I think this is definitley the best song entered for the contest. But the ending is very abrupt you should at least let the chord ring out. But other than that it's great...and works for what it was designed for. I think the other contestants forgot that it's supposed to be a theme song for a publishing company.
If you're going to cut the song off like that you should fade it out. It REALLY needs to be longer. At least another verse, and probably a repeat of the first verse. Very catchy! Good luck with the contest thingy!
Great! The only thing I would reccomend would be to lengthen the ending, as it seems like too short and abrupt an ending for the song. :D Very good, though!
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xeperfagyix 3 years ago 2
wikkid my selekta!
lets get a krinjah remix lol
audiblenugz 3 years ago
That was REALLY good!!!! You just need to make it longer, with like 3 verses! THAT would SELL!!!!
dragynheart13 3 years ago 2
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xeperfagyix 3 years ago
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hehe nice song :D
DanQc123 3 years ago
I love it so much!
LouiseCoylelive 3 years ago
Open your ears!
C0L0SS0 3 years ago
dude u fukin rock bitch!!
badchester212 3 years ago
I like this a lot. Actually I love this.
McDreamyloverforever 4 years ago 6
who sang this song?
or.. did u make this?
its awesome!!!
undead58 4 years ago 4
Please Men!
Do a music like this but more longuer :D
I WANNA :D!
ViruShimaPT 4 years ago 2
love your song keep it up.
kellkellkellie 4 years ago 3
killed it with mah happy hardcore remix lolz
organiczealot 4 years ago 2
OHh nice !! i like it !! u are gooood !
TheEvilumo 4 years ago
hey cool song! hope u win the contest thingie...ur such a cutie! xx lots of luck!
sexyvikki09 4 years ago
oooooo i like this! gr8 job!
reggaetonluver7 4 years ago 2
i have that one on my mp3 now :D yayy ^^
LiesxD 4 years ago
OMG I MISSED THAT SONG SO MUCH.
LOVE IT! I really hope you win<3!
LiesxD 4 years ago 4
what a lovely wee song :)
kizzerry 4 years ago 4
I think this is definitley the best song entered for the contest. But the ending is very abrupt you should at least let the chord ring out. But other than that it's great...and works for what it was designed for. I think the other contestants forgot that it's supposed to be a theme song for a publishing company.
ElGoodo 4 years ago 4
i love this vid!! hope u win!
coolmonkeypruduction 4 years ago 6
Wow! BMORE REMIX coming soon!
thabboy 4 years ago 2
Thanks Thoreau, we really like your song, too! Hooray for the key of C!
AntimacassarMusic 4 years ago 3
Oh what a pretty song!
WhisperingInsanity 4 years ago 3
wow, you look alot like my friend krinjah, but he's been m.i.a.
vinylfk 4 years ago
:o ............ :o
psychofreud 4 years ago
If you're going to cut the song off like that you should fade it out. It REALLY needs to be longer. At least another verse, and probably a repeat of the first verse. Very catchy! Good luck with the contest thingy!
DuncanWells 4 years ago
Great! The only thing I would reccomend would be to lengthen the ending, as it seems like too short and abrupt an ending for the song. :D Very good, though!
Camoen19 4 years ago
So CUTEEEE XD
MellieX 4 years ago 2
Such a cute video. (:
It made me smile (which is saying something because I had a crappy day).
buuuuuuudy 4 years ago 2
I loved that. Good voice. Just a guitar and a good voice, that´s all a good singer needs. Great. you will win.(hello from Germany)
scarclaudia 4 years ago 2
I agree! Awesome vid--I hope you win!
Also...you're a cute one, aren't you?
kidbillionaire 4 years ago 2
Good... and lovely !Congratulations! xD
SWEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!
maxita21 4 years ago 2
you're amazing, youre bound to win :)
Soccerxloser211 4 years ago
sweet!
gosk8petewentz2 4 years ago 3
Lovely song...love it! In fact, I would like to hoopdance to it. Hope you win.
MsBHoopingAllure 4 years ago
this one is gonna win!!
luvyouforever2007 4 years ago
quite nifty
NiftySwift01 4 years ago
Slick editing. Very nice voice too. The video is simple but artful. Cool fades at the end.
maximum kudos!
musicfilmjunkie 4 years ago
great song love your style great stuff
JJFRASERJJ 4 years ago
PĚKNÝÝÝÝÝÝÝ, BEAUTIFUL
honsova10 4 years ago
great song. 5/5
bascketball13 4 years ago
somone has real talent =)
dont do it for money do it for the soul
kalar76 4 years ago
this song is so cool!
myfriedme 4 years ago
this was so good! really sweet, & great editing work..
xeniastarchild 4 years ago
Omg. I love this!!
Wish it was longer, good luck!
5 stars.
PigletProof 4 years ago
Very inventive video and I like the song.
rhopen 4 years ago
i'll open my heart♥♥♥♥
cute song
newshew2 4 years ago
man thats great! 5/5 favourited
relex109 4 years ago
if u win the contest and u get to tour 3 states make sure u come to MA
RyChad 4 years ago
Heh, I thought this was the theme from Sonic Adventure, 'cause of the title.
BlueHedgehogTPT 4 years ago
5/5
dontfearthedark 4 years ago
I like it so much. I hope you'll win!
irlandesita 4 years ago
Good.
theM3X1CAN 4 years ago
i love it! you are awesome!
thevideogameskitter 4 years ago
I keep my fingers crossed for you! 5 stars!
Cranny71 4 years ago
sorry my inglish no god traslate in italy the your messag ok see yo
minivinni 4 years ago
I saw this off josh vanekelenburgs channel, I'm glad...this rocks! hope you win!
brownpaperbagzz 4 years ago
Well done. Vert pretty. 5 stars.
Cliffbrock 4 years ago
great song, great singer, so much talent...
you're a star :)
gingersnappcookie 4 years ago
i like it!!! :)
guitarslayer86 4 years ago
The tune is strikingly similar to "Last Kiss" written by Wayne Cochran in 1962. The bottom note slides up an octave in the original.
cmorgansing 4 years ago
great vocals..ur definatly gonna win!!
PUMALAW24 4 years ago
Nice Song. I Love The Words and Melody. Excellent Vocals. This is a winner.
wjr3013 4 years ago
Did you make this and edit it soly?
GaarahungryREBORN 4 years ago
oh..this song is good...
breenee16 4 years ago
Wow!
PengoTango 4 years ago
wow
randle448 4 years ago
^^ cool
AloneBlackWolf 4 years ago
like it
SummerFreak93 4 years ago
great song .love it
wizart49 4 years ago
He kinda looks like "Mr. Boston" from I Love New York on VH1.
giraffepoo 4 years ago
cool song..
tejaramone 4 years ago
great message & arrangement! keep on rockin!
luftspiegelung 4 years ago
Awesome~!
RupertLongbottom 4 years ago
YEAH! So Happy to have a great submission! Anyone else out there!
DreamTimePublishing 4 years ago
sweet song! and nice concept---from opening to close.
gingersnappcookie 4 years ago