance..the baby situation was before her time. Cant wait for part 25!

[MJfanMega]

Ohhhh,maaan!

YOU'RE SOO GOOD!!

Just when you think they're a bit closer again, this happens!Ahhh!

But I'm happy Mike did not lie to her again this time...he learns from his mistakes, that's goood :)

Oh yeah and I didn't like Cameron from the beginnig...he's obviously conceited..Mikey needs to kick his cute little conceited ass! LOL :D

AMAZING!!! Can't wait 4 the next one!!!

[xTheTrueKingMJx]

Girl, you are UH.M.A.Z.I.N.GGGG!

Ahhh, why are u soo good?! :D

<333

[MononokeRose91]

gosh another intense chapter wow i liked Cameron at first but now hat hes getting all in Mikes face, im not so sure after all Mike puts every man to shame & girl stop apologizing for long chapters! i love them long!^^, gosh i wish there was some way those two could find some way to be together again but this is not my story and this stuff is real stuff lol makes me kinda nervous to be in a relationship O.O anyway girl im lovin it as usual keep up the good work oh dear i sense some drama ahead!

[MsChemicalEngineer]

Why do I sense that Cameron is gonna get his ass kicked by Michael? After all, I hate guys that gel there hair back...it looks cheap and common in my opinion!!! Have I told you you're the best Miss Thing? Can't wait to read the next part, which I see you've conveniently posted so I'll stop hounding you!!

[kelbellmjslover]

Oh my gosh Johanna Bravo girl Bravo.

[Jacksonbabe1OO]

okay....If Ana dont shut the hell up and run back in his arms...and if cameron dont shut the hell up imm back han his ass!!!!!! and if Michael dont get his girl back...i cag his ass!!! :)

[MichaelJacksonsLove2]

Oh. My. Gosh. This is amazing!! <3 And don't apologize for it being long, lol, the longer the better! :P

[ThePYT1991]

I am definately feeling their pain! I nearly broke down in front of my brother!

[23LiberianGirl]

Very good chapter Johanna ! I'm glad Michael and Ana finally saw each other, even if it wasn't going as Michael would like. Can't wait for next part !

[TullerJackson]

Oh god.. it's so intense! I can't wait for next part, Johanna!

OMG!

[likemeandonlyme]

i love this story...im looking forward to the next part...<33

[MyDude1995]

mobile :)

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@MyDude1995 I posted the mobile version.

[smileycurtis]

Mobile?

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@smileycurtis I posted the mobile version sweetie.

[MJluv4allTIME]

Mobile??

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@MJluv4allTIME I posted the mobile version sweetie.